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cddef No.1892[Reply]

I am a big fan of obesity-induced incontinence. From the weight of fat on the pelvic floor causing urine leakage to a trash diet leading to irritable bowels, it's a combination of fetishes I really enjoy. Any recommendations?

30f1c No.1894

do you enjoy game of thrones? cause there's a thread full of really really dodgy fan stories containing some of that stuff

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87a61 No.1921

bump

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2e66d No.1925

Humiliating, destructive, unintentional weight gain is a big turn-on for me. It's the central theme of the story I wrote, and it features prominently in all the stories I have sorted into my "favourites" collection.

https://riptoryx.deviantart.com/



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63b40 No.77[Reply]

Any have any of Sissyphustoy's stories? I just recently visited their deviant art and seems all of their stuff is gone. Considering their stories was the best wg stories I've read it would be a shame to have lost them all for all eternity.
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7f632 No.1258

>>77
is he dead?

f9db6 No.1868

Any Updates?

f9db6 No.1869

Any update?

5ac74 No.1899

Most likely dead



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376e7 No.1183[Reply]

Stories where the whole world or community or school is fat .male or female
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9c4a6 No.1586

Here one where woman work at plus size store and get each other fat. It called Voluptuous Ladies.
http://www.dimensionsmagazine.com/forums/showthread.php?t=41796

5b276 No.1587

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>>1183
Not exactly "world" of fatties, but I had the beginning of an idea for a community one, based on this pic and a discworld joke.

The pic made me think about fat sororities (and frats I guess), and I was thinking that most places where there are sororities there's usually more than one - for a "fat college" idea I started thinking up others - and as with anything where there's multiple groups, they usually have reputations and general themes as well.

The first one that came to me (stolen from UU's motto) was ΗΒΠ (eta beta pi) - if you say it in the right way that'd be "eat a better pie", which seems pretty fitting.

After confirming that some Greek Letter Organisations have 2 letters instead of 3, I also came up with ΣΠ (sigma pi) and MM (mu mu) - they were based more on names and meaning - sigma as a mathematical symbol, as in sum, or all - "all the pies", and mu mu is an easy homophone with "muumuu" - a dress that's quite associated with fat people.

Reputation-wise, as the thing that sparked the idea, I've assigned Sigma Alpha Tau as the most accepting, well-funded, largest and 2nd fattest of the sororities - fattest goes to Mu Mu, who I've also decided should be the newest - they're newcomers for the more extreme end of the fat scale, what with the recent rise in morbidly obese girls. Part of idea for Sigma Pi came from an old British football chant (Who ate all the pies?), so I figured they might be the closest thing to the sporty society - whether that's just competitiveness, but maybe there's some muscle under the fat as well. Eta Beta Pi I decided should be the nerds, and possibly quite elitist, being based on the venerable Unseen University's motto. That's not to say they're not just as capable of partying as the rest though, if anything being wealthy they might party even harder.

Now I'm not sure what to do with these ideas - maybe following some girls as they go through college and their sororities - slightly smaller snapshots, like "Sigma Pi, Junior Year", or maybe some kind of longer more continuous thing?
Breaking it up by girl, by sorority or by year, I don't know.
I'm a big fan of "gaining at college" themed stuff.
Possibly considering them as sororities at Stuffington U, tying it into the Buttercombe Academy canon.

5b276 No.1623

>>1558
Upsetting? That's a new one.

Unless you're upset you don't live it I guess…

58109 No.1644

>>1587
I had something similar but rather instead of fat sorieties, it's a world that has a fat fighting women's tournament (think battle K Road)

982e2 No.1898

Here's a town where all the women mysteriously fatten the longer they're there, it's a series that follows a newcomer as she blows up with fat while trying to figure why:

http://fav.me/d5vy84l



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853c2 No.1865[Reply]

My personal spark when it comes to writing has dipped a lot in the last years, because it feels like all the fatty fiction I write is just the same tired cliches and descriptions. Even when characters have different personalities and react to different situations, it all boils down to feeling like filler for the descriptions of weight gain and body shape.

I want to ask the /Elite/, what do you enjoy or try to include in your stories? Do you try to include any kind of theme/moral/higher narrative like you would in a more transitional story, or is everything up until the wank parts just there to pad it out?

6a993 No.1867

I feel you OP, as a writer I've sort of perceived one of my weaknesses as being about body descriptions. It's honestly one of my least favorite parts of writing in this line of work, especially if I'm working on a multi-part story or just a long series of stories (like the Shinji/Kaworu stuff), because I feel like it gets repetitive and I hate repeating myself.

So in that regard I focus on my strength, which I feel is story telling and being able to craft an engaging story and characters. That's honestly the best thing possible, because then it isn't boring. The worst kind of stories are those that just prattle off weights and statistics. Mollycoddles is one of my favorites because the Alice Saga is so engaging from a story perspective, you can really feel these characters and situations are real. Like maybe in some corn torn in Indiana this is actually happening.

