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f18ad No.1500[Reply]

Aloha everyone, how's it hanging? I really want to break into this kind of writing, but I honestly don't know where to begin. Do you fine individuals have any babby's first pointers for a total newfag? When I do actually start putting out content, I'll be sure to share it here.

7644b No.1503

>>1500
Hullo there.
The main rule, if there is one, is to write what you want to read. A lot of us write because there's so little of what we want to see - this is a very niche niche after all.
There's really not a lot differentiating this sort of writing from any other sort of erotica, from a mechanical perspective. Make a character you like, think of a storyline that sounds fun, then just give it a shot - just like anything else.
Aim low to start with; I know that when I started off I always wanted to write 50,000-word epics spanning years, but that sort of thing always falls through. Try writing a single scene or day in a character's life, and move up from there.

If there's anything more specific you need advice on, feel free to ask - those are the basics of the basics though.

bbb2c No.1530

>>1503
Same



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a4d3d No.1322[Reply]


Hey all, I tried writing a thing at like 4 in the morning, and I was wondering if you could tear into it and tell me what I need to improve. I did my best to pick up any spelling and grammar issues before submission.
http://daktamagnee.deviantart.com/art/Come-To-Bed-681495638

Also, if the past-present tense thing is weird, it's cos I messed it up mid story.

Cheers
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2e571 No.1388

>>1386
Is that a good thing or…?

2e571 No.1425

Okay, how about some actual critique instead?

6d978 No.1426

>>1384
This is really well written! Plus glad to see some Dark Souls fats story. Please, keep it up! Maybe add a little more dialogue or inner monologue, but it's great so far!

6184f No.1431

>>1386
The fat soul, seeped in the blood of many, traversed the abyss to bring itself to a worthy wielder. Was this fate? Or perhaps the machinations of a more sinister foe…

42fae No.1472

http://batgirl-fatgirl.deviantart.com/art/The-X-Files-WG-Adephagia-Episode-1-687532808

Hey if we're doing general critiques I'd love to get some feedback on this. I tried really hard to abide by the structure of your regular monster of the week X-Files episode and keep the rapport of Mulder and Scully, no idea if I was successful or not.



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8d12a No.1442[Reply]

Hi Elite,

Does anyone know where the Meet The Neighbours cream stuffing loli story went? It's dissapeared.

Also
>itt: Stories you feel guilty after nutting to

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a18d8 No.1433[Reply]

so basically i understand everything i need to it is a literature choice based games most items are interactive she gains weight based on food and objects respond based on her weight if so far she has a sister named rosie and i want her to be her feeder but i what the story to go much further figured you guys could help

a18d8 No.1434

sorry for grammar mistakes i'm pretty excited i got over 2 major hurdles in the creative process in 1 day

a18d8 No.1435

SOME QUESTIONS THAT NEED ANSWERS
1. what is the maximum size she should be
2. other players
3. why does she gain weight
4. is she embarrassed by it
5. does she make other people gain too
*5 is it by being near her or is she making her friends gain
LETS BUILD A GOOD STORY

9989b No.1438

WG in fiction mainly has one (or more) of three natures; plot device, characterisation device and theme. There's not that much special about WG lit other than that.
Thematic WG is obviously what bbwchan's interested in the most, but the other two are also pretty useful/important and what I generally look for when working out if I like something or not.

It's cool to explore the effect WG might have on a person's nature, or how their view/reaction to WG may reflect their persona. Like any characterisation device, a good wg lit should add to characterisation but unless they're a RABID ASS GAINER (yes, they do exist but jfc are they rare and scary af irl) it shouldn't be their sole driving force and their life shouldn't revolve around wg alone.

WG can also be part of the plot, but people really screw this up all the time and again, making the whole story just about WG is unnatural and one-dimensional. Like any other plot device it gets boring if overused, especially if left on its own. There should be other plot elements around for it to interact with.

Just like any story, you need to work out the who/what/where/when/how. WG can be tacked-on pretty easily to almost any story, as the writing.com peeps can attest, lol.


So yeah. tl;dr strip out wg, think about a decent story and characters without WG, then ask yourself how it would affect it

9989b No.1439

also, I recommend looking at the Weight Gaming forum if you haven't already. Don't be afraid to start an idea topic here:
http://www.weightgaming.com/forum/index.php?board=5.0

fb3fb No.1440

ANSWERS TO YOUR QUESTIONS
1. what is the maximum size she should be?

I say go for Immobility as a maximum, with it being her little sister's ultimate fetish. This is essentially the point of no return and could even be seen as bad situation for the MC as she is basically forced to keep gaining and be her sister's play thing.

2. other players? Maybe a chubby best friend, a girl who the MC does kind of like, but is unsure about how to feel about her. If you do have the MC fatten others up, you could have this friend be a clue that the MC does enjoy girls with more weight on them, she just didn't know it.


3. why does she gain weight?

I say ignorance at first, she unknowingly gains weight due to her sister's machinations. When she finds out you could have the little sister blackmail her into gaining weight and be her feedee, thus forcing her to gain weight.


