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Interest in Art Games? Anonymous 06/16/2017 (Fri) 14:14:46 No. 1449 [Reply]
Hey,
I'm​ a game designer interested in programming an art/alt game about feedism/fat girls but not necessarily something meant to be fapped to. Are there any writers interested in working with me?
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I'd be down for it.
Oh, Yes
I have decent experience with writing and coding. I'd be in.
I'm intrigued. Want a writing sample? What's your concept for the game?
totally down as a writer, would be interested to learn some programming stuff! weightgaintales.tumblr.com

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Weekly Writing Club Anonymous 06/29/2017 (Thu) 15:13:02 No. 1512 [Reply]
The first step in writing well is… writing.

I've tried to write some WG fiction before, but it took forever to finish and, by the end, I wasn't even that happy with the end product. So in order to practice writing and releasing things without agonizing for years, I've decided to set some deadlines by creating a weekly writing club.

Every week there will be a short theme or concept that the story should include, and there will be one week to write a story for it. We're not starting quite yet, since I want to give people a little bit of time to join up if they want to.

Let me know if you've got some ideas for how I should organize this thing, or if you want to be a part of it.

Remember, it doesn't have to be long or be good, it just has to be.
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So how'd this turn out?
Do you mind posting some of entries here as well? Would be curious to see other's work to improve my own,
>>1548
Pretty well tbh
>>1549
Hessian's collecting the entries here
http://mashuky.deviantart.com/favourites/73666468/Weekly-Weight-In-stories

And if anyone wants to get in on it, this week's prompt is Dreams and Dreaming. It ends saturday, so you've got all kinds of time.
>>1553
Awesome! Thank you for this.

What do? Anonymous 06/27/2017 (Tue) 08:54:24 No. 1500 [Reply]
Aloha everyone, how's it hanging? I really want to break into this kind of writing, but I honestly don't know where to begin. Do you fine individuals have any babby's first pointers for a total newfag? When I do actually start putting out content, I'll be sure to share it here.
>>1500
Hullo there.
The main rule, if there is one, is to write what you want to read. A lot of us write because there's so little of what we want to see - this is a very niche niche after all.
There's really not a lot differentiating this sort of writing from any other sort of erotica, from a mechanical perspective. Make a character you like, think of a storyline that sounds fun, then just give it a shot - just like anything else.
Aim low to start with; I know that when I started off I always wanted to write 50,000-word epics spanning years, but that sort of thing always falls through. Try writing a single scene or day in a character's life, and move up from there.

If there's anything more specific you need advice on, feel free to ask - those are the basics of the basics though.
>>1503
Same

Request for Critique Anonymous 05/19/2017 (Fri) 20:46:58 No. 1322 [Reply]

Hey all, I tried writing a thing at like 4 in the morning, and I was wondering if you could tear into it and tell me what I need to improve. I did my best to pick up any spelling and grammar issues before submission.
http://daktamagnee.deviantart.com/art/Come-To-Bed-681495638

Also, if the past-present tense thing is weird, it's cos I messed it up mid story.

Cheers
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>>1386
Is that a good thing or…?
Okay, how about some actual critique instead?
>>1384
This is really well written! Plus glad to see some Dark Souls fats story. Please, keep it up! Maybe add a little more dialogue or inner monologue, but it's great so far!
>>1386
The fat soul, seeped in the blood of many, traversed the abyss to bring itself to a worthy wielder. Was this fate? Or perhaps the machinations of a more sinister foe…
http://batgirl-fatgirl.deviantart.com/art/The-X-Files-WG-Adephagia-Episode-1-687532808

Hey if we're doing general critiques I'd love to get some feedback on this. I tried really hard to abide by the structure of your regular monster of the week X-Files episode and keep the rapport of Mulder and Scully, no idea if I was successful or not.

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Creamy loli Anonymous 06/15/2017 (Thu) 12:56:46 No. 1442 [Reply]
Hi Elite,

Does anyone know where the Meet The Neighbours cream stuffing loli story went? It's dissapeared.

Also
>itt: Stories you feel guilty after nutting to

IDEAS TO MAKE A GOOD FREE WEIGHT GAIN GAME MAKING A WEIGHT GAIN GAME 06/14/2017 (Wed) 03:37:05 No. 1433 [Reply]
so basically i understand everything i need to it is a literature choice based games most items are interactive she gains weight based on food and objects respond based on her weight if so far she has a sister named rosie and i want her to be her feeder but i what the story to go much further figured you guys could help
sorry for grammar mistakes i'm pretty excited i got over 2 major hurdles in the creative process in 1 day
SOME QUESTIONS THAT NEED ANSWERS
1. what is the maximum size she should be
2. other players
3. why does she gain weight
4. is she embarrassed by it
5. does she make other people gain too
*5 is it by being near her or is she making her friends gain
LETS BUILD A GOOD STORY
WG in fiction mainly has one (or more) of three natures; plot device, characterisation device and theme. There's not that much special about WG lit other than that.
Thematic WG is obviously what bbwchan's interested in the most, but the other two are also pretty useful/important and what I generally look for when working out if I like something or not.

