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No lunch break again Anonymous 07/04/2018 (Wed) 22:37:53 No. 24881
This feather shit is so stupid, so they get smaller the more less atractive you are to society leading to vapid soicety where everyones social status is on public display. And they disapeer after your like 30 also so it makes absolutly no sense why you wouldnt just get rid of them from the get go. I would personally find the feather concept more appealing if they changed based of how the person thought of themselves, but this is just cynical and ill contrieved.
>>And they disapeer after your like 30
What?
The art on this page is kinda sloppy… Look at the dude's face, or the palm trees. I realize they're secondary details but they stand out in a very bad way.
>>24885
I think the feathers have potential, as a way to showcase the character's opinion of themselves and also to add an extra layer of humiliation onto things. But, as you said, they're not used well at all. As you said they should be based on internal thoughts, rather than external opinion. Why are Sara's feathers staying the same, when to an outsider she's just as pudgy as the other three. Random strangers aren't going to know she's been losing weight. Think how much hotter this scene would be if Sydney noticed that Sara's feathers have gotten more pronounced, while hers had dwindled.
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>>24892
So it actually says you start to lose them at 30 but they will be gone no matter what at 50.
>>24893
That's not what it says at all. Why the fuck does everyone have such shit reading comprehension nowadays?
>>24893

It says the feathers will always start to recede by age 50, not that they will be completely gone by then. Presumably this is meant to represent societies view of older people and their value but plenty of old people occupy positions of immense power so it doesn't make sense for it to be a hard truth.

I guess this is some sort of kink for Kip where everyone has a label placed on them they literally cannot alter that shows societies view of them. It really doesn't even make sense though, even from a fantasy biology perspective, sine cultural values aren't a biological trait. Crossing a border to a different nation can have you subjected to entirely different values so how are the feather's supposed to react to that.

…picking at this idea is the most enjoyment I've gotten out of this comic in ages TBH
>>24909
iirc, the feathers are affected by people near you, so I'd assume that you'd lose all your feathers if you travel a lot.
Of course, that brings up more questions, so I'm not sure if that's what Kip was going for. Either way, it's weird.
I don't even care about the feathers and think they're very strange, I wish Kip would focus on bellies. :(
>>24893
>giving this much of a shit about details

man this place sometimes.
>>24920

If we're not supposed to care then why should those details be in the comic in the first place?
>>24909
It's a good idea with a shitty execution, just like No Lunch Break
This trainwreck is being saved by one thing, Fina.
From Kippu's patreon:

>So here's a sort of an update.


>I feel like I'm slowly getting over the worst creation pains, I'm feeling somewhat motivated and I'm getting some perspective on my own art. Not having to stress about the schedule has helped also, so while I haven't actually had a break it's been good to focus on other things for a change.


>The new inking style for pages has actually helped me create a more satisfying workflow and while I'm not confident I can make it look as good as some pages where I've had the luxury of taking my time to make the lineart as smooth as possible (pg 88, 105 for example) I feel like it has the potential to be almost as good with fraction of the time. So I'll keep working on it.


>Thanks to everyone for your support and sticking with me through the hard times! I promise to do my best to deliver in the future, even with dry seasons like this.
>dA hugbox my friends upset because it's not a nice "fat is the new thin XDD" world like every other dA fanfic
Sasuga
>>24978
Could you try that again in English please?
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>>24979
I'm assuming this is what was meant…? Only took a simple googling
>>24979
It's something along the lines of "As I expected" or "As expected".
>>25004
>>25024
No I meant, "dA hugbox my friends upset because it's not a nice 'fat is the new thin XDD' world like every other dA fanfic." What did he mean by this? Who's upset?
>>25027
I guess on his close associate is ribbing him on the fact that he actually made people make fun of fatties in his comic like they would in real life. In many weight gain comics a persons weight is usually ignored by the background characters for the most part.
Is that a motherfucking kipteitei reference?
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>>24881
>>25052

>dance lessons


Please, for the love of God, tell me these will be Belly-Dancing lessons.

Despite what I would have thought would be an obviously good combination, there is shockingly little art combining big bellies with Belly-Dancing.

