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8a07c No.181[View All]

The fact that we had a "Reverse Health Issues" thread made me realize that we didn't actually have one for the non-reverse, so here's one. Post the most disgusting literature you can find.

To start, here's Mollycoddle's Vivian James WG story, ripped off of Kindle by some other anon from the old board. http://pastebin.com/t5qNy2jc
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aa6a5 No.1560

Aparently someone made a short story about the health issues of a robofatty over in /trash/. Strange, but really cool.

https://pastebin.com/MhE0DHye

1d438 No.1563

>>1560
That's pretty awesome. I'm not crazy into robots but the slob and obesity factors really sold it.

76589 No.1580


acbea No.1583

>>1580
You did! I quite liked it. A bit iffy on the timeline and some typos, but good job.

76589 No.1634

> Mcoddles will often tempt you with possible heart issues in the Alice series
> Will probably never do a piece on health issues ever again after the Vivian story being so controversial.

Sigh. Such a shame that one of the best writers for WG fiction won't touch it beyond Alice and the gang getting out of breath is kinda sad. Would absolutely love to see him do a spin off piece about a school nurse doing a check up and finding out about Lauries finally getting some unhealthy punishments, but keeping it from her to promote diversity in size, before she becomes an immobile wheezing wreck on oxygen who frequently gets chest pains. Would be a perfect way to show a comeuppance to the bitchy Laurie as she finally deals with negatives of gaining weight.

fc4d6 No.1639

>>1634
I never read too much of Mollycoddles's stuff, what happened in the Vivian story?

721c6 No.1640

>>1634

I'm not opposed to writing stories with more health issues, though I wouldn't really be comfortable doing anything too extreme with the Alice characters (I'm too attached to them to be THAT mean to them lol). But if there's a demand, I might do some more short stories detailing health problems.

e3fcc No.1641

>>1639
Vivian story is the one linked in the thread starter, here for reference (http://pastebin.com/t5qNy2jc). In the deviantart that he teased it, there were some people worrying about how extreme it would be. I think that Molly occasionally focuses on really mild stuff in Alice (out of breath, standing to long ect.) but is a little hesitant to go any further, although Molly has said that they will try again if their in the right mindset, which is somewhat reassuring, but i personally think that they don't want to touch the topic again, something I can understand

Hot idea by the other guy tough…

e3fcc No.1642

Snotbowst1991 doesn't write stories anymore, but he did make a short POV piece about ssbbw health issues which was pretty sweet. http://snotbowst1991.tumblr.com/post/163563907626/ive-been-gaining-like-a-good-piggy-however-i

e3fcc No.1643

>>1640
Hi Molly! Guess I can understand that perspective, after spending literally years writing even a somewhat evil character, it can even be hard to write a spin off with such devastating consequences, and I can't imagine the outcry from your fan base. But it is a quickly growing niche and I think a story or series of pieces on it would easily be enough to gain some support. Not sure it it would be just for patrons or for normal deviantart, but that's for you to decide.

What ever approach you take with it, Have fun writing!

P.S. That last Alice chapter was amazing!

721c6 No.1645

>>1643

Thank you very much for the kind words! A health problem story would be an interesting challenge. I guess my big question for those people who are into that sort of thing: Is it better to end the story with a character's death or is that too far?

c77b5 No.1646

>>1645

Ultimately it will vary from individual to individual, but I think it comes down to the character and the story. I personally believe that once health issues are involved, all bets are off and you can go as far as you want to. But you can make a story without death as dark or even darker than one with death, however the choice is yours to make. Wether it be about a fat modle who takes everything too far, a HAES advocate who ends up with an awfully ironic fate or a greedy nurse who can't even see her own problems, there are tonnes of ways to take it and just as many ways to cover it, so don't feel to limited or restricted in what you have to write. And considering that it is so rare, you could start the bandwagon and inspire other stories about the topic.