4. is she embarrassed by it?

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0f72d No.1335[Reply]

Anyone have any good suggestions for accounts of real life weight gains? I'm inspired after reading this:

http://www.savvymom.ca/article/gained-weight-daughter/

c8b4a No.1345

These are varied, but some of them are gold!
http://www.freshman15.com/weight-gain-stories/
This one is best one, imo, she REALLY loses all control of her gluttony and blows up huge:
http://www.freshman15.com/weight-gain-stories/freshman-15-gained-overnight.php

1c6f3 No.1375

>>1345
i find that story hard to believe. why would some accidentally let themselves go that much???

a14f0 No.1383

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89ea5 No.1395

Can someone pls work on claire indulges with mom

4a846 No.1396

I would like to see more activity on Madison's Freshman 15 story. For me, it's by far the best WG story on Writing.com, and it has tons of diferent lines quite interesting.
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1911783-Madisons-Freshman-15
Take a look! ;)

8b72f No.1397

>>1391
Great so far, though agreed with others that I feel Mel needs to start puttin on some weight

5600b No.1403

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A'ight, so we have three suggestions for Mel gaining weight- any ideas on how to implement this beyond "THEN MEL GOT FATTER BECAUSE OF FOOD"

Weight gain writing is fun, believe me, but in Bobo's very character/story heavy interactive, I like to have more reason behind it than just "and then Mel was magically fatter and that's all we talked about.

Like, yes, Kate is a great cook and that's fun to write about, but like, at the moment, the story is pretty heavily focused on this old roomie drama/ Mel actually being somewhat active for once.

Any fun ideas on how to implement more weight gain? I'm just spitballin' here, people.

0048e No.1406

>>1403
There's still Mel becoming a guinea pig for science.

You could also have Mel start caring about school (her grades are probably pretty low) which could cause stress-related weight gain.

Another idea is to have some event that makes her go full hermit, causing her to pile on the pounds.



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ff8b1 No.1330[Reply]

There was a thread of his stories on the last site, I'm specifically looking for a story about Poison Ivy, Harley Quinn, and Catwoman.
Dragon Age story: https://www.docdroid.net/3X2eubT/dragon-age.docx.html


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1b12f No.1137[Reply]

Hey guys, I'm writing an interactive weight gain story, I thought you might enjoy.

I used to really love writing.com but they stopped letting free users create stories, plus they're plastered with ads and slow page loads, so I'm hosting my own site. I'd love it if someone else wanted to add a chapter, but it's fine if you'd just like to read what I've written.

In any case, here's the link. I'd love some feedback and suggestions for the story or the site.

http://ohweight.getenjoyment.net/mckayla/

c41c6 No.1157

Link doesn't work

97183 No.1178

>>1157
work on my machine(tm) here

32c82 No.1211

Wasn't working for me earlier but I'm glad I checked back. What's there so far is really good.



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154d9 No.3[Reply]

Let's try to drum up some discussion for a new board. Favorite stories, stories that do it for you, that you read over and over again and that never gets old. I have a few.

When I got into weight gain fiction a favorite writer of mine was Zarbon, who has since disappeared from the scene, but these three I continue to go back to.

Dan & Steph
http://www.angelfire.com/weird2/mcoddles/steph.html

Claire, one and two,
http://www.dimensionsmagazine.com/Weight_Room/stories/claire1.html
http://www.dimensionsmagazine.com/Weight_Room/stories/claire2.html
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ba365 No.979

>>970
thanks a ton, anon!

cb349 No.1023

There was a story about a girl who moved in next door and was really fat and had to drop out of school called "The Girl Next Door". There was another one about a girl I think named Peggy. Last one was two girls in a shopping mall.

548c9 No.1032

>>1023
The first one can be found at the dimensions magazine site:
http://www.dimensionsmagazine.com/Weight_Room/stories/girl_next_door.html

98ece No.1203

Bump



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80ec6 No.650[Reply]

Inspired by one of the ones I found through here, anyone know of any good stories that combine either of these:

Weight gain + pregnancy or weight gain + alcohol/drugs.

Weight gain + pregnancy + alcohol/drugs also interesting.
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68b7c No.1171

Fucking hell son. This has to be one of the most obnoxious and pretentious posts I've read on this site. Congratulations my friend.

3a723 No.1172

>>1160
Maybe you would have received a better reception in the moral depraved thread. At least being a sick fuck is expected there.

0b0c7 No.1174

>>1160
This post is much worse than your dumb kink

d6de8 No.1176

>>1174
Really? I think his kink is disgusting and deplorable, but I agree with his point. It's just fap-fiction, guys. We have a thread dedicated to lolis (that I frequent), if that shit was real a whole bunch of us would be incarcerated, with good reason, but it's not.

If none of you wanna write it, cool, but let the dude like what he likes.

c31e1 No.1180

>>1176
He can be free to fap to abortions for all I care, but he's coming off as a whiny little cunt, that's what's causing all this.



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