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Anonymous 03/17/2018 (Sat) 00:48:20 No. 2417 [Reply]
The nurse walked into the room, dessed in blue scrubs, surgical mask over his face. Lupida never saw his face, but she knew him. The nurse's eyes were looking all over her body. Lupida looked back with fear.

"Please… What are you going to do?"

"I'm just going to get you cleaned up, like I always do, that's all."

The nurse's cheeks raised up as he smiled under his mask. He left for a minute and returned with his equipment; body wash, gloves, a bucket, a sponge, and lots of clean towels.

Lupida weighed close to 650 pounds. She couldn't move or stand up because of her size. Her hips, thighs, and ass spread out across her queen-sized bed, where she hadn't moved from in months. Every few days, a nurse comes to bathe her. The female nurse comes most of the time. But she takes a day off. Then the male nurse comes.

The nurse helped Lupida sit up on the bed. And as best she could, she shifted and lifted her huge fat legs, thighs, and ass for the nurse so he could put towels under her. Then he went to the bathroom to fill his bucket with warm water for the body wash.

"Just sponge bath. All I need is a sponge bath. Okay?"

"Ok, are you ready now? Take off your nightgown."

Lupida wasn't ashamed to be naked in front of him. He had seen so much of her already. She wiggled and pulled her nightgown over her head and threw it into a corner. It was a size 4x nightgown, and it was still too small to cover her anyway.

The nurse dunked the sponge in the soapy water, and began bathing her by rubbing all over her arms and legs and naked body. At least Lupida liked this part. And she knew that she needed it. She closed her eyes to be in a different place while the nurse sponged and massaged the funkiness from her skin. The dank smell of sweaty skin slowly gave way to the smell of "ocean breeze".

But the nurse saved her breasts and belly for last. He lathered up her big, drooping breasts, then lifted them up to wash underneath giving them a little extra squeeze and caress. Each time he did that he looked up at Lupida, and she knew what he was thinking. He also did the same thing for her huge belly, spending an extra minute or so, cleaning around her pubic hair. He took extra time on them, but he didn't take long.

"Okay, now roll over."

"Please… Oh please…"

"Now now, you know I have to clean down there too."

Lupida began to sob as tears welled in her eyes. She shifted her weight to one side. The nurse then lifted one of her huge hips up and pushed it over, leaving Lupida laying on her side.

Then the nurse went to change out the bucket for fresh water. And when he returned he put on his long rubber gloves. Starting with one clean dry rag, he soaked it in the water, lifted her fat butt cheek up, and scrubbed down between her butt cheeks and into her crotch, as far as he could reach.

Again and again, the nurse took a soapy rag, and cleaned out the lingering smelly filth from between her crotch, and from between her butt cheeks. The first rags he used came out smelly and brown. Then the next rags came out smelly and tan. And then they were just smelly.

After so many rags, he finally washed her ass and crotch out clean from the filth, and patted it dry. Lupida continued to sob.

"There. Now isn't that better?"

"Don't. You don't have to do it. I won't tell anybody."

"No you won't tell. You never tell."

The nurse then took off his filth-covered gloves and threw them away. Then he reached in to his supply bag and took out a large tube of KY jelly. He squirted a big fistful of KY into his hand. Then he lifted the wobbly, fat ass cheek of her now sweet-smelling ass, and smeared the entire handful into her ass and crotch.

"No, no, please…"

"Don't worry. You'll enjoy it. You always do."

Then the nurse worked his ungloved hand deep into Lupida's crotch, as deep as his forearm, and almost to his elbow. His fingers slipped and probed between her crushing thighs and ass cheeks for anything that felt like it might be a hole. Then, he felt something. He pressed his middle finger into it. And it was warm and slippery…

"Ay! No, please…"

His middle finger slipped deeper in, making Lupida pant and whimper. And soon he reached her g-spot, a little rough patch just inside her pussy. When he tickled it, all 650 pounds of her convulsed at that one movement rippling the fat all over her body. One of her arms was pinned under her own tremendous weight. And she could only swing her other arm around in a vain attempt to push him away. She cried, but cried quietly, because even as she tried to stop him, she was about to come.

