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No Lunch Break (Yet again) Anonymous 04/08/2019 (Mon) 19:23:34 Id:f24bd8 No. 36065 [Last 50 Posts]
You know the drill.
End this suffering
Anyone got Kips very old drawings of May and May+Dawn?
So do people not like long drawn out weight-gains? Seems like everyone is kinda pissed more stuff doesn't happen on every page.
>>36086
I love long game weight gain and breast expansion.
I hate that Kip cuts any interesting that's going to happen with said weight gain by interrupting it right when its getting good and cutting to side drama.
>>36086
call me a weirdo but i'm mainly interested in it for the story, so i enjoy the slow pacing/cuts to different parts. the wg and stuffing is coming anyways so i'm cool waiting for the more juicy bits. kip's writing is more entertaining to me than it is erotic.
she better get fucking massive through this force feeding with lasting effects and noticeable gains.
I'm upset that we're not going to see any teasing from the one that lost weight or anything between the depressed one and her boyfriend
Does anyone have the newest colored pages?
this is like the 3rd or the 4th
no lunch break thread
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There must always be... a No Lunch Break thread.
>>36099
Because every other thread spirals into autistic screeching.
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>>36115
That's the good shit right there 👌
if only we could get more aot fats where they're still in their uniform, those straps and buttons are perfect for wg.
>>36126
Now we are getting somewhere...
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unrelated to nlb, but related: I was just messing around with akinator while bored. this is fucked up shit
>>36065
Oh god, you just know there's nothing in that pot except rat guts and rat blood.
>>36195
This is how you build a brand.
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>>36195
In fact, seems like there are multiple instances of Kip in the system.
>>36210
Syd vomits and Sandy just makes her eat her puke.
>>36229
That's unironically hot, though.
Any patrons care to let us know what that update is about?
I'm guessing kip is going to post the next two pages on wednesday?
>>36295
That's right. Apparently Kip didn't want to split them up.
>>36303
Which update? Why would kip not want to split them?
>>36319
Something something about the last Wednesday's being late and the next two would be posted together.

I don't think Kip ever said why.
>>36319
Could be a double page, could be to not split a scene to avoid another blueballing.
>>36126
OBJECTION

stop hold on a moment
Oi ...
look all this dicusion abut rats, womits, and Kipp art stile is nice and fine

BUT

that feedee FA chick with hair ( sorry bit I dont give F**K about theirs names ) so she lusing thous feathers because she gaining weight and she embrace her kinky desires and lust for ... weight gain? Right?

So she is bad person, right? Like we? She is sick pervert?

And ... yet tha crazy chick who is schizophrenic sociopath is all clear and fine.
Yeah right ...
Fuck this shit I em TRIGERED
sorry for kinda interupt but reallly it must be done

happy faping folks
and happy Easter
>>36454
fetish comics aren't exactly the place where one expects to find moral logic
>>36454
Can you go be retarded somewhere else?
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This is the worst shit ever.

I mean, I feel like Sydney probabaly knows EXACTLY why she got fat, BECAUSE SHE DID IT ON FUCKING PURPOSE.

And didn't the fat chick lose weight? So her plan didn't even fucking work.

Jesus fucking christ.
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>>36481
Well no shit Sydney was already fat, but Sandy tried to keep her plump by encouraging it during dinners and sending Syd to Grace, but Syd backed out. And Sandy says that Sara was already fat, so she really didn't care.