Ultimately this is probably kinda pointless advice, I'm just an up and coming writer and your probably the communities most famous writer, but I assure you that anything you write will be more than welcomed by the community.

ab3ab No.1647

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>>1645
It's all a matter of how you handle it–and, I suppose, how long you want the story to be. If you want to have a long story about a woman's deteriorating health, then death is a good way to end it. Think of "Emma" further up the thread. Or, if not death, then something almost as bad, like a stroke.

On the other hand, if it's a shorter story, just a peek into this obese and unhealthy woman's life, then it might seem a little abrupt to kill her off so soon after we've gotten to know her. It would probably be better with a shorter story to focus on the health issues an obese woman deals with before mortality kicks in, stuff like hypertension, diabetes, high blood pressure, and general unfitness.

Ultimately, like >>1646 says, it's up to you, and depends on what you're in the mood for.

b3b4d No.1656

>>1642
I write stories. Just very fuckin slowly thank you very much.

I'll be done with Welfare Princess 5 in 2030.

e3fcc No.1718


acbea No.1753

Anyone have a pastebin or archive copy of a certain deviantart story that may have been removed? Vague description, but she's immobile in her own home, has a girlfriend that has a scar from abuse, came from an Italian family, considers calling her mother to beg for WLS surgery, and ends up being rolled on her side to use a bedpan. Odd details I know, but I honestly can't remember the blob girl's name.

e3fcc No.1756

>>1753
Not at all odd. That would be FC-Punk's 'Out of Control': https://fc-punk.deviantart.com/art/Out-of-Control-445413173

39bc0 No.1770

Alex

My love has just passed 150 pounds for the first time ever! I'm so proud of my tiny girl. Seeing her grow after all we have been through is one of the greatest joys I have every experienced in my life. She makes my world, without her kindness and support I would have never found love. Seeing her take pride in her swelling form is the hottest thing I have ever seen. She wears old t-shirts that fit 20lbs ago, she barely notices her rolls hanging over her waistband. When she really gets to stuffing, her belly pokes out really far pushing her shirt up; and her pants are always tight even though they are stretch. It's no problem seeing her fat dimpled thighs and booty softly wiggle with all the treats and carbs she eats. I can barely take my eyes off of my girl. She looks amazing and thoughts of our future keep filling my head. Then she looks up sweetly and for a snack.
She stuffs her belly and maneuvers her tight wet pussy on top of me and lowers her soft little body onto me.

We are settled in out log cabin in the mountains. Alex has been moving less and less since she passed 650 pounds but she loves life with me and it never takes food off her mind. In fact she has been wanting more and more food; daily, but not just regular stuff. Lots of take out, burgers, fries, milk shakes and sugary sodas are her favorite. My Alex rarely deviates from her strictly regimented high fat, sugar and greasy diet. I love her so much and I'll do anything for her. Even though we know its taking its toll on her tiny frame. I’m always thinking about my morbidly I obese love. Since she got so big Alex has been really short of breath even between single sentences. We both know how much stress her body is under. She became immobile at 600lbs. Which is a huge amount of fat for a girl only 5’2. Taking care of her is the most special part of my life and I would never give it up for the world.
I wake up in the morning next to my beautiful woman. I see her huge chest rising and falling, a good sign. I snuggle up next to her, grabbing her massive fat rolls, I nestle my body into her luscious heavy blubber. she says “Good morning.… baby. Can you please..… make me bacon, ham….puff*….. and eggs?” it is my pleasure. As I am getting ready Alex sits up slowly, catching her breath once she’s upright and turns on the TV.
I bring my love a breakfast fit for the queen she is. She puts away 8,000 calories in just less than an hour. After her normal meal, we are snuggling, like we always do after meals. I am playing with my loves fat; she is getting really turned on, her heart is pounding, I can tell as she becomes breathless panting hard as I massage her body. she is jiggling her fat squirming under her massive weight, when “nghhh!” Alex lurches forward. I ask “Baby! Are you okay? whats wrong?” she says “…guhh… babe, it hurrrrtss…rngh!…I….Need more… food” I say “of course. anything for you, as much as you can eat. My love” I make out with my beautiful, struggling girl. Then get ice cream cake and chocolate moose and watch her stuff the discomfort away. “Thank…huff*…..you” she says rubbing her chest and fondling her belly. She winks at me and tell me to crawl under her helpless body and make her feel like all her hard work is appreciated.
I crawl under and start sucking on her supple pussy, she starts moaning. I love to hear my big girl enjoy me. I rub her fat, stuffed pussy, faster and faster as she begs for me to keep going. Im going fast against her bloated clitoris, she gushes into my mouth with a sexy high pitch, I’m drowned in hot sweet cum.