But the nurse wasn't just aiming for her pussy. Once he reached into her pussy, and touched her G-spot, he knew that his thumb would be right where her ass hole was. He flexed his thumb inward. It landed right against her strong, puckered-up sphincter. The nurse worked his thumb around in a circle for a few moments before pressing in against that strong muscle. It weakened up and let his thumb pass by.

"Stop it. Stop it."

He worked his thumb into her ass hole past the knuckle, then worked it back out again, and back in again, making his knuckle "thump" against her sphincter each time. He worked both her ass hole and her g-spot like that, and kept Lupida coming over and over. With each orgasm she would twist and shake her whole super-size body as much as she could, until she was out of breath, motionless except for her breathing, laying on her side with her ultra-wide ass exposed.

"Now you are ready."

Lupida couldn't do anything to resist. All of her energy had been spent cumming from him using his fingers on her. Now, the nurse took off his scrubs and got in a position right behind her huge massive ass. With one hand he lifted her leg and thigh. With the other hand he lifted her cheek and pried open her ass crack. And without looking, just from memory, he guided his hard cock right into her pussy.

Lupida could barely lift a hand in resistence as his cock plunged deep into her now clean, wet pussy. She didn't have any more energy to give. When she came again, she could only wheeze and take a deep breath, as her tight pussy twitched and squeezed around his cock.

And with every thrust he made, the 650 pounds of fat around her body bounced against him, sending a wave of fat rolling from her ass, up her back, and to her neck. He couldn't see her huge, fat, wobbling ass engulf his cock, only to swallow it up again and again. But he could feel the entire quarter-ton of her twitch when his cock made its maximum thrust.

He came hard, letting his cum squirt deep inside her. And the second suirt too. As he pulled out of her a wad of cum squirted just outside of her pussy. He let her huge ass cheek fall, and it squished his cum all up and down her ass crack And he wiped the last drip from his cock on her ass. Once he was done, he rolled her back down on to her back.

"So, the regular nurse will be here tomorrow. But I will be back to take over for her again in a couple weeks, ok?"

Lupida heard him, but she was in no condition to answer. With her body so out of shape, the orgasms had taken too much out of her. As the nurse put his scrubs back on, Lupida just laid there, panting, moaning, tears still welling in her eyes. The nurse then pulled her covers over her naked body. And the last thing she heard was the door close right before she drifted off to sleep.
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>>2428
TDS in full effect still I see.
>>2430

I never said that. All I said was that things aren't immune to criticism based solely off of whether the aspects in question were intended or not. If you've ever been let down by the ending of a film, or don't like how a director interpreted the adaptation of a book, you can t*alk shit. Even if every choice made was "what they were going for."
>>2436
Anyway, I was never one of those idiots who got all pissy because Dobby had a slightly different shade of brown or whatever.

There's a difference here that you're missing. You can criticize Fifty Shades for having terrible characters and a bad story but you can't criticize it for being "rapey" or "unsettling" because that was the intent. You could argue those elements were poorly done, but just saying it has them is not a criticism in and of itself, especially since it was intended.
>>2437
Lol so you can only criticize things that are rapey by accident??
>>2448
If that's all you took from what I said, then I suppose so.

Anonymous 03/21/2018 (Wed) 05:03:46 No. 2440 [Reply]
(Inspired by the video)

The service was getting close to ending in a tiny African church. Toward the end of the service the preacher always asked the congregation if they needed a miracle:

"Who among you is sick? Who among you is injured? Who among you needs to be healed? Who among you needs a miracle?"

Up stood a woman near the back row. She was short, and a plump 250 pounds. Her husband stayed seated beside her, surprised that she had stood up.

"Preacher, I need your help. I am so fat. I'm not attractive anymore. I diet, I exercise, but I just cannot lose any weight. Can you help me?"
"Yes I can, child. Come up to the front."

She walked up to the front of the church, and looked out at the congregation.

"Are you ready to be healed?"
"Yes I am."
"Then lay down on the floor, in front of the congregation, and let the power of god heal your sickness."

The preacher knew he had to put on a show for the congregation. So he held the bible in the air with one hand, and recited some bible verses, sprinkled with a few local witchcraft words thrown in. Then the preacher waved and shook his other hand all around the woman's body. When he did, she shook and shimmied her body underneath his hand too. So the preacher thought she was getting into the show too.

"I command this demon of fat to exit this woman's body! By the power of god, this woman will be sexy! This woman will be attractive! This woman will be desirable to her husband!"

