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Feedback from the survey responses here: >>>gen/8273

REAL Last N.L.B. Thread 08/12/2019 (Mon) 22:03:28 Id:851f4e No. 42222
Man, the artist is not yet done with No Lunch Break.
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that rope length snapping placement....
>>42222
Sara AND Sydney survive this !
>>42229
Either that rope is tiny or Kip knows shit when it comes to physics...
>>42222
You know what I "hate" from Kip, the fact that the 200 previous pages, Sydney's belly is just a big round mass and hard as a rock, but now they land on her and it's a total water bed. There is also the fact that she doesn't look fat, just stuffed 24/7 as her thighs, arms and face is exactly the same as when she started on page 1.
>>42247
Yeah, it's pretty much common knowledge by now that Kip isn't actually into fat and just likes bellies. That's also one reason why he discontinued LWS, because the characters just got too fat for his taste. It sucks but what can you do.
>>42261
Good
SSBBWfags need to be put in their place
Not every girl needs to be a massive sickly slobblob
>>42264
haha nice meme dude
>>42267
hi kipp
I don't even give a shit about the characters being "really fat" or not.
I just wish the comic would stop wasting the readers' time with so much non-fetish bullshit.

Being obliged to release on a biweekly basis has really fucked the comics. Instead of just drawing whenever he has inspiration (or is horny), Kip is forced to keep pumping out, which leads to the morbid results we see today.
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BWS has pretty much replaced Kip in giving us what we want IMO, no fluff or frills just straightforward indulgence

so I shopped Syd over a BWS Lucy panel and MAN I wish I lived in a reality where Kip drew fat actually like fat
Ngl Kip’s Art would be 1000x better if they knew how to draw fat

I think they get the bellies right, but it bothers me when you see no fat around the arms, legs, etc
>>42277
nice dude!
>>42277
that a damn good edit and exactly what i've wanted to see this whole fucking time.
>>42277
gross
Honestly, NLB is way better with belly inflation/stuffing, instead of fcking morbid obesity, also those neckless girls seems fcking awfull, if you want something like that go fap yourself with jabba the hutt
>>42288
>>42292
How did you faggots ever end up on this site even? Sydney is a twig compared to the average girl posted in these threads, and Kip's anatomy is indisputably fucked regardless of your size preference
Will you guys stop bitching for 5 fucking seconds, holy shit. Just posts fats and go. I didn't come here for an anatomy lecture.
>>42294
there's no fats to post until next page stop deflecting KIDF
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>>42286

#same

here's one more chonk edit for the books
>>42277
golly gee whillikers my fucking dick
Are there any other panels that work well with slapping Sydney's head in there?
>>42347
god damn, when's the whole "sandy is superhuman" thing gonna end, I thought it was peak stupid when the boyfriend got flipped over but whatever is next might top it
>>42349
At this rate and with how to comic is going, I'm assume it won't end anytime soon. After that what will happen, she will capture all of them and feed them, that was her plan after all.
>>42347
damn this comic is awful now, it feels like the events of this page should have happened at least 15 pages ago. The pacing is absolutely abysmal
>>42347
INB4 SANDY USES A STAND.
>>42347
We thought the JoJo shit was a thread meme, but Kip is going all in now
>>42322
What's the original look like?
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>>42347

good god are you kidding me Kip just give us another hot tub scene that's all we care about

here's my last Sydney edit bc Kip obvi isn't getting to this anytime soon

...like...WHY AREN'T WE HERE YET

see you in 5 years ya'll - maybe then my photoshop will become a reality
>>42347
And into the trash it goes.
I might be into big bellies but this has been nothing but disappointment.
>>42222
>>42347

So what the fuck is in those rats to make her be able to hold a rope that is carrying a good 400-600+ pounds with one hand, and the ability to run that fucking fast down what can I only assume to be a fair amount of stairs given how she lives on what appears to be the 2nd floor of an elevated apartment complex?

Like I know the real answer is "poor writing" but humor me.
>>42366
she jumped down the flights of stairs, stopping to turn momentarily every time she ended up facing a wall

the brute strength i'm not sure about
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>>42366
it's simple.
she has the ability to stop time for five seconds.
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>>42267
>>42292
lol why the fuck are you fags even here?

>>42277
>>42322
>>42363
That's some quality shit dude, good job.
>>42277
based.
fuck stuffings
>>42347
I have never been able to tell apart who is who. Don't know these characters and I've read through these comics.
>>42267
I agree with this. But the way DWS Kip was drawn avoided the things that make me unattracted to a fat girl and kept the good stuff.

>>42352
This makes me want a victory for Sandy. If Grace comes in to double feed the girls I'll be elated. But then maybe Grace turns on Sandy and feeds her into fatness, then brings out her tubby friend Kip (who may or may not have lost some weight in with her). I have proof Kip last Christmas drew a comic featuring Kip and the new girls. I'll post it to the Kipteitei thread for reference.
>>42413
>>42267
you normies are the minority here.
>>42415
DRAMA ALERT: Normies made SSBBWFags mad, world in chaos.
>>42418
Can we please stop this fuckery and accept the fact that people have different preferences, please?

My opinion? I'm quite disappointed with where this comic is going, but that hot tub scene makes all my complaints null.
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>go to a website called BBW-chan
>"wtf why are there so many disgusting fat lovers here?!"
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There will be end to the whinefaggotry. Anon knew from the start that Kip was different from other artist and that he was destined for greatness. When other artists produced work that displeased his peepee, he simply walked away to fap across greener pastures. But not with Kip, oh no!

You see Anon knows that Kip is a diamond in the rough, teetering on the edge between greatness and ruin. Thus when Kip's fatties fails to stir Anon's peepee his rage waxes majestically in its stead:

"I don't like round bellies! There's something off about the anatomy!" - he exclaims.
"Well then don't bother with it!" - you might tell him.

But you don't understand the power of Kips fatties: in being positioned perfectly between tantalizing and derpy, they are the ultimate autism-bait! Like a portal to an parallell reality in which all his dreams came true, Anon sees what could have been. You will never understand him, and he will never understand himself.
>>42472
back to reddit
>>42347
>I'LL SHOW THEM WHAT HAPPENS TO RATS AROUND HERE!!
What did she mean by this?
>>42512
She wouldn't do that.
You guys are such fucking crybabies lol
>>42556
hi kip
>>42515
Would be cool though. Finally a "twist" I could get behind
>>42571

And here we discover Kip's true desire: writing edgelord fanfiction.

Remember kids, just because a plot works in your japanese animes doesn't mean it'll make for good reading in your fat comic.
>>42387
Because they are. And Something Awful.
>>42571
ITS HAPPENING. WE'RE IN THE ENDGAME NOW.
Also how fucking「STRONK」is Sandy wtf?