Please tell me Kip is going to try his hand at it.
>>25089

You'll find that a large chunk of (regular, not sporadic) belly dance practitioners are at least a little bit chubs, if not downright fat. The reason for this has something to do with center of gravity, hypnotic jiggling, sensuality/femininity, and huge abdominal and back muscles behind the varying amounts of fat. Indian culture is certainly fascinating.
>>25089
>>25096

Check out this new thread with ssbbw belly dancing >>25115
>>25089

Hmmm … kinda … well … is it Yamato ?? Amagi perhaps??
Anybody pledging Kip at $5 that can post the “4K HD fats” pic just uploaded?
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>>25143

Sydney, if not the other girls as well, are going to get stuck in that slide on their way down, Homer Simpson style.

Calling it now.
>>25146
Pretty safe bet, this comic isn't original after all
>>25143
Are they at a spa or a water park?
Maybe next comic kip will hire a writer who can write a compelling plot.
>>25143
Tina actually looks really cute there!
>>25149
TBF there' only so any scenarios a weight gain/ stuffing comic can have, after that its just variations of the same few concepts
That's not exactly a bad thing. I'm a fan of stuckage and embarrassment, so either she gets stuck and makes a scene an everyone laughs, or she gets stuck and her goth friend gets her hand all over that butt pushing her out. Both sound hot to me.
>>25149
That or loss of swimsuit on the way down!
>>25171
She did just mention how good the swimsuit looks would be a shame if something happened to it
Sydney losing her suit and Tina needing to go down the slide to push her fat ass our because she's stuck would hit way too many fetish points for me.
>>25224
>pending lewdness at end of slide
>>25224
Here's a question for you guys, do you think Sydney will gain any more, or do you think her weight will remain the same? I imagine Kip is in a bind right now, since the plot's momentum is on Sydney still gaining, but we all know she's already about Kip's max preferred size.
>>25227
That’s why there’s so many different girls tho, Sydney can blob out, Tina will be a slow burn, Fina will probably stay the same, and the chubby one will either keep losing weight or just stay with a bit of pudge.
>>25227
I just wanna see her get stuffed while this big, along with Fina and Tina
>>25228
I really do hope the chubby one will lose all the pudge and go on to be the one who teases all the others. Role and weight reversal is like my biggest kink.
Do you guys remember when there was hints Sydney would be a pear shape? Why have four characters if they're all going to be the same body shape.
>>25399
Kip doesn't like pear body shapes, and it's pretty retarded to have 4 identical girls with no personality whatsoever
People keep forgetting that Kip isn’t trying to make some simple 2-paged weight gain comic. She’s trying to do something more than that which is good. This will motivate other artist and show them that this is possible. Which will provide more content for us consumers. So please stop hate-fapping, it’s pathetic.
>>25399
But they don't, Fiina is waay more pear-shaped than the rest, Sydney has the biggest gut,Tina has a starter belly and Sara is just mildly fat now… I just hope Kip can keep Fiina's hips as wide as it was when she was reintroduced…
>>25399
kip is literally only into one body type and shape. People complain about certain artists and same face, but Kip really goes above and beyond.
>>25402
go away Kip
>>25402

But its not good. Its paced horribly. If other artists did this it would suck because then there would be more people stretching their content over months. Longform comics and kinks just don't work well together most of the time.

I mean maybe this will be a good read when its finally done but will it have been worth years of time and content on Kip's part? No.
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>that fucking water-slide
>>25402
kips gonna make ANOTHER shitty comic where the poorly written characters all lez out at the end with slightly swollen stomachs? gosh, how interesting and revolutionary. cant wait to see what THEY'LL do next!
>>25235
I hope she doesn't, because her character design is the only one of the main four that I really like. The glasses, long hair, and chub are a great combination.
I hope this water park plot wraps up soon so we can have a 3 month arc focusing soely on the retarded rat girl. Let's get this comic back on track Kip!
>>25518
expected: she gets stuck
unexpected: we're not spending ten pages on it.
>>25519
that's comes later…

or so to say when we see 3 pages of Sydney get horny over how it felt, Tina figuring out how she is going to be able to keep legitimately doing it to Sydney and 4 of them fumbling around to actually doing it.

so you're not far off.
>>25518
waiting patiently for the fart edit
>>25518
Nice ass shots
they must've both did a 180° rotation to be face first which is obviously impossible.
>>25522
Well I legitimately find that stuff sexy so…
>>25529
TBF she did get flipped over in the last page, so points to Kip for actually keeping it consistent
>>25518
Luckily you did not get stuck while deciding to slide down the other way around!!!!! Fat lady.