The preacher kept waving his hand, and she kept wiggling and squirming on the floor, not able to control her movements. As the preacher spoke and waved his hand around her, she moved more and more wildly. Even though she wasn't in control of herself, the preacher still thought she was in on the show.

"Demon! I cast you out! Everyone! Witness the power of god!"

She still squirmed on the floor, wide-eyed, not able to understand what was happening to her body. Then her arms, legs, and belly wiggled, and squirmed and crawled with masses of flesh, as if they were moving around under her skin. The preacher was focused on the congregation. But the congregation gasped when they saw the crawling lumps under her skin.

"I cast you out! Out! Out!"

Her body continued to squirm with masses moving and crawling under her skin. But she did not get thinner. As more and more of the creeping masses crawled around her, some of them crawled together and clumped into solid masses. Solid masses of fat.

Her belly creeped and crawled, and wobbled around as the clumps merged together, and tripled the size of her belly. More of the masses crawled under her skin and into her breasts, making them swell up and out of her bra. She reached with her arms to cover herself. But her arms, crawling as well, were suddenly huge and almost too heavy to lift. She could only let them fall over her chest, just in time to stop her breasts from spilling out in the open.

"What is happening to me?" she yelled.

Gasps and screams came from the congregation. That's when the preacher turned around to finally see what was he had been ignoring. He dropped his microphone and stepped back in shock.

Her legs shook back and forth as the fat masses streamed down into her feet, creating huge cankles where her ankles used to be. Her calves inflated like party baloons, And her thighs rolled and rippled as they over-filled instantly, like a wave hitting the beach. And when the "wave" broke, her hips ripped through the sides of her dress, leaving only the seams.

"Preacher! What is happening to me?" she cried.
"Ummm…uhhh…" The preacher had no idea. This wasn't part of the show.

As she tried to get to her feet, her two tremendous ass cheeks bottomed out and tore completely through her panties

The preacher turned and ran from the church. By that time the dozen or so people there had already fled. That is, everybody but her husband. Her husband just sat there, gaping and dumbfounded.

"Ahhhgghh! Look at me!" she yelled at the top of her lungs.

Wearing only her ripped dress, she tried to cover her mammoth, and almost nude body in the church. But feeling shamed and humiliated, she walked home as fast as she could carry her newly fat body. As she walked, the last blobs of fat wormed behind her and into her ass cheeks. Her ass was now so big it was knocking her off balance wobbling back and forth as she took each step.

With one hand scooping up her sagging breasts, and the other hand holding her dress down over her huge ass, she made her way back home. And with each step her rippling fat ripped her already ruined dress a little more..

Finally her dress gave out as her tits and ass filled up to their full capacity. She stopped thinking of modesty, and let the dress fall to the ground, and walked and wobbled home, completely in the nude.

And her husband was right behind her every step of the way….looking her body up and down…admiring her new tits, belly, and ass…and a tiny little smirk appeared on his face.

"Thank god." he said.
not bad

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Ideas Thread Anonymous 04/04/2017 (Tue) 14:27:22 No. 926 [Reply]
hey check it out, its a thread where you can dump all of your ideaguy ideas for. just post whatever you've got in your heart/boner/vag/inspiration place. male & furry ideas are perfectly fine.
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wtf
What's the deal with this thread exactly? One desperate anon's attempt to get the attention of some writefag or…?
>>1086 I don't know I wrote cus I was high and felt like expressing my subconscious. Found out that I like writing that type of shit. It can also give ideas for something to try in real life.
A hair metal/glam rock band with the most effimate designs and figures sign a deal with the devil to reach radio success. At the cost of reaching moderate commercial success, the band must continue making charting hits, or else their figures may break seams instead of sales.

ft. big hair w/stretched leather pants, the gayer the better (unless if str8ness is needed) and maybe even some straight up gay sex for some people

i'm just super suprised at how there's literally no r34 of hair metal bands
Dumping this here because I've had very little motivation to write over the past few years so I'm probably not going to do anything with it as well as a fear that I definitely don't have the writing chops to describe some of the increasingly explicit scenes I want to show. Also it'll probably won't appeal to a lot of people due to a primary focus on male weight gain which is something that's started to creep into my tastes recently. I also don't really know how to end it, but maybe if I actually started to write a natural conclusion would eventually come to me.

