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i write stories for money devilchild/caveman 07/20/2018 (Fri) 01:05:07 No. 2875 [Reply]
i need money for bills and could use the extra income so i am opening commissions again. if you would like a commission please message me with full details on what you would like. must be left in a note. the prices are set at 5$/page starting. i will negotiate prices for longer commissions. what i wont write about is scat, water sports, nothing other then basic/most common type of furry, gore, sex, and m/m stuff. if theres not something listed here and your unsure about just ask first and i'll get back to asap. i'm currently working a full time gig so my free time is limited but you'll get what you asked for if accepted. pm me.

my links
https://aryion.com/g4/user/caveman
https://www.deviantart.com/devilchild19128
so im opening up commissions up until the the end of December. job is a little slow so hours are lacking a bit. need money for christmas gifts and other such things as i got bills covered. please pm my about ideas.

things i will do

-all types of vore i.e oral, unbirth, anal, breast, soul
-bbw/ssbbw (any range really)
-pregnancy (any range really)
-weight gain
-expansion of any kind
-inflation of any kind
-bdsm though im not as versed in this
-hucows
-possession
-absorption
-slime girls
-bimbofication

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>>3179
Poor spelling, punctuation and grammar on your advert for commissions is probably going to turn of potential customers. Just saying.

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Captions Anonymous 03/26/2018 (Mon) 19:17:12 No. 2452 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Any nice WG captions?
They seem to be pretty rare.
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I'm getting flood detect warnings now, and this is pretty much what I've got. Abolutely LOVE captions, really want to see more.

>>2494
>yea, she was suffering from depression and her meds made it super hard for her to gain weight (which i really don't believe since she really ballooned in like no time at all)

Depends on the med, but it's typical for people who go on some forms of Bipolar meds. A guy friend of mine did the same thing as her- started out bigger, but got BUILT when his drug combo stabilized him. SSRIs also mess with hunger and feelings of satiety.

Morally depraved story seed thread: with a vengeance Anonymous 12/21/2016 (Wed) 00:13:27 No. 97 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
"In this thread, let's post our most depraved weight gain story ideas, and see if anyone picks them up."

New board, new thread.

Old thread: http://bbw-chan.net/elite/res/38.html

Older thread: http://vi-test.bbw-chan.net/elite/res/6026.html
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>Potsdam Giants
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Potsdam_Giants
https://www.realmofhistory.com/2017/08/10/potsdam-giants-prussian-regiment-tall-men/

Something along these lines, except make the soldiers all women that the country's ruler is trying to fatten up into an all-BBW unit.
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>>510

This is my first time replying on this forum, but I think that I'm going to take a crack at this one.
>>3148
Sounds great - keep us posted!

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Writing improvement eastsportman 01/14/2017 (Sat) 04:27:19 No. 304 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Post stories for critiques, editing, or other help.

I found a video I'd like to share on the topic of better writing, a video from Brandon Sanderson, talking in one of his writing lectures.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N4ZDBOc2tX8
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So, does anyone have any examples of well-written lesbian sex? Does necessarily have to be fats right now, just want to read more examples of something actually decent and compelling to help my own writing.
I was wondering if anyone would mind telling me what they think of this piece I wrote. It should be free of any unclear passages or typos by now, but I wonder how my dialogue, descriptions, and characterization come across.

https://www.deviantart.com/nine-pins/art/Queen-for-a-Day-772402661
>>3139
Not bad. Your prose is good, and very easy to read, and your description is fine when present. I liked how nerdy most of the characters were, and there were a lot of ideas and little details throughout that I really liked.
Most of your problems, in my opinion, are on a more macro scale. Five characters - especially introduced all at once - is just excessive, especially as both Harry and Mikayla both have little impact on the plot. Mikayla's only present so we can have some karmic comeuppance in the finale, and Harry's even less important. The way you switch between character perspectives exacerbates this - if you'd stuck to only one or two character's perspectives, it would have been more easily comprehensible, but instead the narrative jumps between just about every character, asking the reader to be far more invested than they're likely to want to be for a fetish story on the Internet. It felt almost like a fanfiction piece, where the audience can be assumed to have familiarity with the characters beforehand and unnecessary characters are included because they're author or fan favourites.
You should probably also mention the whole giantess/growth thing in the content warning at the start. Nothing in the story prior to its introduction hinted at its presence, and it was irritating to get much of the way through the story only to find that it was going to go down such a fantastical route that I wasn't much interested in.
I mentioned earlier that your description is fine when present. By that I mean that where you actually describe people, it's good - there's a bit in the car I enjoyed, and a moment in the lobby - but those occasions are shamefully rare. Many of the characters go completely undescribed, and even Darcy gets barely a paragraph of description across the entire story. A little more description of her, how she moves, what she's wearing, how her fat is distributed, would go a long way towards livening up what can feel like a rather aimless, ambling plot.
Overall, I did enjoy the story, though the sudden introduction of giantess soured my enthusiasm for the second half somewhat. Your prose itself is very competent, which is, frankly, the difficult bit in learning to write; I think that with some more planning or a stronger plot, plus a healthy sprinkling of extra description, you could write a genuinely great story with relative ease.
>>3139
I don't have a lot to add since the other critique addressed most of my concerns, but I will say specifically that the first page or two is just impenetrable. I don't know what this game they're playing is and there are *so* many characters I don't know, with nothing at all to latch on to. It's Annette then Mikayla then Darcy then one of them's fat and one of them's horny and it's just too much for such a short period. It doesn't really get much better in the second section, because now there's even more interpersonal drama, and a fictional disease, and yet another sudden perspective shift.