Because this could quickly turn into a nightmare at worst (drowning form water) and painful at best (getting hit in the face).
>>25518
ass2face is pleasing

this page is very confusing though
>>25518

Both Sydney and Tina got really lucky here.

Depending on the their orientation in the tube, the level of stuckness and speed they were sliding, Sydney could have very easily come close to drowning and Tina could have broken her neck.
>>25522
>>25519

Decompressing events into extensive panels or even pages is OK in a fetish comic, so long as that decompression is being used to provide more material related to the fetish the comic is about, i.e. more of what the reader is reading the comic for in the first place. More shots of sexy girls with big bellies in a comic that is supposed to be about sexy girls with big bellies isn't a bad thing.

The problem is when Kip dedicates numerous pages (which for those reading pages as they are released translates to months at a time) to developing plot-points that as a story aren't that good, the reader doesn't care about, or ultimately end up going nowhere.

That was one of the major problems with the progression of both Lunch and Dinner with Sister. Granted, Kip redeemed himself in this aspect in LwS/DwS by having those droughts of content merely come before and in-between some god-tier cheesecake. However, the fatigue his fans began feeling became extremely apparent at several points, and this was made all the more frustrating when Kip put DwS on indefinite hiatus immediately after we FINALLY got to a glut of the good stuff everyone had been waiting for.

It's not a sin to be mediocre, or even bad, at writing.
It's not a sin to want to include some plot with your fetish comic. That's a tried and true way to make things more interesting.
But if BOTH those previous points are true, it's important to realistically temper your ambitions based on what you know you are and are not skilled at.
When the content people want is being lessened so that you can increase the amount of content people don't want/don't care about, it's inevitable people are going to get salty.
>>25546
nobody in this thread is Kip's target audience.

His Patrons are.

If you fucking pay, give him this feed back, otherwise keep it moving cause he aint interested in critique from leeches.
>>25547
There's really nothing wrong with people critiquing the comic in a contained thread on bbwchan. Ultimately it's your choice whether you want to participate in this thread or not.

Kip has the same choice, and that's why he doesn't come here anymore.
>>25518
>notable drop in quality
>the second there's anything actually substantial
fucking incredible
>>25401

Where has Kip said they don't like pear shape? Just wonderin
>>25547
>implying paying customers don't come here for the lulz
>>25560
They don't have to say it, you can see it just by looking at their art.
>>25560
>>25569
Kip DID actually say it a couple years ago in a journal. I remember it, they said that while they don't dislike that body type, the only one they prefer is the slim w/ large belly sort of type… which is why every single character besides Kip (because she's fat) and Fiina look like that
>>25551

Wait, did Kip himself previously come HERE for direct interaction?
>>25585
Yes, Kip used to read these threads, but at a certain point decided that the criticism here became unreasonable.
>>25585
used to do very drunk too, lol he was quite entertaining.
>>25595
It's kind of sad that things like that never happen anymore with the way the site is now.

I've been browsing these stupid threads for two-plus years now, and I never saw Kip actually post.

How many years ago was it when bbwchan was actually fun?
"It was just too predictable"

is this a bbw-chan reference?
>>25609
Normally I really like the pages, but have the past two felt kind of rushed to anyone else? Like the line quality seems to have taken a dip.
>>25611
I think Kip said something about the pages taking up too much time for other art. It's still pretty good imo.
>>25609
Shit quality aside, I like the pace of this page
>>25604
it wasn't, lol. i've been coming here for 5-10 years, it's always been like this. when kip used to come round it wasn't any better. nor were these threads. actually the site as a whole has been at a high the last two or three years
>>25667
It's all over. Sydney's too big for kip now. This comic will be abandoned by the end of the year.
>>25667
those eyes
Why is Sydney so huge wtf she's almost bigger than DWS kip
>>25734
Something tells me it wasn't necessarily the fact that DWS Kip was so fat, rather that Kip ran out of ideas/wanted to get back at fans for not liking anything besides WG in a WG comic.

