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d34d1 No.1687[Reply]

I've been on something of a Lovecraft/Cosmic Horror kick lately, and I started to wonder of there's ever been something like that attempted with WG/Expansion fiction. Does anybody have any examples they think would work? It doesn't even need to be grim and despairing, just the trappings of cosmic horror literature used to justify ridiculous expansion.
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560bc No.1702

>>1698
Yep, those illustrations are where I found it too. I find weight gain as a horrific, negative thing for the protagonist to be pretty tantalizing in it's own right but that's probably because I'm a fucked up bastard.

I've always found Saxxxon's casual, dry approach to mass murder and cannibalization pretty unsettling. But I'm not really a fan of those types of stories or his writing to begin with. He seems to write his characters exactly the same every time, even when it's an established character with a personality.

You remember what that story was called? Interested for curiosities sake.

d8417 No.1712

>>1702
To be quite honest, I'm rather bored of Saxxon's stories for that same reason. That, and selfishness is a huge turn-off for me, so when his planet/reality devouring women are literally the heights of living selfishness it ribs me of any enjoyment I might have.
The Toad Witch story is "Mother of Toads," a 1937 short story by Clark Ashton Smith. You can read it in the Darkhorse Book of Witchcraft anthology https://www.amazon.com/Dark-Horse-Book-Witchcraft/dp/1593071086

d8417 No.1805

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I've still been thinking about this, and given the lack of comments or examples I'm fairly certain there isn't much or anything out there that is a worthwhile read.

Since that's the case, would anybody be willing to workshop ideas? I think it would be interesting exploring a story where the woman is the primary viewpoint character, even despite the weight gain/transformation involved, since rarely if ever is a woman the main character in a Lovecraftian/Cosmic Horror story.

Just to start off, here's an idea that I've been mulling over on and off for almost a decade now: Somehow, a fairly regular, but devoutly religious woman, is kidnapped by a strange cult. In a strange, pagan-like ritual, she is offered up as a sacrifice to some ancient nature spirit, which she is able to see physically manifest presumably due to the hallucinogens being burned as incense by the cult.

Right as the spirit reaches out to her, the police arrive, having monitored the cult for some time, led by a paranormal investigator who is able to save her by attacking the apparition.

Usually, the story would end right here, the victim saved, the evil cult stopped. But instead it would continue, focusing on the woman, how she deals with the PTSD of her experience, how it manifests in stress eating and gaining a bit of weight. That's all find and good, but as she gains she starts seeing supernatural creatures.

They keep their distance from her, some even appearing in her dreams and urging her to eat more. Gain more. Whispering secrets of the cosmos, her dreams becoming visions of almost prophetic portents, herself transforming into first a monstrous, then divine creature.

As this is going on, the heroine becomes even more stressed out. Because of her deeply religious convictions, she fears the idea of becoming a goddess, because to her it is the ultimate blasphemy to her faith. Yet the stress from that adds to her stress eating, making her body resemble ancient fertility goddess idols.

All the while her body starts exhibiting other change as well. The Nature Spirit she had encountered was distinctly moth-like. After certain blackouts where she has visions of the spirit, she starts having tattoos on her body that resemble wings. Her body hair starts growing, until she develops a mane of hair and thick yet soft "fur" all along her body.
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e58d4 No.1808

>>1805

Well I think you're really onto a great idea with this. I'd love to read a story like that.

1fd71 No.1817

>>1805
not really "Lovecraftian", nor is it "Cosmic Horror" but still an interesting Idea.



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038f3 No.1594[Reply]

anyone got any decent game of thrones weight gain fics, was able to fins this one, kinda weird at some bits http://soapmw3.deviantart.com/art/Game-of-Thrones-The-war-of-the-Fat-queens-616703692
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9b1ea No.1743

>>1716
Why does her face look like Willem Dafoe's?

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96cbb No.1769

>>1768
Jesus Christ

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fa788 No.1581[Reply]

It's about a guy who lives in a cabin in a mountain or forest and a female cat taur or maybe just large cat but sentient crash landed. She ate a ton to make herself large enough for rescue crews to spot her on their censors. They fell in love and there was a bit of tf at the end from the guy but happy ending all around. Haven't seen that story in years and can't remember who wrote it or where it came from but I was hoping for that too if anyone remembers. Thanks in advance to anyone who knows what I'm talking about. I'm hoping this is the right place to ask.

Picture is required so I added this untreated one.
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6721a No.1752

Can we make this into a 'lost stories' thread? Anyone remember a short Coraline story that was posted here a while back? That's the film about the girl and the other world with alternate versions of people with buttons for eyes. The story was about her becoming a monster hunter or something a few years down the road and of course it ends up with her getting trapped and fattened up by some motherly otherworld monster.

9140f No.1755

>>1752
I remember that was one of Zob's stories.