What makes me think Sandy has won and is just gonna feed them all and maybe even get the boss' feeder ass daughter in.
>"Prepare to face judgement."
>>42577
taking bets that kip will write in an asspull to cockblock the ssbbwfags
I'm past complaining and I'm just getting a little bored. I'll give Kip the benefit of the doubt - sometimes his punchlines can be a bit funny but clearly NLB has become kind of a dud.

Kip, if you read this, please, try to take constructive criticism.beneath the notching there is genuine good advice based on what we want. And I know you have your personal tastes but money tastes even sweeter, so give up on the "sticks with beach balls" look and learn how to draw actual fat distribution. You have such a great art style with girls and you shouldn't waste potential.
I'm into all types of fat, so Kip's art doesn't bother me too much. but given that it's meant to be an ongoing story, it does bother me that the characters have yet to outgrow the stick arms/legs and beach ball belly phase. These threads show I'm not alone, but the comment section under the art says differently. In fact, I saw someone who wants more Sandy while I'm just sitting here waiting for her to fucking go away.
>>42587
Kip is always going to be into pot-bellied girls and he isn't going to change that.
>>42264
haha epic boomer humour haha XD u sure owned those libtards my epic dude haha good job very funny XXD
Fuck you faggots, Kip is the best fat artist, his talent is not like any other fat artist on the Internet, he is the cutesexyrobutts of the fat fetish community
>>42607
shut up kip
>>42608
I’m not Kip you faggot
>>42609
You call me faggot but youre the one liking trap D
>>42609
What a Kip thing to say.
Ancient legend says that if Kip draws one female double chin or pillowy arm or thunder thighs he will shrivel up into a husk and pass into the wind as dust.
what the fuck is happening this comic is so retarded
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Anyone know what this is about?
>>42656
No pages this week. Kips posting 3pgs next wed
Hopefully this means we're actually gonna get to some good content now. The last time kip did this was during the hot tub scene (which was like 8 or 9 months ago at this point) and that definitely paid off well. Fingers crossed that this dude actually gives us what we want after so many pages of pure garbage
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I would be perfectly happy if the characters didnt really gain after a certain point: if they plateaued anywhere from 200 to 300lbs or whatever kip likes best. The comic could be good and focus on stuffing and characters who gain as a consequence but not intentionally, even if that isnt my main preference.

It isnt that though
>>42222
We just get bullshit where Sydney is perpetually drawn like a beachball glued to a person and then, in this page, she turns into a waterbed. Its somehow both endlessly repetitive and bland but also absurdly inconsistent.
Compound this with half the pages being boring bullshit about half baked characters devoid of even caricature and NLB is just trash.

Its such a shame because his original comic was very good. I wish he'd just drop NLB and move on to something fresh, which could hardly be worse, or, at least, stop focusing so much on it and diversify his content a little more instead of shitting out half a dozen of these every fortnight.
hope you enjoyed my autistic rant about my cummies pictures
>This is the last page of DWS we are ever going to see because Kip will never draw girls this big again
Well while we wait, does anyone have the other pictures that aren't on yiff yet?
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>>42956
Some quality shit right here
>>42954
ngl, I miss Kat, I have a huge soft spot for short hair / bobcuts.
wheres mah update
>>43096
kip quit because of all the negative reaction from this chan
>>43103
>Quitting right before the climax
Yep sounds like Kip
as if. fuck off
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>>43109
HAHAHAHA
what a climax
>>43109
Wow, how the tables have turned. Glasses is the smallest of them now.
>>43110
Holy fuck grace looks cute af
Something told me that Kip is going to turn they slim again, F U C K
>>43110
>hose feeding and fast forward
>barely any emphasis on the stuffing
>they instantly get out of it in 3 pages
What a fucking let down
So we finally get the force feeding of everyone... only for it to be rushed... and Grace FINALLY appears (with her father of all people, which probably either means diet time or peeps getting fired)...

What a fucking rollercoaster of 3 pages.
>>43114
Either NLB cuts soon and ends on an absolute trash note, or the good stuff cranks up to 11. Places your bets gentlemen.
Betting on it ending on a trash note. But at least the comic can finally die.
>>43116

I bet Grace is gonna get her Dad to let her take care of it from here, before letting Sandy off scot free and joining her in feeding all 4 of them.

That or, after letting Sandy off, she takes Sydney for herself and lets Sandy have Tina, Sara, and Fiina(and given Chase is a chubby chaser, he'd likely cooperate ;) )
>>42587
He won't get magically twice the money if he starts drawing chicks fatter. As it is he has the largest possible audience range.

My main issue with NLB is that Kip will draw two pages of good fetish psychology mixed with five pages of memes and I can't fap to memes, even when chubby girls are part of it.

Anyway we'll probably have something as good as the bath tube scene eventually. Intermittent reinforcement does require reinforcement after all.
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>poorly executed wg comic with a grand amount of potential gets rushed climax
>inb4 trash ending
mfw
>>43109
>>43110

Did this really need to be over 250 pages long
>>43124
Kinda tempted to edit it into a more concise story.
Anyone interested in that? No guarantees, but it could be interesting.
>>43110
why could he not have added ten more pages of them being stuffed before Grace and co showed up? I hope to god sandy knocks out the security guards and the dad, and ties grace up and stuffs her too, otherwise, this is going to be the biggest downer ending of a fetish comic.
>>43110
Can those mall cops just fucking dome Sandy already?

Also time for like 5 pages/3 weeks of shitty dialog so we can get another page or two of rushed WG content like a month from now. lol
>>43127
its easy to do, i saw an anon that did it for sandy's force feeding scene but i havent saved it.
One page of stuffing, then deus ex machina. Kips incest shit was much better
made some kind of agreement with Grace, so I expect someone to get the Sandy treatment anyway
For some reason the start of the message was cut off. I was saying "Tina...
>>43111
Worst girl confirmed, as if it weren't obvious already
Can we please finish it.
I'm just so done. Let it end. And please never write a story again let someone else do it if you want to try again just never make a story yourself again.
my mind is absolutely blown by that stuffing scene, i mean, i know it's 3 girls but what the fuck was THAT
>>43109
>>43110
Fucking astounding, dozens of pages of buildup for six panels of action before everyone packs up and goes home.