Do like the details on Sydney's feathers though, at the very least Kip is keeping the whole feather loss thing consistent
>>25734
When did Sydney get so big?
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>>25742
>shitty edit made me get a boner from this shitty comic for the first time
>>25737
>Kip ran out of ideas
Didn't stop him from making NLB heyo!
>>25742 I wish there was more edit like this
>>25753
Did Kip even have ideas to begin with? We're at page 145 (that's a third of Watchman's total page count) and I still have no earthly clue what the plot of this novel is supposed to be, beyond the MC getting fat. I'm not opposed to blending fatness and story, but Kip really needs a co-writer on this, or focus on much smaller and better defined stories (say 20 pages a story or something).
>>25757
It has always felt like a rage drunken attempt to make DWS fans suck a dick because "HE COULD WRITE A GOOD STORY ALONE", then the rat thing happened
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>>25667
>>25734

>Bellydancing Lessons confirmed

Yes. YES. The prophecies were true.

Thank God. I was worried we'd be deprived of this.

Kip, do not mess this up you crazy, wonderful bastard.
>>25737
It clearly wasn't, I don't know who keeps perpetuating the meme of "kip was too big lol"
>>25769
Yeah, what kind of idiot would perpetuate something as baseless as that?
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>>25782
>>25776
This comic will be dead before the end of the year
>>25783
Along with kips.
RIP in pie, buddy.
Y'all being over dramatic. We have lots of other characters at other stages of body weight. Relax.
>>25794
She went from Late stage obesity to slightly chubby in one page.
Good meme Kip
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>>25799

what a thrill
>>25799
She's succing in?
>>25906
Is it just me or does the art on this page look really terrible? Like noticeably worse than what it was before Kip decided to put less effort into each page. The proportions are noticeably screwed up.

Also, it seems Kip wants to have the girl losing weight to both be in a position of power in the group, but then they go around and publicly humiliate her like all the other girls, making her exactly the same as all the others again.
>>25916
Everybody always says that the newest page looks worse than the last one. At some point it's just gonna be stick figures.
>>25906
Im glad Kip kept Fina's tiny boobs and HUGE hips, its nice to have a super pear shaped fatty. Especially seeing as how kip usually draws one type of body fat in his stories.
>>25782
Sheeeeit, I didn't even notice how huge he made her. He even drew sydney with fat arms even though she supposed to only be bloated or whatever excuse he uses... I guess its time to quite NLB on a cliff hanger and start another multi year project that he wont finish...
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>>25963
Touch the cow.
Do it now.
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>>25963
> Those fucking hands in panel 3
>>25977
I know right, I wouldn't mind the rushed / lesser quality art if kip did more than 2 pages a week. Most manga artists can d at least 5-18 a week and american artists can do roughly 30 a month. Kip only does about 8 a month. Granted I don't how much time heshe spends on other projects...
Bro, you’re forgetting that a lot of manga and comic book artists have to sacrifice the idea of a social life. Kip isn’t a professional and she has a life outside of drawing lol
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>>25997
>almost 4k on patreon
>8 pages a month and some illustrations, and most of the time everything is rushed
dude.
>>26008
>>25999
As someone who's normally 100% vocally against this LGBTQQTAPY+-== shit, I'm fucking tired of it coming up every kip thread. For the love of god, just give it a fucking rest.
>>25997

you're forgetting that artists typically hire assistants to help them out

from what i've seen, doing just one of these a week (let alone two) really seems to take a toll on you
>>25997
Just curious is there anything you people would actually criticize kip about
>>26098
Overall too full of themselves, pretentious, arrogant, and obnoxious. Their work is always half-assed, their writing is what a 4th grader should be striving for. On a positive note, they're good at drawing porn, when not rushed.
>>26098
Kip is in very talented artist. If they just did pinups or maybe ten (or less) paged comics I could see them as many people's favorite fat artist on here.