6721a No.1761

>>1755
Thanks, that's all I needed to find it. It wasn't terribly good, but probably worth at leat one read.
https://pastebin.com/is60NF48

9140f No.1764

>>1761
Yeah, I was never fond of the ending myself. Not particularly into bad ends.

d9685 No.1765

>>1761
Thanks for the share, Im kinda a fan of these bad end stories. Wish I could find more of zobs work!



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a5585 No.1537[Reply]

On the old bbw-Chan page there was a story about black widow and a kid. Black widow was obese and the kid fed her, soon after her hydra brainwashing kicks in.
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a2cba No.1567

>>1566
really good man

49fbc No.1569

>>1567
Thank you so much!

If you or anyone else would like to rp a similar story using these or other characters, leave your Skype ID's and I'll get back to you ASAP. Like I said, it's too damned hard finding people with all of these same interests (straight shota with massively fat women, and that goes for RP-ing, too.

e8f31 No.1570

Well I hope we see more of the Black Widow story and other going forwards

a5585 No.1632

Bump

0f08e No.1754

>>1561
I hope you continue the story. It's so good!!



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6e9e5 No.1734

Forgot about this dude, thanks for the reminder! I remember the original version of this story, seems like his English has improved to our (non-Italian) benefit.

05970 No.1751

Damn… did the author said if he would continue the story past chapter 13?



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9084e No.1617[Reply]

Its sad that there is a huge lack of BBW monster girls stories out there on the internet. They're only growing in popularity, so it would make sense to start seeing more of them. If you have written any or know of any good ones, feel free to share.

https://pastebin.com/iBY1S4wK
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39018 No.1667

>>1666
Some good stuff!

287b3 No.1668

>>1617
Where's the source for this image?
I can't find squat.

ca611 No.1669

>>1666
Hope to see more! This is gold!

c944b No.1748

>>1668
captainfuckbus on da



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994b7 No.8[Reply]

if you have any weight gain related fanfics
or any ideas for wg fan fics post em here

also give feedback about what you think of them
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58214 No.1592

>>1590
Mewmew, are you legitimately brain damaged? I am genuinely baffled by how you continue to post in such a distinct and pathetic manner yet never seem to think you'll be recognised.

4fb22 No.1620

>>1588
After OOTP, Hermione's injury is a bit worse than it was in the books. The school nurse prescribes 50 lb. weight game for [magic handwave reason]. Harry is surprised how much he's into it.

6e122 No.1622

>>1588
How about one with Harry himself? Nearly all the HP weight gain I see is about the females, but there's lots of male characters in the book that could do with some WG stories, too, particularly Harry.

4fb22 No.1650

>>1620
Variation on a theme: after the starvation and suffering of the Horcrux hunt, Hermione decides she's never going to deny herself food again and gets fat.

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6568d No.1697[Reply]

fd6ab No.1708

I find it hilarious that i found my thread over here. Hope you guys enjoy

6568d No.1709

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>>1708
always watching…

cc787 No.1711

>>1708
Well, I'm reading it now.
Seems kinda fun so far



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b64a7 No.1696[Reply]

>>1694
well damn, people actually remembered it existed. Thanks.
Been looking for Captainpencil myself, but that guy has been out for over 5-6 years. Kinda just called it quits.


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9f591 No.1449[Reply]

Hey,
I'm​ a game designer interested in programming an art/alt game about feedism/fat girls but not necessarily something meant to be fapped to. Are there any writers interested in working with me?
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54ddc No.1456

I'd be down for it.

89a4a No.1508

Oh, Yes

f3970 No.1511

I have decent experience with writing and coding. I'd be in.

571dc No.1556

I'm intrigued. Want a writing sample? What's your concept for the game?

366e3 No.1631

totally down as a writer, would be interested to learn some programming stuff! weightgaintales.tumblr.com



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48a16 No.1512[Reply]

The first step in writing well is… writing.

I've tried to write some WG fiction before, but it took forever to finish and, by the end, I wasn't even that happy with the end product. So in order to practice writing and releasing things without agonizing for years, I've decided to set some deadlines by creating a weekly writing club.

Every week there will be a short theme or concept that the story should include, and there will be one week to write a story for it. We're not starting quite yet, since I want to give people a little bit of time to join up if they want to.

Let me know if you've got some ideas for how I should organize this thing, or if you want to be a part of it.

Remember, it doesn't have to be long or be good, it just has to be.
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06702 No.1548

So how'd this turn out?

20303 No.1549

Do you mind posting some of entries here as well? Would be curious to see other's work to improve my own,

96733 No.1551

>>1548
Pretty well tbh

48a16 No.1553

>>1549
Hessian's collecting the entries here
http://mashuky.deviantart.com/favourites/73666468/Weekly-Weight-In-stories

And if anyone wants to get in on it, this week's prompt is Dreams and Dreaming. It ends saturday, so you've got all kinds of time.

06702 No.1554

>>1553
Awesome! Thank you for this.



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f18ad No.1500[Reply]

Aloha everyone, how's it hanging? I really want to break into this kind of writing, but I honestly don't know where to begin. Do you fine individuals have any babby's first pointers for a total newfag? When I do actually start putting out content, I'll be sure to share it here.