My beloved Lexi is growing very fast, which is not surprising considering she eats for five people every meal. At 29 her little body is packed so full of blubber. She loves eating and letting me suck on her pussy while she gorges. Both sensations make her insatiable. She just likes to stuff her belly full and watch me smile while I rub her soft heavy rolls. We weighed her a while ago, she came in at almost 1,000 pounds! She was so happy and excited to almost be at half a ton; it was surreal for me to watch my once very small girlfriend swell into my beautiful humongous woman. She is the love of my life.

Alex is definitely over the the half ton mark by now, only three months after her weigh in she looks so much more massive, and bloated. She has been eating non-stop for weeks now. After 12 breakfast sandwiches filled with greasy bacon and lots of cheese my baby wanted lunch. She ordered so many hamburgers, she devoured 12 double bacon cheese burgers with extra cheese, I was stunned, she smiles at me and motions for me to come to her. We hold each other close and kiss passionately with our tongues caressing each other; like we do everyday, she seems to be squirming rubbing her belly. I ask “Alex are you ok?” She’s is panting hard “I don’t feel well at all, my love, more fast food should make it ok.” I get back quickly with a dozen more double burgers with extra cheese, just how she likes, she then starts gorging on her fast food while I rub and caress her massive body.

She packs the rest of her dozen double bacon cheese burgers into her belly, I rub and jiggly her bloated sensitive belly. she starts moaning. She’s rubbing her body and holding her fat rolls delicately. “Baby….huff*… something is wrong” She’s moaning and grunting, then “hhrrn!” she grabs her belly in pain. She tells me to get her into position for me to make love to her. All the while I know my love it having serious trouble. Her breathing is hard and ragged, her face is red, she tells me to get inside her, fast. I slide into my big girl and she gasps, grabbing her belly tightly. I love watching her shutter as she enjoys my hard cock, but this time is different. “Baby…I need you to…HRRG!…give me…huff*…CPR…my love… if i don’t….make it.” i say “Of course my love, ill save you” I kiss her passionately. Alex cums once and then soon a second time and then a third gushing climax. Im pumping into my fat girl, jiggling her overstuffed body. She holds me close, into her soft blubbery body. She starts to moan harder, she pulls my head to her chest, i can hear her heart pounding like a drum through her thick blubber “Ohhh….puff*…….hrrghh!….ooouch!…..wheeze*……OUCH!….HNnng!…puff*…puff*….puff*…..nnnggh!…Huhhh….I…huff*….love….hgggnnn!….you…huff…babyyyy!…oh god…puff*……” She looks like she is having really bad chest pains. My love keeps gripping her fat boobs moaning in pain as she stairs deep into my eyes. I get worried but she tells me to keep fucking her. “my love..I don’t know…puff*… how much longer…puff*… Ill last…finish in me…baby…” She reaches over and shoves fist full of cake into her mouth, to stuff the discomfort away. It was the sexiest thing I had ever seen. She is ravenously shoving the cake into her mouth, getting into a good rhythm as I continue fucking her. “thank goodness…huff*… i was worried there…huff*…” she continues gorging feeling better after the sugar hits her. She packs the cake into her mouth with both hands. Moaning with eat hefty swallow. I love my big glutton. Suddenly, one hand grips her fatty chest “OH GOD….huff*….baby….puff*…..huff*…it hurts…..hufff*….really… HGGNN… bad….” and the other reaches to my head pulling me in close. She says “Baby…huff*….….puff*…..I..…hhhrrngg!….huuhhh….puff*…I….wheeze*…..want you….huff*….. to finish….hufff*…. in me… hufffff*..… baby……puffffffffff*…..………ACKKGG!!.……” She is staring deep into my eyes as I fill her tight pussy with hot cum. Alex clenches onto me looking at me wide eyed.