What does /bbwdraw/ think Kip is going to replace NLB with? It sucks up so much of his time that he could make like a half dozen pics with the full works a week. I'd almost rather a stream of regular art and commissions for a while before any further attempt is made at storytelling just to see if Kip's art quality improves without having to rush to fit a schedule.
>>43128
Because that's what people expected, and Kip is an assumed troll. A ten pages stuffing scene could pop out of nowhere soon or we could have nothing for the 30 next pages. Don't count on anything predictable.
>>43110
Deus ex machina.
*ding*
>>43136
I've been on this for a while, but I'm expecting some sort of thing with Grace as she tried to get Syd to basically allow her to pamper her or something . Unless this is going to be retconned, I see a major scene inbound where Grace might end up having the goons on her side, sending her dad away, and having an "intervention" with the girls INCLUDING Sandy.

Either that or it's going to really be a bland couple of weeks huh?

Everyone just like give me mass (You)'s if I'm right in the following weeks.
How I hope the comic will go like this:

Sara, Fina, and Tina: You freed us! Thank you!

Grace: Oh I wouldn't say "freed." More like under new management.

Basically Grace feeds them now.
>>43110
2nd comic top left panel... there is a pixelated rat. God damnit
Just noticed fiina has the same look Sydney does when stuffing, maybe she's into it aswell secretly?
>>43167
anon, were you a graphic designer for atari?
>>43178

Heh, maybe she got into it during her time away from the office? lol
>>43163
my dick would explode if kip would listen to people.
>>43238

Last time he did that, Dinner With Sister went on indefinite hiatus. xD
>>43241
Yeah but from what i heard Lunch With Sister was the way it was because he mainly listened to people (Hence why Kip got so big) and it was probably the best of what he's made.

Also strangely enough as his art became more "refined" it also became stiffer. Fat hardly interacts with anything and is more like a rubber ball in NLB.
>>43186

Yes. But what else could it be
>>43250
I see.
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>>43334
So... that's it? All this buildup... everything set for the most epic stuffing and fetish fan service that the whole comic was leading up to... then just one page of tube feeding and it's on to the next 'scene'?

Can...can this be over now? I want off mr bones wild ride.
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>>43334
I'm feeling some type of way.
>>43335
>>43336

As little hope as i have in Kip, the only thing im guessing is that Grave will have her favor returned by having some sort of threesome between her Tina, and Sydney... maybe the other two but honestly not since they have little to no reason of being in the story
>>43274
Another thing on NLB is that you can see Kip slowly start to care less and less about it as it goes on. All you have to is look at the amount of care he puts into fingers and hands at the very beginning compared to how he draws them later on.
(This is my attempt of showing two similar scenes and how the passion in the later is pretty much gone)
>>43341
Well several pages ago (months ago) Kip did say they were trying a new way of drawing the comic to make it easier on them.
Also I'm thinking w'ere still gonna see some more stuffing or body shaming, Grace gets what she wants.
>>43334
"I expect to be compensated"
PLEASE DONT FUCK THIS UP, I WANT FAT GOTH GF AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
>>43341
This is fucking embarrassing, the shading is relatively atrocious and Sydney's body went from organically squishy to looking like it was made with shape tools
>>43335
funny enough you say "that's it", the page almost feels like a last scene to me... cue either ending credits or one last montage
>>43334
The people (rightfully) complaining about this pile of wasted potential is the only real reason I even read these threads, probably the only place that'll not be censored that discusses this garbage that won't be kissing the artists ass in every other sentence. I actually enjoy the ranting, it's more entertaining than the comic has ever been. It's useless to me as fap material as the comic doesn't do it for me because I'm the type that can't stand girls that I know are bitches, which are most of the characters. One of the only characters I actually felt anything for was Sandy, and she became a poorly written villain for the R9K incel nightmare that is the MC, who I already had reasons to dislike early on for picture related.
For that matter, what's the point of setting up a sympathetic backstory for Sandy if she's only going to be an easily overcome foil for the MC (by doing literally nothing) and then cast into prison for her job-given mental disorders and poverty? Think about it: The VILLAIN is a mentally broken poor girl who lives in a ghetto. I can't wait for the next deus ex machina to conveniently dump a mountain of cash into Sydneys lap to surpass her only obstacle to having a full on dyke relationship as she won't have to steal money from her significant other to live easy. (Probably coming soon via Grace and/or Not-Trump/more bad writing)
>>43349
>Well several pages ago (months ago) Kip did say they were trying a new way of drawing the comic to make it easier on them.

Its because he commited himself to 250+ page fetish comic that could've been told in about 100 or so.

There are so many superflous scenes that could've been trimmed.

The biggest one for me was the spa arc, where he wasted about 5 pages on the belly dancing stuff, and seemed like he was going to set up a social shaming scene only for it to go absolutely no where. Im assuming it was supposed to be somewhat similar to the fitting room scene in Dinner with Sister, but he didn't commit to it, making it pointless.
>>43382
You mean Kip doesn't know how to trim the fat? PepeLaugh

I have that theory Kip starts dropping the ball when he starts liking some of his characters much more than the others, and everything not involving his favorite drops drastically in quality. In the totality of NLB so far I found ONE mediocre panel of Grace. Since Sandy started her insanity arc she's far better drawn. On the contrary Sydney drawings have consistently deteriorated, give it a few months and she'll be a belly on a stick. Kip probably wrote a one million pages script though and doesn't want to throw it away, so the quality is suffering. That's an example of how excessive planning can hurt the quality of creative production.
>>43341
I actually like some parts of NLB, but there really have a lot of dead ends. Then when we get to something good, the consistency of the art is all over the place. Kip can obviously still draw, but it's become painfully obvious what parts have effort put into them.
Honestly the best thing would be kip hiring an actual good erotic writer and refining a 100 page comic over the course of around year then dropping the whole thing at once, and just trickling in those weekly patreon pictures to sate the autists.
Kip needs an editor more than a writer. He has good enough ideas but his focus is all over the place.
>>43382
holy shit the art in NLB is so bad lmao, wtf is going on with sandy's face?? the proportions?? everything???
>>43483
>>43382
No Sandy on this page.
They fat, so hugging barely possible
Ngl, i was a former fan of nlb, but like, Kip can't decide if he wants a proper story, or fanservice kink stuff. He can't have both, and he's failing at both miserably.
>>43501
Are we nearing the ending?
I mostly will still defend NLB as being well crafted and kip as a good artist. It's been a while since I've gotten anything out of it, things have gotten a little bit too fantastical for me. It was the same with craving control if anybody remembers that. This is EXTREMELY reminiscent of that, where the stuffing gets a little too cartoonish for it to mean anything to me.
>>43501
time to put down old yeller...
>>43518

yeah i still find NLB very entertaining as a story. never really was interested in it as erotic material. i enjoy the slice-of-life portion way more than the fanservice.
It's just that there is such a huge build-up and poof nothing happens, nothing gained.
>>43572