Mutual weight gain story with male focus about a couple who both start putting on weight, which in turn causes them to lose physical attraction to one another and thus fueling even more eating as a coping mechanism. The two grow colder to one another as they become increasingly lazy. Scenes over the course of the story showcase the two pigging out together, and some looks into the man's work life as his female co-workers take note of his ever-expanding waistline and subtly tease him about it to his face and behind his back as he continually eats junk for lunch and outgrows his wardrobe. One scene takes a look at a failed attempt at sex after months of no action where the two realize their bellies have become so big that it is now physically impossible for the two to fuck.

With time the husband and wife both bloat up well into morbidly obese territory. One day at a party a fit mutual male friend walks up to the two and explains that he's a swinger, and that he and his wife have a curiosity about larger women and would love to have the wife for a threesome. The husband is extremely embarrassed, but can't come up with a reason to object due to the wide physical and emotional gap between the two.

Both jealous and insecure from his wife's increasingly frequent flings with the other couple, the husband turns to the internet in order to try and get some action of his own. This leads him to discovering a feeder community, and he starts to post body-only photos and videos under a fake name/screenname.

Eventually he posts in a hookup thread, and is PMed by an attractive fit woman who's only a few hour drive away from where he lives. He begins to drive up to visit her on the weekends, and her incorporating her feeder kink into the bedroom once again accelerates his formerly plateauing weight gain, often stopping to force him to finish sweets or enormous fast food meals as he comes close to cumming before she'll finish him off. The husband is torn between his feelings of embarrassment over his weight being constantly highlighted by her, his desire for sex, and the uncontrollable appetite that had developed over the years leaving him unable to turn down any food in his presence as long as he has room for it.

Back at home the wife begins to mock the husband his weight skyrockets past hers, which he usually fires back about her own still-massive weight. At one point the couple can no longer physically fit in the same bed, and they have a second king sized delivered so the two can sleep separately. When the delivery man sees the two and realizes why a second bed was being moved into the bedroom, he makes fun of the man to his face once the wife has left.

Eventually the husband grows too big to comfortably fit behind the wheel to drive, forcing him to work from home rather than the office. This also means he can no longer drive to his online partner's house, and after only one skipped week explains the situation to her and she begins to drive up to his place instead. The wife pokes fun at the two the first time they meet, but otherwise leaves them alone.

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Love Hina WG story by dr-back-jack Anonymous 03/16/2018 (Fri) 14:23:43 No. 2413 [Reply]
I was just reading dr-black-jack's Love Hina WG story when I got to chapter 13a - which I found to be missing, upon closer inspection 13b, 14a, and 14d are missing as well. does anyone have these saved or know of any copies of these chapters? I was really enjoying reading it, it'll be so sad if they're lost forever
*I just found a copy of chapter 13a, but can't find anything anywhere of chapter 13b or any of the others.


http://orig12.deviantart.net/9223/f/2008/090/d/4/love_hina_wg_story_chapter_13a_by_dr_black_jack.html

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Anonymous 12/13/2016 (Tue) 18:49:07 No. 9 [Reply]
I suppose this can be the thread for male fat/weight gain fics.
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>>2225
I know the story. You are right, it's gone. Maybe someone has a copy or backup.

Here's an interactive I add to from time to time.
http://old.bearchive.com/~addventure/game1/trees//tagcharts/root748159.html
Adipose-Rex's "School Days" is phenomenal
>>2339
>four THOUSAND pounds like its nothing
>no detail at all besides "yeah I gained another two hundred pounds it was cool"

Waste of time.
>>2350
But I like bullshit!
Gonna pitch a story idea: Two guys are roommates in college who don't get along because of their differences (say, one's a nerd and one's an athlete). Then they both land girlfriends who are both talented feeders, and slowly find common ground and become friends as they gain weight.