1bc89 No.1771

>>1770
Pretty decent. But I would had liked to see a bit more of the transition between 150 and 650. Kind of a big gap there.

e3fcc No.1772

>>1770
Good start, especially with the early health scares. Would still like to see more written about an earlier period. Perhaps her at a young age working out and almost having a heart attack, maybe ignoring doctors advice, maybe more about her explicitly either enjoying her size, or gaining in spite of it.

e3fcc No.1773

Of the three choices presented, what do you prefer

1: A character who actively enjoys getting more unhealthy and out of shape and gains to accelerate the issues she receives, as she enjoys them. ("Oh honey, today I was walking down the street and my breathing really was really hard as I felt my heart pump through clogged arteries, It was so exciting and such a turn on!")

2. A character who is gaining and is largely either apathetic or neutral to the risks and issues gaining presents. (As she thought about the coming feast, her mind went woozy as it processed the concept f stuffing even more food. Her breathing became ragged as her body tried to -and failed to- cope with her greed. She clutched her chest at her heart flippant band wheezed herself back to calm. "That was weird, probably just shock. Now back to food".)

3. Someone who is fat and somewhat either against the side affects, or being fat period dealing with issues. ("As she strolled down the mall, she couldn't help but notice her laboured breathing. Every wheeze was accompanied with a groan as she was reminded of her overburdened size and how she had to fight it, but as her mind raced with thoughts about how she wished she was thin, her heart raced even faster. Exercising was only possible when you weren't wheezing and almost collapsing but she still was determined to get thin. The girl rested against the wall as she wheezed herself to a calm. "Oh god. I'm so out of shape, I need to change this now" The thought of being this fat for any longer made her sick to her stomach as even a short walk almost reduced her to a collapse. She thought if she continued any longer, she would end up immobile…or worse! But until then, that local Dunkin' Donuts looked pretty good.)

6738d No.1775

>>1773
3>2>1, by me. Characters who are fully aware that they're stumbling towards the edge but lack the willpower to stop themselves are the best.
That said, all three scenarios could be fun if executed well.

39bc0 No.1780

Thank you for your advice everyone. This is very helpful for developing my writing.

a8b3c No.1786

2 > 1 > 3 but also depends on the authors style

9e939 No.1787

>>1773
3 > 2 > 1 for sure. Unwanted lard is great.

bd5e4 No.1789

>>1773
3 > 2 > 1
The more unwilling, the better

5b42c No.1793

1 is my favorite, then 2 is in second. 3 doesn't really get a place on the list, I pretty much just cannot read anything that's like that and enjoy it.

I know this is an unpopular opinion, but I think this has a lot to do with the fact that I'm fantasizing about being on a different side of these things than you guys are.

I wish that I could like… checkpoint reality or something, I want to eat myself to death but I don't want to be dead at the end of it.

63d1c No.1794

You ever notice most of these stories will feature (aside from the standard unfitness thing) heart problems, might tread softly with diabetes, or will include slob aspects (which doesn't necessarily have to be part of the Health Issue scthick.) Sometimes they might include all those at once!

But I've noticed that a lot of these stories tend to avoid cancer. Obesity is a leading cause of cancer. Is that the line we're not going to cross?