"nothing gained"

*BA DUM TSSSSS*
holy shit sydney is so unbelievably unattractive
>>43518
Nah, must be your imagination mate "wink wink nudge nudge"
>>43527
This is bait, right? The story is pure fucking trash. Jesus christ, I'm not even saying that the plot has to be something out of the pages of Tolkein, but there is nothing clever or entertaining about this. WooT writes three paragraph vignettes to go with his pictures that offer more depth and amusement than the entirety of this fucking trainwreck.
I reread lunch with sister and it was much better, particularly to wank to
>>43690
Lunch with Sister was better because
1. It was far more concises with little to not fluff
2.It was one the time's he listened to his audience, and even though he didn't like making Kip so fat quickly it helped in the narrative.
3. Even though the art was sketchier, it had more personality and the fat actually acted like fat, not to mention there was far more interaction.
>>43729
Well this is going to get interesting reactions here, ha.
>>43729
noticing how sandy doesnt lose any feathers, kip really wants to make this mentally damaged, split-personality sociopath enemy into an angel for some reason all of a sudden

terrible planning on their part
>>43729
Eh, the monologue seems a little forced here.
>>43729
The amount of Stockholm Syndrome here is insane.

Inb4 we get up to the Grace becoming Sandy 2: Electric Boogaloo and it ends or goes on hiatus.
>>43729
this is how children movies end
>>43729
Holy shit just finish it, this is so bad.
I don't know how he does it but literally every page is worse than the last. His writing was already pure shit but this is a whole different level of bad. Like this writing wouldn't even be considered passable for children's programming. If he wants to focus on the story and social consequences of gaining weight, then learn how to fucking write oh my god.
The real hero is my fucking blue balls
>>43729
>but the real No Lunch Break was the lessons we learned along the way
Sydney's speech here is so fucking forced and robotic. I go by each week thinking there's no way I could possibly find a way to lose any more respect for the comic, but Kip always finds a way
>>43729
F The Prom had better storytelling than this
Huh? even on DA the comments section is starting to look similar to bbwchan, even his fans are saying Syd did a 180 interesting.

LOL and one of the people defending it said Kip's writing is better than GoT, pack it up lads Kip is getting several books and TV deals that'll make GoT and Harry Potter look like a quickly cancelled 1 season show and easily forgotten children's joke book.
>>43729 My God, the ballons. Am I watching Kip or Axelrosered?

This is terrible, both in art and narrative
>>43731

are you psychic? surely you must be psychic
>>43768
Yet people still support him for over 4000$ on patreon
Didn't Kip say some bullshit about how the cops with that retarded loli has some role to play? Not surprised he lied to avoid getting criticized.
Oh my god. It's been 2 years. Someone get fat. SOMEONE. PLEASE. SOMEONE just actually GET FAT instead of doing this half-assed stuff. AAAGGGHGHHH.
I swear to god, someone really could make a better living than Kip just by taking their comic pages and editing the characters to actually get fat. I would actually pay money for that.
My stab at a next page prediction

Syd: ... and as for me... *leans in close to Sandy to whisper in her ear* ... I kinda liked it.

Tina looks on dumbfounded by Sandy's reaction of turning beet red and howling obscenities as she's carted off.
>>43788
kip doesn't do fats though, just belly stuffing
Damn it's been 2 years already, keep is extending this too much
>>43745
Like i've noted before he never commits to the ideas he puts out. He said he wanted to make a longer story to focus on the "social consequences" or whatever but he only really has 4 pages that shows any of this. One at the near beginning with the club guys(only to establish the lesbian thing), the check out line, the pool scene, and the stuff with the company. And even then its not like the side characters interact with her or call her out on her weight gain in public. Not to mention Sydney doesn't even have enough shame to even have the whole social shaming aspect even be a thing
sydney looks like a balloon (not for me but fine if youre into it)
tina is so fucking annoying i wish she wasnt in this damn comic
sandy is hot and i like that shes crazy and shes trying to stuff the main characters, this is a fetish comic, in the real world she would get arrested, but not in a fetish comic,,, right?? *right*?
>>43820
dude he killed the fucking stuffing scene in not even 3 panels. of course he's going to cockblock us.
>>43913
>invalidating the reader's and the author's time with pointless dialog

amazing
>>43913
>this page
>these last few pages
https://youtu.be/P5MvO0GMq4U
So in the end, the main character gets everything she wants and the bullied mentally ill girl goes to jail.
>Syd's been like that from the beginning. Disregarding other people's feelings, but now for the first time she has to deal with the consequences.
What consequences?
>>43729
Sometimes it's not about the weight we gained

But the friends we gained on the way
>Protagonist-Centered Morality: The Comic
Kip really thinks they've done something good here huh?
>>43924
>they
>>43924
Go back to TVTropes.
>>43913
Which one of these characters are we supposed to like or root for? It's like he's writing a modern Simpsons universe but worse
>>43921
Exactly the point I've been making since Kip decided to make Sandy "the villain." Probably COMPLETELY NOT because she was once the most popular character before the bipolar-villain schtick. Go look back at her earliest portrayals, she was just a likable vapid space case weirdo before.

>>43922
>>43924
>>43939
Also these.

SPEAKING OF REMINDERS: The internet still doesn't forget, so I hope you haven't.
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Despite what a farce this comic is, Kip is making all time high in Pateron with whopping $4,269 per month so he must be doing something right at least.
The comic is a complete shitshow, but I think most patreon supporters are there for the patreon-exclusive art.
Then again, who knows? Webcomics tend to attract people with inexplicably bad taste.
>>43979
It has nothing to do with quality, he just came first. Kip had decent art and a vocal community before anyone else in the fat community, years and years ago, and was the only member of the old guard to hop on Patreon as soon as that fad started, so he drew hundreds of babbies' first patronages as a result.
>>43990
>>43980
I used to like Kip's art but in recent (years) times I've grown tired of it. What mostly bothers me is how every character he does resembles so much each other visually. Like everyone is fat in exactly same way. The other thing is how Kip makes skin glossy.

Back then when Kip didn't draw so well I felt there was more variation.
>>43979
>>43980

INB4 i'm a kip shill with shit taste

i don't care about NLB being hammy, it's a slice-of life comic about cartoon girls instantly getting fat and losing most of it the next day. kip's an artist, not a pulitzer-prize winner.

but kip's definitely my favorite artist to commission. the sizes rarely get past chubby but that's what i prefer. if someone doesn't like (him/her/them/pick-a-fucking-pronoun), i dont expect to change their mind
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>>43994
Are you by any change or have you pledge on higher tiers in Kip's pateron. If so there are few question that I have wondered for a long so if you or anyone else who's been there could clarify these for me.