I love realism, I love to think that my fantasy could actually happen in the right circumstances.

But I definitely feel where you're coming from, I get bored sometimes with writing my stuff, because it gets repetitive to me, trying to come up with descriptions of a fat woman's ass for the millionth time. So when I get bored I open commissions and I get a chance to step outside my box and do things I normally wouldn't do on my own, like animal TF stuff, and that in turn inspires me to come up with new ideas for my own work.

Very cool thread, love this sort of discussion.

b5fb5 No.1870

>>1867
By the way, did you delete a bunch of your stories recently or am I just retarded?

5e5fc No.1871

>>1870
Yeah, I cleaned house a bit.

853c2 No.1873

>>1867

Exactly, that's the feeling I try to get out of stories when I read or write them. If I just wanted a fat description, I'd look at a picture instead and be done with it. I love that stories can do more with that though.

Funny enough, the night after I made this post I was thunderstruck with inspiration. While it is a fanfiction idea, the gist was that a character that is a trickster sees someone troubled about their weight, being not even a little bit bloated, and causes that person to expand over the course of time in order to secretly bully her.

By the end of it, the bully character will have grown attached to her victim, and start to feel bad about tormenting her over her size. It would create a conflict over her desire to tell the truth against the fear of repercussions, and she'd be forced to grow as a person because of it.

Even though magic and fantasy are taking place in it, I feel like the realism of the emotions, if done right, can take precedence over real life connections.

And of course, the victim is going to get into embarrassing and sexy fatty situations, as per the status quo.

2c1d6 No.1883

>>1865
I think there needs to be a balance - but focusing around weight gain and chubby characters is essential. There are a million works of incredible literature that I haven't got around to reading yet. The reason I'm reading stories online instead of them is because they offer me one thing that actual literature can't; a focus on weight gain.
If a writer shoves that to the background and spends most of their time writing plot, then I may as well just be reading one of the far greater real life books out there.

That said, I know what you mean. Sometimes writing feels like endless copy-pasted descriptions of how much fatter her stomach was, how much wider her hips were, and on and on ad infinitum. There needs to be a balance between plot and descriptions, because too much of either is boring.



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08e4f No.1557[Reply]

Do you like stories about slob girls?
Put them here !!
P.S; The story is not mine and the one who wrote it no longer uploads material.

https://coryninjamaster.deviantart.com/art/Tokyo-slob-girls-part-1-409256164

https://coryninjamaster.deviantart.com/art/AKIS-FULL-DIAPER-Tokyo-slob-girls-side-story-1-411476400

3e0dd No.1584

http://thewallowingweeb.deviantart.com/gallery/ Kind of a shameless plug for my deviantart, but I have a story I commissioned someone else to do. I'm in the middle of writing my first story myself, and I plan to make more once I'm done with it.

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acf49 No.1880

>>1557
Yall better mention me in this mutha fucken thread

snotbowst1991.deviantart.com

945d5 No.1881

>>1880
You have consistently been a good writer, when you write less absurd the better. Good shit

70aae No.1882

>>1881
I need to ask…what do you mean by "less absurd"m



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b6467 No.1546[Reply]

I donn't know where to post this so I'm posting it here. There was this weight gain story that I read years ago about a girl that was sent to a very old victorian boarding school by her unknowing parents. After the school year started she noticed that every subject was in one way or another related to food and all the girls in the school (it was a girl only school) were encouriged to eat as much as possible. She refused to eat and story ended on sort of cliffhanger when she was dragged in a room in which they take girls that refuse to eat or rebell in other ways. Story takes place in relatively modern times and if it helps it was on a very 90's looking website with black backgroung and white text. I've been trying to find it for years, if nothing just to read a second part (if it exists at all) but all my searches have prooven futile.

e9734 No.1878

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bfee5 No.1107[Reply]

Hi,
I've started writing a WG story that I've been planning for a long time and which I intend to be around full book-length. It contains themes of slob, BDSM, F/F, and probably more in the future.
(I have 13000 words right now at 4 chapters, with at least 15 more planned out). I've been on a long hiatus from writing stuff for a while, so I would appreciate any feedback, suggestions, or requests!

http://iceblazethequick.deviantart.com/art/Blossoming-Rose-663039982
http://iceblazethequick.deviantart.com/art/Blossoming-Rose-Part-2-663042045
http://iceblazethequick.deviantart.com/art/Blossoming-Rose-Part-3-668135847
http://iceblazethequick.deviantart.com/art/Blossoming-Rose-Part-4-676181281

(Chapter 4 are when things start to pick up, the first 3 are a lot of setup.)
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130d5 No.1738

I don't like his entitled passive aggressiveness, rubs me the wrong way. "A concerned fan." Fuck off with that shit. It's not even a matter of defending the author either, he's a big boy, he handled it well.