Personally I'm not about to write it anytime soon, but it's just something I've observed. We gotta keep these stories fresh somehow, don't want it to get boring.

af031 No.1796

>>1773

3 > 2 >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1

I like things on the dark side where the idea around fats is entirely put into action by a forceful dominant as the oh-so common cringe scenario of a character waking up one day and 'hue i wuntz to be fut today for no particular reason' (1) is far too unbelievable and only really panders to a younger, more cute and cuddly, fluffy bunny type audience which I'm most certainly not so 3 suits me the best. 2 can still work but it'd be more of how they'd dubiously put up with it as a package of something else like to avoid crippling hunger which again ought be due to circumstances set in motion by a dominant.

6738d No.1797

>>1794
Cancer just isn't inherently linked to weight gain in my mind like diabetes or heart troubles is. Plus, it's just such a miserable affliction.

>>1796
Although I agree with you on a general basis, I think sometimes scenario 1 can be done without necessarily being all cute-and-cuddly and unrealistic. I don't want to self-advertise but I wrote a story recently along such lines that I definitely wouldn't call fluffy-bunny -
https://mashuky.deviantart.com/art/The-Morbid-Obesity-of-Melanie-Bridges-700864799
I do agree that the idea of somebody wanting to get unhealthily fat is requires quite some suspension of disbelief - though they do exist, such people are very rare.

6738d No.1799

>>1793
I suppose it depends a lot on which side of the equation you imagine yourself on.

af031 No.1800

>>1797

I didn't mean it to sound overly passive aggressive but eh… internet heh. Full consenting and intentional gaining also just has a rather vanilla feel to it to me… Shedding some taboos gives a lot more potential oomph to it and at that a stronger sense of sex; another thing that literally gets some more blood pumping! I realize DA doesn't technically allow such sauciness but that ain't gonna stop me from dreaming otherwise!

6738d No.1801

>>1800
Well, I was mostly agreeing with you. I just think that even scenario 1 can be taboo and dark under certain circumstances. A character so depraved that they are willingly killing themself in the pursuit of gluttony - that's hardly vanilla, by my reckoning.

af031 No.1802

>>1801

But let's not forget it's not a competition ha, preferences are preferences! The scarcity of content regarding my preference probably bolsters my desire of it all the more!

6738d No.1803

>>1802
Yes, I know. I'm just trying to demonstrate to you that an approach that you think is dull and lacks darkness doesn't necessarily have to be so. Don't write off a story JUST because it contains intentional gain, is what I'm saying - it may be just as morbid and non-vanilla as any story about unwilling gain.

c16cc No.1804

>>1797
Damn, great short piece! Would you consider a followup? With how manipulative our young girl is, I think she does deserve a bit of punishment.

6738d No.1806

>>1804
Thank you! I did consider a follow-up, but I'm not entirely sure where I could go with one.

c16cc No.1807

>>1806
Before her next meetup with her mother, Melanie's issues of mobility have become a recurring factor and her health is getting even worse. During one of her fastenings, Melanie is seen having even more severe issues when her mother walks in and tries to convince her one last time. Melanie has to try and poorly hide her issues and is reminded of how much of a strain gaining has put on her young body. Even as she is nearly having a heart attack and trying to poorly hide it, she still don't back down and asks her mother to feed her one last time, sort of a final bonding ritual in the months or so before she leaves. Melanie's mother realises the severity of her issues, and decides that in order to keep her here and maybe stand a chance of her loosing weight, she has to make her worse. If she gets in an even worse condition in her mothers mind (Mobility, getting sick while eating, loosing friends, heart issues) then maybe she will consider turning back. So it becomes a race, between Melanie making herself as glutenous as possible for her own fantasies, and her mother trying to accelerate her to a point too far where she might turn around. I'll leave it there if you want to come up with your own ideas, but what do you think?

5b42c No.1812

>>1799

That's why I don't enjoy a lot of the weirder end of fat fetish stuff, either shitty writing or the good writers tend to lean super hard on misery. For some reason making the girls dumb is also really popular.