If you want to introduce five characters in a short story, you've got to be deliberate and explicit in some way, and that's not easy. I would frankly just chop it down to 2-4 characters, maybe mention some luggage making the car cramped if you just want the MC in a car.

Also, I really feel like unexplained, unexamined fantastical fetish conditions that none of the characters are aware is an obvious fetish device are beyond overdone at this point.

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Anonymous 03/27/2018 (Tue) 01:29:28 No. 2455 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Someone has stories of homeless girls, who is adopted and very fed?
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when i saw this thread i thought of this:

https://literotica.com/s/the-royal-line-pt-05
Bit of build up, slight fantasy setting (neko)

Does adoption count?

https://fantasyfeeder.com/stories/view?id=184147&rowStart=0
>>3136
love that story, especially with how caring and at times sweet and romantic the narrator is towards her growing pet
>>3136
Holy fuck I love this, and it's even furry. I'm way too into the whole pet-master thing, I adore the indulgence and laziness and perversion of it.

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Bit by the bug Anonymous 11/11/2018 (Sun) 16:07:34 Id:5bc109 No. 3130 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
I've had this story idea bouncing around in my head for a while now after seeing someone else use it in one of their stories. But that was all it was, an idea... until I got bit by the SSSS.Gridman bug. I submit this drabble to you for judgment:

https://www.deviantart.com/yuushafan/art/Eat-Rikka-Eat-772103608

fat doms Anonymous 11/08/2018 (Thu) 07:27:28 Id:2bb9a2 No. 3123 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Are there any good stories with a dom feedee? Especially ones with immobility and humiliation
>>3126
This writing is gay. "Her desire blended with his in an all-consuming fire". What is this shit?

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Commissions? Anonymous 10/29/2018 (Mon) 06:30:10 Id:99adc8 No. 3103 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Trying to find someone to write a pretty detailed story for me. Know any deviantarts that are commissioning?
I think the going rate is $100 to $150 a chapter — I commissioned one once, but the bill ran up pretty fast.

PS: The girl in the pic got fat again...
>>3120
$150 bucks? Per chapter? Bro you were scammed.
>>3103
Could you specify what kind of Story you are looking for, IE inflation, Slob, Chub, Obese, Planet Sized, Male, Female, 1,000 words, 35 chapters ect.
>>3122
I paid per word, but I don’t remember how much off the top of my head.

SSBBWs in peril Anonymous 08/18/2018 (Sat) 21:23:27 Id:b6aa97 No. 2929 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Let’s start a thread for stories involving SSBBWs who find themselves in dangerous/perilous situations and attempt to escape, even if their attempts end up being foiled by their fattened bodies. All types of story in this nature are welcome! Whether it be an SSBBW being fattened up to be eaten by a witch, a fatty getting lost in the woods and trying to waddle away from some hungry predators, or an unfortunate blubberball who finds herself about to become a buffet in an indigenous villiage. I really haven’t come across too many of these so I’m interested in seeing what I’ve missed. There are a few I’ve found though.

The Waddling Dead, where a group of fattened survivors attempt to avoid being eaten by zombies.
https://www.deviantart.com/onion88/art/The-Waddling-Dead-Pt-1-547078387

Zara, saved by fat. A story where a massive, gluttonous fatty waddles around during the events of Jurassic World, and tries not to become the fattest meal a dinosaur ever had.
https://www.deviantart.com/stop1129/art/Zara-Saved-by-Fat-I-545934223
(Iirc, the author envisioned Zara looking like Boberry, so if you ever wanted to see her try and waddle away from dinos that one would be good for you.)

Zara, Queen of Buffets. A prequel to the other one, still with dinosaurs.
https://www.deviantart.com/stop1129/art/Zara-Queen-of-Buffets-I-554290770

I think some of the series might not be finished, I’m really interested in seeing if there are other stories like these.
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>>2963
I think it'd be better if she started off skinny and was there as one of those native outreach charity programs or whatever they are, not realising that they are purposely fattening her up and her just overly accepting things as part of their culture.
>>2963
>>2964
actually I was thinking that in both feilcity starts off skinny but gets fattened up to ssbbw size
>>2966
I think a story featuring a SSBBW who’s already grown quite fat from her own greediness and then becoming even more massive from those trying to fatten her up to be eaten, all the while blinded to this fact from her gluttonous feasting would be better, but that’s just my personal opinion.

Bulking up Steph Anonymous 08/15/2018 (Wed) 23:51:19 Id:ce1414 No. 2921 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Well written ongoing story by polarisdreamer. What do you guys think?
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I agree that Bulking Up Steph is better-than-par within its field, and that its descriptions tend to be a strong point.
If we're talking overall technically well-constructed weight gain stories with similar humiliation themes, I think Maverick and Riptoryx warrant a mention.
https://www.deviantart.com/maverickthewriter
https://www.deviantart.com/riptoryx
>>2936
I hate giving harsh replies, being nice is all that's important
The recommendations weren't that bad as well, I read them all some time ago
Chapter 9 is up. There is only one chapter left
The story is finished. Beserker finished drawing the entire series as well.

https://www.deviantart.com/polarisdreamer/gallery/

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