The issues arise in two areas, one major and one more minor. The major one is that Kip seems to harbor this belief (or maybe ambition) of being an amazing writer. Unfortunately this isn't the case, leaving 'stories' that are plodding, vague, unfocused, filled with unlikable characters, and generally uninteresting beyond a few scenes within those stories that could've just been a short series on its own without all the fluff it's stuck in.

The other issue normally wouldn't be a problem, but Kip seems to only like one body type, chubby with an enormous belly. If Kip did any of the other stuff I mentioned then I don't think people would care as much, but because these stories are so slow it creates this effect where it feels like no progress (or very slow progress) is being made in the character's weight gain, despite it seemingly being the focus of the story. Plus it also ends up reaching a point where the character gets too big, Kip gets bored, and then this story that took months and months to reach a point where it's starting to heat up for people is suddenly abandoned.
>>26120
Man does anyone remember when NLB was supposed to end at 100 pages... But anyway kip is at least trying to have different body types this time, i.e Fiina is the closest to true Pear that i've ever see heshe draw. But yeah his un-rushed art is good but man can he drag out a story. Also if he drew more than 8 pages a month that would really help too, im not saying heshe need to go all Oda on us and only sleep 2 hours a day, but a maybe even 3 pages would help the story not feel as slow...
>>26127
Just my opinion, but having a patreon might actually be worse for kip's art as a whole because of the *pressure* to keep 1000+ patrons happy at the speed / timing / content / style of the art coming out. Think if this was olden times and Kip just had one BIG patron that paid their entirely monthly allowance for art. Kip would know exactly what that ONE person wants, likes, expects, etc. But instead, they must *try* to cater to multiple people and the result is... this.
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wtf is going on
>>26149
Kip loves drawing fatties being bullied.
>>26149
I was thinking actually how similar these two scenes are. But yeah, I anticipate that by the end of the year Kip will have grown sick of NLB and abandoned it. Also comparing these side by side, you can see how much Kip's art quality has degraded with this new rushed pace they've instituted. The one on the right from DWS is still amazingly hot, while the proportions and such for NLB are really poorly done and screwed up.
>>26149
I have to say without a shadow of a doubt, that Breakfast with Sister looks 10 times better than No Lunch Break
>>26152
>>26149
Oh my god just shut the fuck up already. FFS
>>26151
I think it's less the quality of the art and more the coloring, compare that page to the grace shower one and it looks really flat and would have been better mono imo
>>26126
>It can't be helped
I didn't realize Kip was translating these from the original Nihongo
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Autistic shits complaining. We're here for a wank eh not fucking art debate
>>26154
I really like NLB but I think BWS series was better as a fetish comic so far. Maybe this will end great tho.
>>26165
Oh my fucking god would you just shut the fuck up already? Literally every time a page is posted the same shit is posted. We get it. You don't like the comic. Don't read it then.
>>26186
>STOP! STOP CRITICIZING MY VIRTUAL FRIEND! NO BAD THOUGHT NO BAD FEEL EVER! NICE NICE NICE ALL THE TIME

What did he mean by this?
>>26167
You damn right, dude. The majority here we're just for wanking
>>26191
I'm sorry, it must be difficult for you living with autism

He legit just said "Don't like don't read" and you spaz out like the fucking autist you are.
>>26168
Unnecessary criticism aside, I honestly think the NLB is is still one of the better weight gain art one can find. I don't really care for hentai, but 80% of weight gain comics over 10 pages are normally just that. Kip hits the balance of erotic but too explicit that I like. Not mention ,barring the rushed art, Kip also consistently draws attractive fat girls well. Its not soo realistic that it looks disgusting(to me I don't like slob type art) but with enough anatomy that they dont look uncanny. I honestly don't even really read most of the dialogue when I reread Kips work when I want to wank I just kinda skip to the good parts.
>>26151
Sydney's proportions look a lot better than Kip's in that pic IMO. Kip's butt and hips look awful in that picture. Her torso is so long with tiny arms and head attached to body at a strange angle. She looks like some kind of weird giantess. I agree that the DWS page looks less rushed though. But as you can see by the drawing of Kat, Kip's drawings of skinny girls have always looked like afterthoughts.

Is it supposed to look like Sydney is grabbing the dance instructor's crotch? Lol
>>26212
Agreed, the old one has flaws too, just different ones. Frankly, Kip has never had the most consistent quality.