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Long Story Anonymous 04/21/2017 (Fri) 07:35:52 No. 1107 [Reply]
Hi,
I've started writing a WG story that I've been planning for a long time and which I intend to be around full book-length. It contains themes of slob, BDSM, F/F, and probably more in the future.
(I have 13000 words right now at 4 chapters, with at least 15 more planned out). I've been on a long hiatus from writing stuff for a while, so I would appreciate any feedback, suggestions, or requests!

http://iceblazethequick.deviantart.com/art/Blossoming-Rose-663039982
http://iceblazethequick.deviantart.com/art/Blossoming-Rose-Part-2-663042045
http://iceblazethequick.deviantart.com/art/Blossoming-Rose-Part-3-668135847
http://iceblazethequick.deviantart.com/art/Blossoming-Rose-Part-4-676181281

(Chapter 4 are when things start to pick up, the first 3 are a lot of setup.)
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>>1738
For one thing, it's two different people. he was "A very concerned fan". If you're gonna get mad, get it right.

>>1735
I don't think anyone here wants you to stop writing the way you're writing, my concern is more the fact that you haven't labeled each chapter, making it hard to 'skip over' sections we don't like. It would be amazing if you added them :)
>>1733
I think the reason this started was because he didn't want there to be any shit :^)
https://iceblazethequick.deviantart.com/art/Blossoming-Rose-part-8-702079580

New chapter; I'm planning on doing a little timeskip next chapter, so if you're reading this then please let me know what you want more of! I'll try and centerthe next chapter around whatever seems to be the most popular theme.
Your a good author . Do you take commissions?

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Back in Action FakeDude 12/06/2017 (Wed) 17:18:08 No. 2128 [Reply]
Hey gang, been a little bit. Sort of had a minor freakout over some privacy things. But I'm writing and posting to my DA again. I put a small teaser for a new vignette series that I will be adding to from time to time. Please read and tell me what you think.
https://fakedude10.deviantart.com/art/Concept-Test-Charlie-and-Tracy-718747542
Really good
https://fakedude10.deviantart.com/art/The-Growing-of-Claire-Dunphy-Family-Meeting-722917503?ga_submit_new=10%3A1514705176 Yo crew, made some more stuff. Love for you to check it out :). Have a great new years!
http://fav.me/dc3j0ky start of something new! Hope you all enjoy it.
http://fav.me/dc5duul I wrote another addition to Claire's story. I think the ending could have been better, but it seemed more important to get it up.

Favorite stories FC Punk 12/12/2016 (Mon) 14:33:50 No. 3 [Reply]
Let's try to drum up some discussion for a new board. Favorite stories, stories that do it for you, that you read over and over again and that never gets old. I have a few.

When I got into weight gain fiction a favorite writer of mine was Zarbon, who has since disappeared from the scene, but these three I continue to go back to.

Dan & Steph
http://www.angelfire.com/weird2/mcoddles/steph.html

Claire, one and two,
http://www.dimensionsmagazine.com/Weight_Room/stories/claire1.html
http://www.dimensionsmagazine.com/Weight_Room/stories/claire2.html
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>>1023
The first one can be found at the dimensions magazine site:
http://www.dimensionsmagazine.com/Weight_Room/stories/girl_next_door.html
Bump
Every time I try to post a link to Deviantart I get banned as if I linked to a PPD site, is this happening to anyone else? Am I doing something wrong?
>>23
Part 5 is up.

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Weight gain story Anonymous 03/06/2018 (Tue) 17:51:15 No. 2367 [Reply]
I was wondering if anyone had any good stories revolving around the following topics? The story that I love the most is
http://www.dimensionsmagazine.com/forums/showthread.php?t=105090

I really love how it focuses on a girl with a fast metabolism, slow realistic weight gain, denial of weight gain, bitchy attitude, I would love if there was smoking in the story.

Anyone know of anymore stories like this?

Thanks!
Also where the main character is not into working out and uses her metabolism to stay thin

Weight gain story Anonymous 07/09/2017 (Sun) 12:33:35 No. 1546 [Reply]
I donn't know where to post this so I'm posting it here. There was this weight gain story that I read years ago about a girl that was sent to a very old victorian boarding school by her unknowing parents. After the school year started she noticed that every subject was in one way or another related to food and all the girls in the school (it was a girl only school) were encouriged to eat as much as possible. She refused to eat and story ended on sort of cliffhanger when she was dragged in a room in which they take girls that refuse to eat or rebell in other ways. Story takes place in relatively modern times and if it helps it was on a very 90's looking website with black backgroung and white text. I've been trying to find it for years, if nothing just to read a second part (if it exists at all) but all my searches have prooven futile.
Bump
Didn't somebody else ask for this on lost stories thread?

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