In descriptions Kip talks about Tutorials, lewd versions of pictures, Patreon Sketchbook. Do these things exist in reality and how often Kip update these?

How the heck does Kip's pateron commission merry-go-round work? You pledge and send him what you want and then you wait. You can stay multiple months paying every month but you only get to request next one after Kip finishes your previous request? So you don't necessarily one every month? How long is the usual wait?
>>43978

You whats most poingnant about this whole debacle, LWS is hands down his most liked series BECAUSE he actually listened to the fans, thus giving it actual direction, yet he hates it the most. Really makes you think...

>>43990
Yup there far better artists out there but they all jumped on the bandwagon too late.


>>43993
Kip has more or less the same face for every character, anime eyes with up turned nose, but just changes the hair style and eye color, and thats about it. Add this to the fact that probably 90% of his work is in the 2.5D perspective and yeah i could see how someone could get tired of it.

>>43994
> kip's an artist, not a pulitzer-prize winner.

Assuming this isn't bait, then why does he keep insisting on "writing' dragged out stories, he obviously believes his writing capabilities to be suffice enough to write out a 250+ page comic, but it really isn't. I don't really care if kip is you're favorite artist or whatever,I honestly don't hate the guy and enjoy some of his art, I just dislike this specific piece. There are so many dead ends and rushed elements that it feels like this was done with little to no planning, which would be fine if Kip didn't present this as being some sort of deep insight into the social aspect of gaining (even though that was hardly even brought up either). No one would be complaining if this was about 50-100 pages, and had all the pointless fluff taken out.
>>43997

yea, i can answer all of these. i've been in the 50+ tier since january.

i believe kip makes tutorials when specifically asked, but she's only posted two total. lewds are annual i think? could be bi-annual but either way, patrons suggest and vote and she does the top 2/3. haven't seen any recent sketchbook posts

the $50 tier guarantees you a commission after being in there for 2 payments. it's essentially a $100 commission. the $100 tier is the same thing but without limited spots, essentially youre paying double so you dont have to wait. my friend and i both got lucky and were each able to move down after 1 month but it's not guaranteed.

after you get your first commission, then you get added to the merry-go-round. the wait between requests has ranged from 2-3.5 months. kip updates pretty frequently now, so it's more than worth it imo

after staying in the tier for a while, kip will do more complex ones sometimes, so that's nice

>>44000
eh, i guess kip just prefers longer stuff and likes the characters. constructive feedback is always welcome in the comments or her DMs, but it's rarely civil on DA. i think she's been toying with doing some more focused one-shots after NLB finishes, but thats just speculation. ultimately kip's making a living doing art on patreon and DA, but only gets paid for what's released on patreon
I wish she'd spend more time on each page rather than churning em out so frequently, tbh. I think that's the main reason NLB ended up being so shit, if more time were spent drawing and plannin out the plot it'd be a lot more coherent then it ended up being, but sadly that ain't what happened. I understand it probably ain't 100% kips fault and more the fanbase of thirsty fuckin manchildren that wanted pages, but still
>>44002

>"she"

yep, it's bait.
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>>44038
i don't know what i expected.

kip doesnt seem to care either way, so i just picked one to use and stuck with it. pretty trivial
>>44028
This, Kip lost all semblance of my respect when he starting cucking himself out of his own interests to pander to what would make the most people throw money at him in terms of subject matter and release schedule, then doubly lost it when he started injecting his shitty fanfiction into his story despite all that. At least fucking pick one or the other, go full shill and the give the people what they want or ignore them entirely and make the content that's personally sexiest. Kip's art quality has gone down the drain proportionally with the amount of work he's resigned himself to, he really needs to step back and reevaluate his entire work model after NLB ends.
>>44039
>enabling mental illness
>paying him 50 doubloons for the privilege of sucking his dick
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>>44079
haha wow these gender fluid types sure are fucking deviants huh am i right haha anyway have u guys seen jojo?
>>44080
Being flamboyant isn't the same as being gender fluid. Not even Tumblr will back you on that one.
>>44079
well ya got me there, bud! i live to defend m'lady kip, clad in my shining white armor
If kip wanted to have lws be some nuanced story of love, emotional bonds etc plus weight gain, they perhaps shouldn't have written it as a sequel to bws which is pretty much just smut.

I'd even agree that the character kip got too big too quickly, but the story overall works better because the pacing is tighter, nlb spins its wheels too much.
>>44121
>what is a muffin top?
>what is love handles?
>her back looks like your looking at a bloated toad than a person
>>44122
at least their gonna fuck soon
Watch as kip skips over the lewd or cuts away to shit we don't care about--
>>44122
HOES MAD HOES MAD
>>44121
This doesn't even look good
sydney has the least attractive body type of all time, holy shit
>>44111
>I'd even agree that the character kip got too big too quickly,

I disagree, its what made LWS so enjoyable, everything is compact and too the point for the most part.
>>44123
This is going to be interesting as i wonder if Kip will remember how to draw proper fat interactions, or will it just look like 2 circles drawn next to each other.
page 259. this has been going for 2 and a half years.
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We have reached peak detail
>>44121
i so badly want to like this comic but there is so little belly and so much filler that i find it hard to care.
I've waited quite a while to use this.
I will reserve my judgement for post-stuffing
I'm gonna miss the roasting these threads deliver when this is over.
>>44144
>>44162
roasts and memes aside, i hope people send kip constructive feedback before whatever's after nlb. cuz there are plenty of things the comic can improve on (see: todays page)

assuming people actually do want the comic to be good.
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>>44121
>this yields $4K+ monthly on Patreon
Well shit, I might have take up drawing again
>>44135
>>44165
These actually look better than the main focus of the page
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>>44173
This is the funniest shit I've seen, goddamn.
>>44173
A sequel...
"Just when I thought I was out...they pull me back in."
>>44173 so this is not gonna be the last NLB thread, shocking.
>>44164
does kip ever take any advice? im pretty sure he/she wasnt led on to make this mess by any fans and people have been attempting to give advice all this time.
>>44178
Look at all the ass kissers in the DeviantArt post section.
>>44173
As much as I physically cringed upon initially seeing NLB2 announced, I feel like most of the potential melodramatic horseshit in the worldbuilding is already out of the way, so a sequel would almost necessarily have to have a lot more fetish content.
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>>44173
pfff, hahahaha
oh god, imagine all that built drama just to decide to throw it in the trash and try again in a new sequel.