Which was even mentioned in an old FAQ:
https://www.deviantart.com/kipteitei/art/Breakfast-With-Sister-FAQ-1-560816127

Which is why I think it's funny when people act like this is something new to NLB. It's always been the biggest downfall of their work, imo, and switching to doing 2 pages a week hasn't improved things.

But hey, at least we are getting some decent bellies nowadays at the very least.
can you autists quit your screeching!? You virtue signalling cucks are worse than the SJWs. Quit bitching about gender, if you don't like it don't put your dick in it. And you art fags need to STFU, if I wanted to hear autists bitching about art I'd go to starbucks and ask someone qualified to complain. I'm literally THIS close to just going straight to deviant art next time I got my dick in my hand.
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>>26219
>autist is too autistic to scroll passed comments from autists autistically screeching so begins to autistically screech.
>>26194
Oh my fucking god would you just shut the fuck up already? Literally every time a critique is posted the same shit is posted. We get it. You don't like negativity. Don't read it then.
>>26219
>Quit bitching about gender
Agreed, the real redpill is realizing that Kip may not even be human. That would explain the awful dialogue and attempts at humour as well.
>>26219

>can you autists quit your screeching!?

Says the guy making faggy, passive-aggressive posts for whining.
Maybe you should go to Tumblr next time instead of deviant.
>>26242
Oh my fucking god would you just shut the fuck up already? Literally every time a critique is posted the same shit is posted. We get it. You don't like negativity. Don't read it then.
>>26278
How can one know a negative comment before reading it, though?
ya know I posted the comparison picture and I wasn't commenting on the art at all... just the fact that it was the exact same scene. don't lump me in
>>26210
Completely agree with you. Respect for anyone willing to try and write a narrative with this stuff, it has to be tough getting flack from both detractors and fans because there is no paved pathway to make a "successful" comic like this I think. I'm just here for the ride and some qt fatties
Why are all of Teiai's employees women?
>>26283
I don't know, how can one know a shitty comic before reading it?
>>26389
They're not even at the company, they're at a spa.
>>26389
can't believe i'm fucking defending kip, but they're not ALL women, the dude fina had a crush on cleary wasn't a women and he works there

As for why you don't see men in kips comics he admited to suck at drawing them so he doesn't, probably preferes f/f relationships anyway artist draw what they like.
Someone's got quite the temper.
>>26486
How long can this go on
>>26486
Well you can't just suddenly lift up someone's shirt you just met...
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>>26487
H O W L O N G C A N T H I S G O O N?
>>26493
Cringe
>>26493
One is enough.
This whole spa arc felt like a chore, this page was pretty good though
>>26585
I really like how they are all varying degrees of fat now.
Tina has to have the best gut at this point, and more stomach rumbling is always a good thing
Sara better be the thin and fit one by the end of this, if this ever gets to the end.
brrraaappp poster, where are you?
>>26585

great page
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Okay folks, the show is over, move along! (Somehow I don't feel surprised)
>>26661

On the contrary, it is building up for a 4 girl buffet binge...I hope.

Question is, are we gonna get 10 pages of filler bullshit before we see it?
>>26661
pfff how abrupt. it was just getting really good. does kip even have this fetish, really?
>>26661
he'll draw like 75 panels of someone noticing sydney's belly and her being embarrassed about it and then like 2 of the actual action. it's really getting tedious at this point
>>26665
For some people that is the action.
>>26666
yeah, but it's obviously meant to be somewhat teasing here and is only paced so just to keep you waiting for something to actually happen. kip always seems to leave things half finished only to be teased more in the next page or just skipped entirely like here. makes it seem like he never has a coherent plan for the scenes to begin with
>>26337
The artist threw away all the shitty parts of the old comic and is recreating it with new material in between the old parts. When there will be realization of more fuckovers, this project will be scrapped and recreated as a new one. Really when you think about it, Grace was the best part of the BWS serie and she's back in this one.