I wanna be a smart fat blob who's actively trying to clog her heart up sometimes, dang it.

f53a0 No.1838

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FA and his GF are going at it until suddenly, she has a heart attack. Fast forward a few days later, GF has a choice. She can either lose the fat (something FA boyfriend would not be happy about) or risk dying. However, a doctor offers another option to replace her heart with a mechanical one, allowing her to grow fatter. This sets her down the road of essentially replacing most of her organs with machines as she grows fatter and fatter.

Got the idea after watching Crank 2, what do you degenerates think?

d1361 No.1845

https://marman804.deviantart.com/art/Your-Successor-Prolog-703079132 Short but very interesting story and he make new chapter every day. Cant wait to see what will happen next

289bc No.1854

>>1640
I know this is a bit late and Molly might not see this, but I think Laurie is the perfect target for health issues. Let me explain. Laurie' character revolves around the idea of her being a fit cheerleader corrupted by gluttony who finds the idea so enticing that she eventually finds it a kink. Her identity becomes focused on her conflict between wanting to remain thin and loving gluttony. Not only that but she has been the meanest and cruelest of the theee girls. Now she also is getting even freakier as she gets even fatter, first finding stuffing fun, then erotic, then gaining weight hot, then other fatties hot.

Now let's add in health issues.

I would see them being introduced either in a private setting with frank, or with the other girls. Wait her during feedie sex, Laurie would start to have chest pains and frank would notice, or during a meal, Laurie would get/talk about the struggles with her size health wise. In the former, we not only play into the humiliation with frank, but we also add onto the conflicting identity of Laurie as she beguine to enjoy the mockery, even as the danger it reveals. In the latter, Laurie not only grows closer to the other girls, but might find her health issues a turn on. If with the other girls, we not only get the other girls perspective, but we see Laurie possible fall more into gluttony and Alice stabilise more into doubt. The scene with them eating and having/talking about health issues could end with something like 'And as the three girls finished their double scoop cone, Alice could help but shutter at the thought of what this gluttony could lead to, Laurie could help but moan as she thought about how enticing this weight and the consequences would be and Jen could help but wonder why there were three scoops instead of two'. Such a moment would solidify Laurie as growing even freaked as well, as she has through the entire series. Her first finding stuffing hot, then weight gain, then other fat people and now even her own downsides which to some would be worrisome and dangerous, but to her are erotic would solidify the position her character has taken.

Thoughts?

c16cc No.1857

>>1854
Oooh, Laurie getting more and more freaky while getting her just deserts. Plus that could get more severe issues into the story without making the story depressing. I Like the idea.

49568 No.1866

>>1838
Sounds pretty damn good man

fc4d6 No.1872

>>1845
English doesn't seem to be the author's native language.
Either that, or they need a proof reader badly.

f7d53 No.1874

>>1872
The guy is polish according to his DA page.

c16cc No.1885

>>1854
I know this idea is dark and Molly has said that she only want's a few issues and struggles in the Alice series, but I think this would work out. Laurie needs some more punishment for her greed and her exploits with the gift of a mobility scooter from Alice and Jen will accelerate her gain and make excessive much more of a struggle for her. Plus in Alice 56 when Laurie first had heart issues, she does seem surprised by it, but quickly becomes excited by the feast 'It started as a moan of pain, but quickly morphed into a moan of arousal as visions of the feast to come overpowered Laurie’s fear'. This seems to show that Laurie is surprised by it and unaware of her dangerous size, which could play a role in her finding it quite appealing when she does learn about the health issues, especially considering most of Laurie's identity has been surrounded by her conflict of getting into more and more kinky and fetishy behaviour, which could easily climax in her finding the direct morbidity of her gain arrousing.

a346a No.2322

It's been a few months, does anybody have anything? I've got this to offer: https://tintrue.deviantart.com/art/700-Words-of-Hell-REALLY-MESSED-UP-NSFL-693482257

7bb9d No.2834


a5ca3 No.2836

"Downward Trend" has a long weight gain progression that leads into various health problems for the main gal near the end.
https://www.deviantart.com/kowlooner/art/Downward-Trend-Part-1-WG-511039393



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