If Sandy's plan worked flawlessly, people would bitch how impossible it would be to plan all of that.
tbh I aint even mad. this is so weird and dumb yet all somehow properly works in a bizarre (planned? Probably not?) way. These two strips actually got me to think about the plot of this stupid fetish comic - to ACTUALLY engage with its plot. I'm not entirely thrilled or impressed because it's such a random pointless plot twist, but it ... it is a plot twist. I'm just bewildered and entertained at the balls on kip and I'm kind of enjoying the fact that I got so owned.
>>36481
as long as kip still gets money from the people who pay to see this monthly they won't really care about story
>>36490
You don't even have to pay to see this. Kip posts this on his DA.
>>36481
Its no so much that her plan didn't work, but moreso why those 4 specifically. Sara never said anything bad about her and Fiina probably didn't no she existed, it was really only Tina who out right said anything. If anything it should be Tina who should be a walking ball of lard at this point unwillingly, Sydney wanted to get fat. To be honest based on her warped stand point she should've made every female in the company fat, I just dont get it. It made perfect sense when it was hinted that Sandy was in love with Tina and just wanted revenge on Sydney, but now...
>>36481
It's more fucking awful because it's a fetish comic where the actual fap material is taking a backseat to a story that sounds like it was written by a 4th grader. Kip's art is good enough, but compare this trash to Ayano's Weight Gain Diary which is at 112 pages, and literally every single one is fapworthy, Or even WooT, who will draw a single picture, but back it up with such a well-written and immersive vignette that the text alone will give you a boner. And neither of those artists are whoring themselves out on Pateron. This is why I laugh when people try to lecture about how porn artists deserve respect and compensation. L-O-FUCKING-L. Better content is given away by truly talented and passionate artists without them asking for a single goddamn cent.
>>36496
this text gave me a boner
>>36483
>>36480

yikes, this story is bad
>>36481
i dont mind it, i think everyones biggest issue is that because its spread over two pages a week, its hard to judge paceing and most people assume that anything longer than 5`6 pages without lewd is a travesty
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>>36480
this isn't porn
>>36496
Ayano's Weight Gain is literally totally paywalled, it's just posted on Japanese patreon. It's just extremely easy to pirate.

NLB's plot may be all over the place, but you can at least read it for free.
>>36483

But....she knows Sandy *likes* being fat. That's why she got fat. That's why Sandy invited her to those dinners. So she could eat a lot and have someone to make fun of her for it.

She knowingly helped Sandy live out her biggest sexual fantasy. That's revenge?
>>36503
Yeah I fucked up and said Sandy not Sydney.
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>>36504
your mistake there led me to the hilarious consideration of the next possible plot twist
>sandy and sydney are like pic related
>>36458
.... Nope I like it here ... with you
>>36458

Ouuu hahaha ... and like right now Kip just proved my point ... this is total odd weird
case of fetish - o - hate. But please go ahead write your witty smart remarks.
Imagine actually paying for this nonsensical mess of a comic. Goddamn, and I thought the rat shit was bad.
>>36521
even if you will ignore story and this is tough one ... Kip can draw, he/she/it is actually preaty good but comon ... this is not like fat girls look like ... ( mom dosnt look like this )
>>36503
Oi ... who give fuck about theyrs names they actually hawe quit a sound a like.

You hawe poitn crazy chick isnt just crazy schyzo she is also dumb.

So folks think you are weird and yes you are. Hey make em fat, tha wudl teach em. She is ling, she was actually not hapy when she realise th they cudl get fired from Tay-Tay dudad and son.

She want the fat SHE NEED EM FAT ... beside tha rat girl actully puting on weight to ... so maybe we givibg Kip to little credit ... maybe it wudl all end up ... I dont know ...lets wayt. Beside lots of cam whores are preaty yet theyrs content is disaster.
P.S. hihihi dont you think tha that crazy chick is Kip selfinsert ... I do
I find this interesting. Villains in the Kip comics either feed the heroes to absolute chubbiness, or attempt to prevent them from getting fatter. As long as Sandy makes these lovely girls even plumper I'll be happy. I'd like to see her target Sara again if possible.
>>36496
THIS, everything in ayano is focused around her weight and gaining it, there are no peripheral pages. No matter what she is doing either her weight gain, or her friends weight gain are the center of attention. In NLB there are SEVERAL scenes that add absolutely nothing, and the latest page is one of them.

>>36501
Not even remotely, I don't claim to be some amazing writer or anything but here's what I would've done. Instead dedicating TWO PAGES to bull shit, how about have Sandy stuff Sydney between explanations, shoving down a fist full of food after every example of how she made their lives worse. For example " Yeah I cat fished the idiot Sara, and got her hooked on food, while giving her an all access pass to a gaming account" Shoves half a gallon of soup down Syndeys gullet. " Oh and that Sara chick she was already a fat cow, but im pretty petty so I made sure she'd never find anyone if I couldn't" Tips pot over into Sydneys mouth and pinches her nose, forcing Sydney to drink as fast as possible. "Oh and thats just the beggining", Steps aside showing Sydney TEN no maybe TWENTY POTS of stew.
Instead of writing so much about why this series has a bad story, I can explain you the correct term for this mess:
> Show, don't tell

It's only 3 words but convey all the things Kip does wrong in their story.
"Show, don't tell" is one of the most important rules in writing. In fact it's so important it has it's own dedicated Wikipedia page!