7644b No.1503

>>1500
Hullo there.
The main rule, if there is one, is to write what you want to read. A lot of us write because there's so little of what we want to see - this is a very niche niche after all.
There's really not a lot differentiating this sort of writing from any other sort of erotica, from a mechanical perspective. Make a character you like, think of a storyline that sounds fun, then just give it a shot - just like anything else.
Aim low to start with; I know that when I started off I always wanted to write 50,000-word epics spanning years, but that sort of thing always falls through. Try writing a single scene or day in a character's life, and move up from there.

If there's anything more specific you need advice on, feel free to ask - those are the basics of the basics though.

bbb2c No.1530

>>1503
Same



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a4d3d No.1322[Reply]


Hey all, I tried writing a thing at like 4 in the morning, and I was wondering if you could tear into it and tell me what I need to improve. I did my best to pick up any spelling and grammar issues before submission.
http://daktamagnee.deviantart.com/art/Come-To-Bed-681495638

Also, if the past-present tense thing is weird, it's cos I messed it up mid story.

Cheers
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2e571 No.1388

>>1386
Is that a good thing or…?

2e571 No.1425

Okay, how about some actual critique instead?

6d978 No.1426

>>1384
This is really well written! Plus glad to see some Dark Souls fats story. Please, keep it up! Maybe add a little more dialogue or inner monologue, but it's great so far!

6184f No.1431

>>1386
The fat soul, seeped in the blood of many, traversed the abyss to bring itself to a worthy wielder. Was this fate? Or perhaps the machinations of a more sinister foe…

42fae No.1472

http://batgirl-fatgirl.deviantart.com/art/The-X-Files-WG-Adephagia-Episode-1-687532808

Hey if we're doing general critiques I'd love to get some feedback on this. I tried really hard to abide by the structure of your regular monster of the week X-Files episode and keep the rapport of Mulder and Scully, no idea if I was successful or not.



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8d12a No.1442[Reply]

Hi Elite,

Does anyone know where the Meet The Neighbours cream stuffing loli story went? It's dissapeared.

Also
>itt: Stories you feel guilty after nutting to

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a18d8 No.1433[Reply]

so basically i understand everything i need to it is a literature choice based games most items are interactive she gains weight based on food and objects respond based on her weight if so far she has a sister named rosie and i want her to be her feeder but i what the story to go much further figured you guys could help

a18d8 No.1434

sorry for grammar mistakes i'm pretty excited i got over 2 major hurdles in the creative process in 1 day

a18d8 No.1435

SOME QUESTIONS THAT NEED ANSWERS
1. what is the maximum size she should be
2. other players
3. why does she gain weight
4. is she embarrassed by it
5. does she make other people gain too
*5 is it by being near her or is she making her friends gain
LETS BUILD A GOOD STORY

9989b No.1438

WG in fiction mainly has one (or more) of three natures; plot device, characterisation device and theme. There's not that much special about WG lit other than that.
Thematic WG is obviously what bbwchan's interested in the most, but the other two are also pretty useful/important and what I generally look for when working out if I like something or not.

It's cool to explore the effect WG might have on a person's nature, or how their view/reaction to WG may reflect their persona. Like any characterisation device, a good wg lit should add to characterisation but unless they're a RABID ASS GAINER (yes, they do exist but jfc are they rare and scary af irl) it shouldn't be their sole driving force and their life shouldn't revolve around wg alone.

WG can also be part of the plot, but people really screw this up all the time and again, making the whole story just about WG is unnatural and one-dimensional. Like any other plot device it gets boring if overused, especially if left on its own. There should be other plot elements around for it to interact with.

Just like any story, you need to work out the who/what/where/when/how. WG can be tacked-on pretty easily to almost any story, as the writing.com peeps can attest, lol.


So yeah. tl;dr strip out wg, think about a decent story and characters without WG, then ask yourself how it would affect it

9989b No.1439

also, I recommend looking at the Weight Gaming forum if you haven't already. Don't be afraid to start an idea topic here:
http://www.weightgaming.com/forum/index.php?board=5.0

fb3fb No.1440

ANSWERS TO YOUR QUESTIONS
1. what is the maximum size she should be?

I say go for Immobility as a maximum, with it being her little sister's ultimate fetish. This is essentially the point of no return and could even be seen as bad situation for the MC as she is basically forced to keep gaining and be her sister's play thing.

2. other players? Maybe a chubby best friend, a girl who the MC does kind of like, but is unsure about how to feel about her. If you do have the MC fatten others up, you could have this friend be a clue that the MC does enjoy girls with more weight on them, she just didn't know it.


3. why does she gain weight?

I say ignorance at first, she unknowingly gains weight due to her sister's machinations. When she finds out you could have the little sister blackmail her into gaining weight and be her feedee, thus forcing her to gain weight.


4. is she embarrassed by it?

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