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7352d No.1740

>>1738
For one thing, it's two different people. he was "A very concerned fan". If you're gonna get mad, get it right.

>>1735
I don't think anyone here wants you to stop writing the way you're writing, my concern is more the fact that you haven't labeled each chapter, making it hard to 'skip over' sections we don't like. It would be amazing if you added them :)

7352d No.1741

>>1733
I think the reason this started was because he didn't want there to be any shit :^)

1649e No.1824

https://iceblazethequick.deviantart.com/art/Blossoming-Rose-part-8-702079580

New chapter; I'm planning on doing a little timeskip next chapter, so if you're reading this then please let me know what you want more of! I'll try and centerthe next chapter around whatever seems to be the most popular theme.



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d34d1 No.1687[Reply]

I've been on something of a Lovecraft/Cosmic Horror kick lately, and I started to wonder of there's ever been something like that attempted with WG/Expansion fiction. Does anybody have any examples they think would work? It doesn't even need to be grim and despairing, just the trappings of cosmic horror literature used to justify ridiculous expansion.
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560bc No.1702

>>1698
Yep, those illustrations are where I found it too. I find weight gain as a horrific, negative thing for the protagonist to be pretty tantalizing in it's own right but that's probably because I'm a fucked up bastard.

I've always found Saxxxon's casual, dry approach to mass murder and cannibalization pretty unsettling. But I'm not really a fan of those types of stories or his writing to begin with. He seems to write his characters exactly the same every time, even when it's an established character with a personality.

You remember what that story was called? Interested for curiosities sake.

d8417 No.1712

>>1702
To be quite honest, I'm rather bored of Saxxon's stories for that same reason. That, and selfishness is a huge turn-off for me, so when his planet/reality devouring women are literally the heights of living selfishness it ribs me of any enjoyment I might have.
The Toad Witch story is "Mother of Toads," a 1937 short story by Clark Ashton Smith. You can read it in the Darkhorse Book of Witchcraft anthology https://www.amazon.com/Dark-Horse-Book-Witchcraft/dp/1593071086

d8417 No.1805

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I've still been thinking about this, and given the lack of comments or examples I'm fairly certain there isn't much or anything out there that is a worthwhile read.

Since that's the case, would anybody be willing to workshop ideas? I think it would be interesting exploring a story where the woman is the primary viewpoint character, even despite the weight gain/transformation involved, since rarely if ever is a woman the main character in a Lovecraftian/Cosmic Horror story.

Just to start off, here's an idea that I've been mulling over on and off for almost a decade now: Somehow, a fairly regular, but devoutly religious woman, is kidnapped by a strange cult. In a strange, pagan-like ritual, she is offered up as a sacrifice to some ancient nature spirit, which she is able to see physically manifest presumably due to the hallucinogens being burned as incense by the cult.

Right as the spirit reaches out to her, the police arrive, having monitored the cult for some time, led by a paranormal investigator who is able to save her by attacking the apparition.

Usually, the story would end right here, the victim saved, the evil cult stopped. But instead it would continue, focusing on the woman, how she deals with the PTSD of her experience, how it manifests in stress eating and gaining a bit of weight. That's all find and good, but as she gains she starts seeing supernatural creatures.

They keep their distance from her, some even appearing in her dreams and urging her to eat more. Gain more. Whispering secrets of the cosmos, her dreams becoming visions of almost prophetic portents, herself transforming into first a monstrous, then divine creature.

As this is going on, the heroine becomes even more stressed out. Because of her deeply religious convictions, she fears the idea of becoming a goddess, because to her it is the ultimate blasphemy to her faith. Yet the stress from that adds to her stress eating, making her body resemble ancient fertility goddess idols.

All the while her body starts exhibiting other change as well. The Nature Spirit she had encountered was distinctly moth-like. After certain blackouts where she has visions of the spirit, she starts having tattoos on her body that resemble wings. Her body hair starts growing, until she develops a mane of hair and thick yet soft "fur" all along her body.
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e58d4 No.1808

>>1805

Well I think you're really onto a great idea with this. I'd love to read a story like that.

1fd71 No.1817

>>1805
not really "Lovecraftian", nor is it "Cosmic Horror" but still an interesting Idea.



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038f3 No.1594[Reply]

anyone got any decent game of thrones weight gain fics, was able to fins this one, kinda weird at some bits http://soapmw3.deviantart.com/art/Game-of-Thrones-The-war-of-the-Fat-queens-616703692
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9b1ea No.1743

>>1716
Why does her face look like Willem Dafoe's?

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96cbb No.1769

>>1768
Jesus Christ

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