seriously tho, just focus on what the audience want, which is sex, weight gain and semi relatiable characters without all the bloat
>>44122
Are you forgetting that she was just engorged like a goddamn tick by Sandy?
>>44182
>without all the bloat
cheeky little cunt
>>44178
DA/patreon comments are usually an echo chamber of reassurance with the occasional rare constructive point being made. i'm guessing if someone DMed kip some actual things to improve on, we would hopefully see an increase in quality.
>>44188
>echo chamber
lmao
>>44191
you right, every part the entire goddamn internet is an echo chamber. people here will hate anything kip puts out, and people on patreon will love anything kip puts out. i wish some pledgers would point out flaws. kip would probably be more receptive to criticism then
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>>44192
Reading some comments on yiff.party there are people pointing out flaws, it's just dog pilled and brushed aside by avid supporters.
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>>44182
>imagine all that built drama just to decide to throw it in the trash and try again in a new sequel
My god, Kip actually went full Araki
>>44194
talked to that same guy on patreon in the comments (idk how yiff.party works but i'm assuming it just bypasses the paywal). it sucks how he brought up good points and immediately got dismissed as a hater by people getting offended for kip. i'm not very critical of the comic but people who criticize the comic want to like it (i assume). has anyone sent kip a civil DM with constructive feedback? i'm guessing that would help more than the shitloads of people disagreeing with eachother
>>44194
> take that negative energy elsewhere buddy
These kinds of comments make me lose faith in humanity. I hope that guy keeps his patronage active and keeps fighting the good fight instead of being scared off by circlejerking 8 year olds
>>44188
Already done that
Kip is too stuck up his own ass and everything I try to critique him on, he just deflects and says “it’s personal taste choices”
>>44211
well shit, that sucks.
>>44173
You know what fuck it, i think im going to learn how to draw and do this shit myself. Im not even mad or surprised since Kip is kinda petty (the pixalated rat in the last stuffing sequence shows hes still but hurt about the bashing he got over the vore stuff), but shit man where else could this even go. Kip sucks at writing characters, and his only forte his drawing thin chicks with big bellies, which Sydney and most of the cast are far past.
>>44178
Nope unless you're sucking his dick, he'll just dismiss you.
If I were to push forward criticism, it'd be body proportion consistency, Sydney currently looks less fat than she did trying on clothes, even with the fuckhuge belly. If she was thinner in the previous instance it wouldn't be an issue, but it clashes with the physical progression of Sydney

I'd also suggest to release related pages in blocks more often, since they're generally better received than one at a time

Unrelated to criticism i think kip should finish dws, if only to remove the 'what if' cloud hanging around on everyone and themself
I'll be honest, the only real reason I even still follow Kip is because of the actual art. Sure they aren't great, but they work for me. Better than this 2 year slogfest.
>>44180
>a sequel would almost necessarily have to have a lot more fetish content.
Are you forgetting that >>43110 was the climax? Pages of bullshit and the boring dyke organising a rescue of sandy (to presumably save kip from drawing fetish pages) alongside some man and glasses only to finally culminate in 1 (one) page of some bizarre funnel sequence which cant even really be called a sequence.
I dont think kip even likes stuffing anymore if thats the best he could come up with. He literally deux ex machina'd himself out of the scene which was the reason people read his comics.
>>44236
The comic was doing okay with proportions, it only seems to have dropped the ball in the last hundred pages or so.
Pacing and progression for NLB is all over the place though, there's so many pages of meandering plot and exposition it's hard to keep track of the actual characters gaining weight unless you're cropping panels out and stringing them together.
Also Kip's fetish for devouring inedible stuff like shellfish shells, raw flour, etc. is just bizarre
>>44240
i see the inedibles stuff as the characters being so into the stuffing that theyd go to that extreme, which is kinda hot. The proportions issue is defs mainly noticable in the latter half, but even between panels they dont line up aswell sometimes
>>44173
>>44177
>Kip wants to keep that money train rolling
Clearly. I'm convinced he could take a big steaming shit on paper and his retards would pay him for it. Maybe you'll get lucky and this time he'll make his main characters not terrible people.

>>44179
This is why I have a "kill all shills" mentality, which is the main reason I dislike Kips work than just its subpar content, which I would otherwise just ignore. The dipshit shills are the worst part of this and don't exactly contain their retardation from bleeding everywhere, much like celebrity fanboys of both virtual and regular varieties. An example of this would be to think like youtuber comments where in letsplays, some moron has to mention the fact that some other popular youtuber played the game the uploader is playing yet it has no relevance to it beyond that, it's a type of cancerous shilling, and NOTHING in this world is free of it at this point.

>>44191
Except for the fact we've had our share of mouthbreathers here that give Kip a pass for everything. When it gets more hostile here they tend to briefly retreat to their hugboxes where they can kiss ass without being called out for it and have mod backup if anyone gets even a little critical. There's a reason imageboard culture tends to prefer unfiltered discussion, otherwise it winds up a cancerous hugbox like Deviantart or Reddit where you can't call people out for when they mess up when they attain a certain level of popularity, because usually doing these things ends in "downvotes" until your comment is hidden, getting banned, blocked, or even harassed by the more pathetic fanboys.
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>>44194
Gonna be honest, I'm more surprised they weren't just blocked, muted, or however that works. Though dogpiling is common when criticism is outnumbered.
Imagine retards on the internet getting mad over a free anime comic that caters to some fetishes that manages to bring in some money to it's creator that is getting burnt out over it.
>>44208
don't you fucking compare kip to araki
>>44298
This is legit cute
And god Tina got quite fat actually
>>44298
Ok,not gonna lie, that was kinda cute
>>44173
We are NOT gonna be making a NLB 2 thread. EVER.
>>44302
Who's Araki?
>>44298
For all bitching against Kip, this aint bad, this aint bad at all
>>44308
a popular manga artist, most well known for his one-shot, poker under arms
>>44313
Alright, thanks.
Masterful dialogue
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>>44315
not saying they're similar at all, but both araki and kip tend to make things up as they go. sure theres an overarching story and plot but most of the stuff in between just kinda happens. i still like kips stuff tho
As a fan of Kip,while i am ok with how the girls look in these comics(perhaps i just don't have refined tastes) the story i can't defend, there were so many places it could go (albeit darker) that i would've loved, for example, still holding out hope that grace's deal with Tina makes the girls her personal feedees, and anything related to health checkups for their weight just "Gets lost in transit", allowing them to grow fatter and fatter for her pleasure, like in LWS but on a larger (literally and figuratively) scale. Have Tina's be a deal with the devil, as she saved them from Sandy, but only by swapping who was the feeder with her pigs, the fact that sandy got brought away in grace's limo rather than a cop car makes me hope that she's being "rehabilitated" into a malleable pet for Graces pleasure(Let's not forget this is Grace "If you leave me i'll fucking kill you" Teiai.) And NLB 2 will be the 4 (5 if my hopes for sandy come to fruition) dealing with grace in their own ways, i.e Sarah realizes how fucked the situation is and is trying to find loopholes to get her and her friends out of it, only for Grace to use the power of money to close those doors, never out right stopping her protection because she finds the attempts amusing and ego-boosting for her. Fiina gives a nihilistic shrug and just rolls with it, since it makes her boyfriend like her more, Tina tries to join Sarah but then realizes that this would screw over her and Sydney, so she just goes along with it, and Sydney finds it arousing as she gets the loss of control rush that she got with sandy but without the serial killer undertones, more she's the fat cat in grace's lap, and she can take pride in that. These are just examples i can think of based off of previous parts of the story, but something like that IMO could make NLB's story a bit better, but also spare the boredom that plagued NLB as it crawled along, since NLB 2 will have the ever encompassing theme of weight gain within it, as they are now graces pets/toys and have to find a way out of this situation, or come to accept that they will blob out, no matter what.