In half a dozen iterations, expect Grace and Tinas to be the hot lesbian couple, Sidney the comic relief and Sara the fit bossy archnemesis. Kat will be back and happily married with Fina, and sexy fish milf will make a cameo. Kip will forever be remembered as an horrifyingly misshapen blob and as the only female character to not ever reappear since the BWS serie.
>>26665
I agree with your first point but your second point is debatable. Except drawing half a dozen new angles of the characters dancing, there isn't much else to add here story or fetish wise. Also we didn't see Sidney eat anything in more than thirty pages, and you can expect the weight gain crowd to wait for something else than dance lessons by now.
>>26671
we didn't even get to see the bigger girls sway and shake around or anything. the whole scene was just preparation with some belly fondling and then the actual dancing was like half a page. and then it just stopped. idk, i was actually pretty hyped for this part since i love bellydancing bbw but right now i just feel blueballed
>>26661
Nice, a buffet scene in a WG comic where half of the characters aren't hungry
>>26673
he seriously writes this like he doesn't even have a wg fetish. like where is this even going outside of more passive-aggressive lesbian stuff they could've done anywhere?
>>26672
That's a bit much to ask at this point. the artist would 100% screw the anatomy, these kind of poses need a lot of practice to draw right.

>>26674
The story will turn to shit if all the characters become active gainers. Gotta make choices here.
>>26683
other artists have already done similar stuff that looks great. i'm just saying it was a lot of buildup for an execution that was barely there


..but all the characters ARE gaining.
>>26687
>k ima draw a part where they bellydance
>*20 pages of buildup later*
>wait fuck i just remembered i cant draw bellydancing
>>26663
Yeah, and when it's starting to get promising soon they all say "Wtf are we doing, it's late. Let's go sleeping" and we jump to next chapter.
>>26661
I hated the belly dancing part because it was so poorly executed, so I'm glad it's finally over. The buffet scene better be good or this comic is good as dead.
>>26672
Yeah it seemed to end so abruptly. Compare it to the measuring tape scene from DWS. It was just more fanservice-y and the girl measuring and fondling her had an actual personality and a somewhat specific character design.
>>26687
Sara is losing. Tina isn't an active gainer at this point although she did gain. The two others are pigging out.
>>26664
Given how effective it is to fake shit just for the sake of chiseling out some sort of niche popularity on the internet, I would not be surprised.
>>26664
Since Kip was already drawing at least pot-bellied women before they created their the fetish account where the comics are posted, they definitely at least have a thing for that size. Whether they are that big on weight gain rather than just the power dynamics and bloat of stuffing might be an open question, though.
>>26763

I've read that Kip had a non-fetish account before making Kipteitei but I could never find the name. Does anybody know it's called/if it's even still open?
>>26764
I just checked and the account is closed. However, I am not revealing the username since googling it also revealed other results and I feel like Kip has a right to privacy from Chan lurkers outside their persona as Kip.
>>26763
i think he has a really specific kink for strangers rubbing embarrassed women's potbellies. anything else is just fanservice
Hi
>Men again
Ruined.
>>26764
jarezed
>not posting the recent page
YA CANT BEE SRS
>>26807
The hands in this comic are slowly turning into deformed hooves
>>26813
Hands and feet are the hardest thing for most artist without practice to draw.
>>26813
Side mouth garbage halp
>>26813
I reiterate my earlier post >>25977
Idk why but I enjoyed this page way too much
>>26883
>I can't believe that Bryce prefers Van Fiina's gut to mine.
I find that the artwork of recent has been extremely rushed.
>>26883
someone's been watching Lupin III
>>26907 Rare footage of Goemon actually laughing.
The stuffing scene where upon don't see then girl eat
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>>26936

What.
>>26955
Fucking autocorrect

It was "the stuffing scene where u don't see the girl eat".

Sydney is off for more food, but they're too busy with this guys bullshit that you never saw her eat the first lot. As a WG comic where the lead into the scene was Sydney thinking about eating a lot you'd think there would be a panel of her uh, eating a lot.
More blueballing lol
>>26967
can't wait for the "but i'm a nice guy!!" story that's just as annoying as nice guys, if not more
>>26967
>>27062
>suddenly Sydney stops being a selfish bint and cares about and appreciates her friends
Of course
>LOL did you get passed up
>Being considerate is the biggest meme!
This fucking dialogue
>>27062
Mind-blowingly retarded page

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