Examples

Ayano is good, because the author draws her gaining weight and then (potentially) only refers to it on later pages.

No Lunch Break is bad, because the author introduces plot twists by telling about them afterwards, to induce drama and surprise in the story simultaneously (as in a bad sitcom).
It would be good, if instead the author would surprise us by showing Sandy's devious deeds while they're happening and cause drama afterwards when the other characters find out about it.

Real world examples
Breaking Bad is regarded as one of the best series of all times, because you see almost all story lines while they're happening. You (as the viewer) know more about the characters than they know about themselves. When the story lines clash together drama is created.
Sword Art Online - Alicization is fucking trash tier, because there's literally only 1 - sometimes 1.5 - story lines and drama is created by surprising the viewer 9 out of 10 times. Kip probably wrote the story for this.
comparison's to ayano's weight gain are apples to oranges. Ayano is a fetish comic about a girl getting fatter and fatter and it's very well done.

this is NOT to say that NLB is more about the story. NLB just incorporates other aspects of the fetish. There's humiliation stuff, there's the taboo of being obese, there's the hedonism stuff, there's the self destruction stuff, ect.

Obviously I like the sexy pages more than the other pages, but there's a million more sides to this fetish and if you aren't into them then you're going to like the comic less. Kip shows us Sydney's life not because of their burning literate desires, but that stuff has to be established if you want to get off on something being humiliating or taboo. You have to establish what is *normal* first. This has been a part of kip's stuff since the very start too.

Ayano gains a billion pounds and there's hardly any consequence. That's also fine and also hot because that's what the comic is about.
can you all fucking shut upt? its just a fucking soft porn comic and for free, let the artist to whatever the fuck she want
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I thought sara was losing weight. Now in the most recent one she's supposed to be gaining.

confused
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>>36545
>soft porn + no monetary compensation = no criticism allowed
giving me the big think here

also
>not obligatory
>not needed
Edited last time by Targus on 04/19/2019 (Fri) 15:09:43.
>>36570
based hotpockets saving us from wrongthink™
you lot almost deserve monetary compensation almost
>>36503
Yea Syd likes being fat, but it's also destroying her feathers. She would have also gotten fired for it. That's why Sandy released the video on the live feed, because she thought either Grace would continue to fatten and humiliate her or just fire her.
>>36544
This is also super true. Kip is constantly having to please people who are into WG, people who are into humiliation, people who just like fat girls, people who like social aspect, etc.

That's why there's not always blatant lewds on every page. That would also kill a lot of the build-up and payoff too.
>>36570
>>36582

it's almost as though "comic does do what I want it to do...." is not actually criticism .... it indeed does make you think...
>>36679
>The twist is she actually liked Tina and not Sydney
Was there literally anything that pointed to this being the case? Or is this just another bullshit twist that's more complicated then it needs to be
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>>36683
Went back a bit and I guess this....that's really the extent of it.
>>36684
>>36683
A mentally/emotionally unstable, socially awkward, self-isolating person who reads FAR too much into a series of minor interactions with another person and spins them into a wildly out-of-proportion narrative that ends with them violently lashing out against someone they wrongly blame for that isolation and failure to function socially.

I can't IMAGINE why some people here would struggle to connect those dots.
Those burps are amazingly hot. I see Kipteitei is making up for the severe lack of them in the With Sister trilogy.
>>36703
That was dozens of weeks and 130 pages ago. I doubt most people can even remember what they had for lunch three days ago.
>>36705
hamburge r
>>36718
Being American is cheating.
>>36704
I completely agree
>>36705
Ha ... disgusting hot dog ( only edible thing affordable near mi work place )
and couple of BigShock energy to cary me trough day ... usually I eat juts 1/2 of tha hotdog. only change in my 3years routine was today ... i spit out first bite and throw ehole thing .. it was worser then usually

...

it is miracle that I em still alive actually

...

Still ... dam, can you imagine that moment when crazy mouse chick realize tha rocker bad ass girl actually newer loved her that t fact she was alvais gunning for white haired feedee. This is gone be one solid could shower. Poor crazy mouse/frog chick.

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