TL;DR Someone who wants darker themes in his fat porn hoping that they come into NLB 2 and make it much more engaging.
>>44307
someone will
>>44292
Go away, Kip.
>>44326
Well if someone does, we are deleting it immediately!
>>44324
If someone, it's going to be Sandy who gets fattened up by Grace as "revenge". What else could happen to her?
>>44324

You should shoot me a message at Nevoki on DA since you seem to value the plot of comics just as much as the gaining.
>>44324
What the fuck please learn to paragraph, my eyes are bleeding.
>>44194
Ayo I'm that guy from patreon that tried to raise criticisms then got dogpiled on, my name on there's Traegerthorn. I actually did message Kip on there in a DM with more extensive critique, but literally all he said was "I see why you feel that way, but don't rush to conclusions before the rest of the pages are out."

Well now more pages have come out since I messaged him and it hasn't exactly "fixed" anything or proven that what he did was a good call. It was a horribly shallow and lazy way to end a comic, not to mention a fetish comic.

As much as Kip may hate to admit it, people only come to this comic to wank their willies to some proper fats, that's literally the only people paying him for this comic. Yet he does the exact opposite of what they want, claiming artistic integrity and freedom to draw what he wants. While that's all well and good, it does make sense of the atrocious writing. Personal preferences does not excuse dog shit writing.

I'm just waiting for him to start those short one-shot comics or get on to the bigger comic project based in a university. I only hope he listens to what we've said for once and implements these concerns into his future writing. But if he doesn't, well, looks like it'll be a few more years of Kip angering the fans who know he's capable of so much better.
>>44320
im not sure if thats true or not but if so araki is many miles above kip. i know toriyama is well known for making it up as he goes along and plot? whats that? but kip? kip isnt even trying. this comic is terrible. jmho. the plot isnt very good and the belly content is severely lacking. im reminded of craving control but imo that had too much plot and nowhere near enough belly content. at least the plot there was half decent. noun doesnt make anywhere near what kip does so whats kips excuse? at over $4K/month on patreon kip is close to $50K/yr which most people dream of making and all hes doing is drawing. the least he could do is make sure it doesnt suck.
Hey I like the sound of a university setting! The school stuff was my favorite parts of BWS and I think university is an optimal setting for stuffing because (in canada at least) dorm dining halls usually work on an all you can eat model. You combine that with the fact that these are teenagers who haven't really left their parents and it creates some great results
If NLB doesn't end on Sydney convincing Tina to give in and stuff her face it's going to be the biggest disappointment ever. I'm ready for that disappointment.
Logged on to Deviant Art today and see a poll from Kip asking people if they would pay 40-60 dollars for a full physical copy of NLB. Nearly half say yes. 57% say no.
>>44472
> pay 40-60 dollars for a full physical copy of NLB.
>NLB being worth 40-60 dollars
>43% of his fanbase actually agreeing to this

Is this even real life anymore
>>44498
Kip is a brand, could sell toilet paper at that price at that point.
>>44565

Now to sit back and wait for the complaints.
Nowt more erotic to me than a chaste kiss and then worrying what happened to the girl that told you to fuck off


Also yeah grace is totally recruiting sandy but who cares anymore
>>44565
Suddenly I realize the heavy similitudes between NLB and the Prison Break TV show. Same weird annoying cliffhangers and scenarists on drugs.
>>44565
I guess kip really is trying to have realisitc characters, they already have lesbian bed death
My bet is that Grace is going to make Sandy huge while she has her locked up.
>>44620

That or Sandy's gonna be stuffing some new bitches of hers that she met in there. xD
>>44620
Would this comic be saved if she was contracting sandy to feed kip?
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What do you think about Kip's idea of sell NLB physical copy to 30 or 40 dollars?
https://www.deviantart.com/kipteitei/poll/Would-you-buy-a-physical-copy-of-NLB-for-30-40--7696131
>>44712
WHAT THE HELL?
>>44712
Honestly I would, I'm a sucker for physical copies.
>>44712
>Buying physical copy of the thing that lost my interest near the start
How'd he get this idea in his head, Comicsgate or Potato Fantasy and does he even know what to buy and how to go about it?
>>44712
Wasn't this JUST discussed?>>44712
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No clue why that tagged twice.
>>44723
wow this was awful
WELP
When Kip posts their thoughts on NLB later I'm for sure gonna be pointing out the stuff I didn't like because boy this was trash. I'm braver than the marines.
Apparantly, Kip has been talked into doing a brief, 5 pageish lesbo session between Sydney and Tina, as a sort of epilogue.

WHY IN THE FUCK WASN'T THAT PART OF THE ORIGINAL PLAN?
>>44727
Kip has Cthulhu logic, if someone tells you you'll lose your sanity :)
Fuck you faggots, NLB was a good comic and Kip is an amazing and talented artist, I’d like to see you fuckers try and make a good wg comic like NLB
i think its hilarious u kids talking shit about Kip. u wouldnt say this shit to him at Comiket, hes jacked. not only that but he wears the freshest clothes, eats at the chillest restaurants and hangs out with the hottest dudes. yall are pathetic
>>44731
Hi Kip, your comic sucks.
>>44731
Yea, people don’t get that Kip is very talented, and it isn’t just his comics, it’s his art as well

These faggots don’t realize he is the cutesexyrobutts of the fat artist community
>>44732
You will refer to me as MemeLord, mortal
>>44731
do you know who joe is?
>>44723
Fuck it Kip! You are NOT gonna be making us create a NLB 2 thread! Not now, nor EVER! >:(
Sandy lost weight haha
This is hilarious, people bitching and moaning over a mediocre fictional wg comic every week. > inb4 someone calls me "Kip".
>>44731
>he's jacked
WAS jacked until he decided to be a girl, stopped working out and literally starting doing thinks and dressing to fool idiots into thinking he's a good artist/writer off that alone.
>>44737
ligma balls
>>44723
Alright guys the shit show is over (for now), post your ratings.