It's cool to explore the effect WG might have on a person's nature, or how their view/reaction to WG may reflect their persona. Like any characterisation device, a good wg lit should add to characterisation but unless they're a RABID ASS GAINER (yes, they do exist but jfc are they rare and scary af irl) it shouldn't be their sole driving force and their life shouldn't revolve around wg alone.

WG can also be part of the plot, but people really screw this up all the time and again, making the whole story just about WG is unnatural and one-dimensional. Like any other plot device it gets boring if overused, especially if left on its own. There should be other plot elements around for it to interact with.

Just like any story, you need to work out the who/what/where/when/how. WG can be tacked-on pretty easily to almost any story, as the writing.com peeps can attest, lol.


So yeah. tl;dr strip out wg, think about a decent story and characters without WG, then ask yourself how it would affect it
also, I recommend looking at the Weight Gaming forum if you haven't already. Don't be afraid to start an idea topic here:
http://www.weightgaming.com/forum/index.php?board=5.0
ANSWERS TO YOUR QUESTIONS
1. what is the maximum size she should be?

I say go for Immobility as a maximum, with it being her little sister's ultimate fetish. This is essentially the point of no return and could even be seen as bad situation for the MC as she is basically forced to keep gaining and be her sister's play thing.

2. other players? Maybe a chubby best friend, a girl who the MC does kind of like, but is unsure about how to feel about her. If you do have the MC fatten others up, you could have this friend be a clue that the MC does enjoy girls with more weight on them, she just didn't know it.


3. why does she gain weight?

I say ignorance at first, she unknowingly gains weight due to her sister's machinations. When she finds out you could have the little sister blackmail her into gaining weight and be her feedee, thus forcing her to gain weight.


4. is she embarrassed by it?

YES! How about she's confused about how she feels on top of this, as the more she gets embarrassed, the more she starts to enjoy the embarrassment. Sort of like a weird turn on for her.


5. does she make other people gain too? As mentioned before, she could have a chubby best friend that she makes gain with her. Perhaps to try and lessen the weight she's gaining, of course this doesn't help and both balloon up. Next I'd have the little sister gain weight, originally she did it subconsciously, as she wants to be thin, but eventually the MC gets her to fatten up. If you go the blackmail route, you could have the MC fatten her to immobility as punishment.


*5 is it by being near her or is she making her friends gain?

I say she makes her friends gain, but it could be interesting to have it be a product of being near her. It would make the sister gaining weight much easier.


LETS BUILD A GOOD STORY

Real Life Weight Gain Stories Anonymous 05/22/2017 (Mon) 20:47:04 No. 1335 [Reply]
Anyone have any good suggestions for accounts of real life weight gains? I'm inspired after reading this:

http://www.savvymom.ca/article/gained-weight-daughter/
These are varied, but some of them are gold!
http://www.freshman15.com/weight-gain-stories/
This one is best one, imo, she REALLY loses all control of her gluttony and blows up huge:
http://www.freshman15.com/weight-gain-stories/freshman-15-gained-overnight.php
>>1345
i find that story hard to believe. why would some accidentally let themselves go that much???

Can someone pls work on claire indulges with mom
I would like to see more activity on Madison's Freshman 15 story. For me, it's by far the best WG story on Writing.com, and it has tons of diferent lines quite interesting.
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1911783-Madisons-Freshman-15
Take a look! ;)
>>1391
Great so far, though agreed with others that I feel Mel needs to start puttin on some weight
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A'ight, so we have three suggestions for Mel gaining weight- any ideas on how to implement this beyond "THEN MEL GOT FATTER BECAUSE OF FOOD"

Weight gain writing is fun, believe me, but in Bobo's very character/story heavy interactive, I like to have more reason behind it than just "and then Mel was magically fatter and that's all we talked about.

Like, yes, Kate is a great cook and that's fun to write about, but like, at the moment, the story is pretty heavily focused on this old roomie drama/ Mel actually being somewhat active for once.

Any fun ideas on how to implement more weight gain? I'm just spitballin' here, people.
>>1403
There's still Mel becoming a guinea pig for science.

You could also have Mel start caring about school (her grades are probably pretty low) which could cause stress-related weight gain.

Another idea is to have some event that makes her go full hermit, causing her to pile on the pounds.

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zobstories Anonymous 05/21/2017 (Sun) 05:15:24 No. 1330 [Reply]
There was a thread of his stories on the last site, I'm specifically looking for a story about Poison Ivy, Harley Quinn, and Catwoman.
Dragon Age story: https://www.docdroid.net/3X2eubT/dragon-age.docx.html

McKayla's New Job Anonymous 04/26/2017 (Wed) 01:09:54 No. 1137 [Reply]
Hey guys, I'm writing an interactive weight gain story, I thought you might enjoy.

I used to really love writing.com but they stopped letting free users create stories, plus they're plastered with ads and slow page loads, so I'm hosting my own site. I'd love it if someone else wanted to add a chapter, but it's fine if you'd just like to read what I've written.

In any case, here's the link. I'd love some feedback and suggestions for the story or the site.

http://ohweight.getenjoyment.net/mckayla/
Link doesn't work
>>1157
work on my machine(tm) here
Wasn't working for me earlier but I'm glad I checked back. What's there so far is really good.

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