I give this a solid 5.5/10, as much as i bitched about it and as shitty as the art got in the latter third it was still fappable to an extent. The beginning parts held promise but a lot of the story beats either missed the mark or was simply unnecessary. The stuffing scenes were okay up until the final act, most of the characters that were expounded upon was pointless (fat Fina was a huge waste, and Sarah was simply there, there was no point in having), the ending was completely shit(The final "stuffing" scene sucked, no real strong interaction between a stuffed Sydney and Tiina,having it feel like it ended abruptly). It started off kinda strong and went to shit, so there's that. Hopefully(Though not likely) Kip's second attempt is more streamlined and focuses on a single concise element, and isn't just a bunch mish mashed ideas forced onto us.
>>44731
Kek at all the people who can't tell this is obviously satire
>>44723
I CALLED THIS SHIT WEEKS AGO HOLY FUCK THIS IS PREDICTABLE AS FUCK
>>44730
>good comic
pfft.
he killed a possible lesbo relationship, built a really nice stuffing scene for 2 panels and then killed it, ended the Sandy arc on “hey thanks for food rape” childish story logic, and etc.

Do you need more?
>>44746
i don't fap to NLB and have low standards for enjoying shit, so i think kip's great and don't have any personal criticisms. people do bring up valid points about the writing (that kip usually dismisses as "different tastes" from what i've been told) but every time a page isnt interesting it's fun to see how many people yell "scandanavian tranny bad, me want secks >:(" and expect him to change their comic's pacing all of a sudden. she doesn't need to appeal to everyone, kip's already making a living off of them patreon shekels
>>44759
>she
Gender meme aside though, you treat Kip abusing the size of his fanbase as an excuse to cherrypick opinions from his comment sections to ignore criticism like it's a good thing. It's the classic popular != good. No matter which way you look at it, dude's comics are an unfocused mess with empty promises and weird plot non-sequiturs. There are teases at fetish content everywhere, yet payoffs grow increasingly sparse. Since Kip lives in his little personal mental paradise where he only sees happy comments and earns a teacher's salary off of Patreon alone, he's entirely discarded any sense of personal accountability or desire to improve, so it's all just a little disgusting to observe as someone who's been watching the fat community grow and evolve for over a decade, seeing new blood raise the standards for what a good community should be like while Kip's has stagnated. He kind of reminds me of fucking FaF the way he operates now.
>>44761
eh. to each their own. i think kip's paintings are nice, not sure how she's abusing the size of her fanbase. she just got into the community early and found her following. i don't really expect her to raise any standards, what she does now is what i really enjoy

anyway, the threads bumplocked, so have a nice day. hope you can find an ever-improving story-rich comic with lots of fanservice to masturbate to.
Why in god's nonexistent name would you buy a physical copy of this. It would read and pace nothing like a manga, and is buttfuck terrible by the way.
People will throw their money at anything.
>>44761
Nonsense, FaF provided a good amount of payoffs in his work, more than he even needed really. The issue with him was that he acted as a complete dick (and still does).
>>44773
>Why in god's nonexistent name would you buy a physical copy of this
I'm somewhat tempted for meme value. Especially considering this will probably be a super limited run
Oh, and isn't kip one of like three patreons that chris-chan supports?
But where on earth would I keep a fetish meme book? I can't have anyone know that I spent $30-40 on this shit
>>44723
So Sandy has rat control powers now? Wasn't she eating them/feeding them to Sydney before? Fuck, who cares, not like the writer of this train wreck does. This is one of the few series where I'd be happy if a "rocks fall, everyone dies" situation happened because I can't give a fuck about any of the characters I'm supposed to be rooting for because there's nothing remotely likable about any of them.

>>44730
>good comic
No it wasn't, at all. The art was fine for what it was, but the writing was absolutely atrocious and what most people are rightfully complaining about, that and being cucked out of fanservice for what is a blatant fetish comic trying to pretend to be something else.

>>44773
Sadly when it comes to anime, writing is the least important thing. People will buy complete shit if it's drawn well and it's a fact that's been compounded into reality time and time again. There are works considerably worse than this writing-wise outside this fetish that actually have their own animes and shit now.

>>44761
>He kind of reminds me of fucking FaF the way he operates now.
Agreed, although Faf is worse on his supporters, for now. We'll see if Kip starts doxxing people over leaks, other slights, other shit I may not be aware of.

>>44776
>isn't kip one of like three patreons that chris-chan supports?
People like chris-chan are the target audience for patreons that consistently shit on their eternally brain addled and blind supporters. They're going to be paying for crap like this for the rest of their lives and loving it.
>>44779
>So Sandy has rat control powers now? Wasn't she eating them/feeding them to Sydney before?

I'm okay with that, it's the only salvageable part in that mess of a conclusion.

And can kip keep Sandy thin ffs? She looks much more threatening looking like this. Not ALL the characters need to turn into cows. How the fuck is there any gravitas in your story if all the cast gets the same treatment?
>>44774
>>44779
I was speaking more in the sense of his paradoxical increasing disregard for any input from the community, yet desire to come off as well-liked by them. Maybe Axel-Rosered is a better example, though both started out decent and just kind of downward-spiraled into the memes we know them as today
I'd buy a physical copy of BWS if Kip went over his original lines with his improved art style, but NLB isn't worth it imo.
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Well, it's finally over.
So much wasted potential, so many plotholes and non-sequiturs. Kip jumped the fucking shark and failed to stick the landing. The writing was dumb, and Kip's trigger-happy banhammer over criticism is dumber. What could have been his magnum opus is a disappointing and overlong chronicle.
That's why my final rating for this fetish comic... is a lukewarm rat out of ten.

As for NLB 2, I have no expectations. After so many disappointing moments of this 264 PAGE COMIC that spanned for TWO FUCKING YEARS, I have no hope for the sequel.
>>44784
Can't judge for myself. I never followed Axel-Rosered, his artstyle is absolute trash for my standards.

>>44807
I'm not so pessimistic. Now that he knows how far he can go before people starts jumping at his throat, he should do better next time. Unless that is he can't control his prey drive YET AGAIN. Kip, you need some serious puppy training *ominous stare*

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