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Didn't see a DevArt thread Anonymous 04/03/2017 (Mon) 23:24:17 No. 919 [Reply]
Hey guys, I didn't see a specific thread for DeviantArt and/or sharing our writing, so I'm just gonna drop this here.

It's pretty light on the fetish material so far, but I'm writing more later tonight. It should get a lot more interesting.

http://artanis12.deviantart.com/art/Jeanie-and-the-Bottle-672820696
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(If this double posts I'm sorry and will delete)

OP here, finally updated my story after a year, derp. It's pretty slow for the moment but I plan on being more regular in the future.

https://artanis12.deviantart.com/art/Jeanie-and-the-Bottle-Chapter-1-751511493
https://www.deviantart.com/conestogaead

Easily the best WG story I've ever read.
>>2796
Oi, that's just the link to their page…
>>2797
there is only one story on his page…
https://www.deviantart.com/fakedude10/gallery/

I too write things from time to time!

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smolfat Anonymous 06/06/2018 (Wed) 04:28:24 No. 2710 [Reply]
This is probably super niche but can we get a thread for WG fairies/other smol beings preferably eating human sized portions.

A couple examples but there isn't much

https://sir-wales.deviantart.com/art/It-s-a-Small-World-fWG-Slob-REPOST-538075097
https://weeb-lord.deviantart.com/art/Bravely-Default-P-lump-F-airy-fairy-wg-slob-601955102 (plus his other airy ones)
https://borin23.deviantart.com/art/A-Fairy-s-Stuffing-Session-616397651
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>>2795
He had been pissed at the mods about removing some of his drawn posts and apparently they did it again. I get why it's annoying but going by the journal timestamps it all happened in a few hours, would have been nice to have a bit of warning to save stuff…

The journal says everything will be re-posted eventually but idk if I believe it, he had a lot of stuff. Time to hit waybackmachine I guess.
>>2802

I'd say they should just post their…questionable, literature elsewhere but I don't even know a site outside of DA where people read stuff. I think the literature scene on tumblr is even weaker.

Still disappointing. They were one of the few writers that sometimes did food tf with any degree of quality. Now I have one less place to fulfill my insanely obscure fetish.
>>2802
> would have been nice to have a bit of warning to save stuff…

I did post a status warning this was coming like, a month ago. I'd link it but I also just discovered that DA deletes old statuses. Fantastic site.

Regardless, all my stories are available in a drive link on my page right now. If there's any you find missing let me know and I will find it. Nothing is missing.
>>2806
Yeah sorry I didn't see the drive when I made that post, and I guess I just missed the status (don't really use DA a lot outside of you and kip so the layout has always been confusing)

I hope that other post didn't come off too passive agressive btw, I was just bummed as you are my favorite writer for this fetish. Hope you are able to find somewhere. Have you considered pixiv at all? They have pretty light moderation all around and are a-ok with loli etc. and have an area for stories.
>>2806
Make sure you find a safe place to put them soon because Google Drive isn't a safe place for anything.

>>2807
>a-ok with loli etc
Step lightly because Pixiv has been trying to become the top art site internationally and Japan's becoming far more strict the closer they get to their Olympics.

How come Pastebin isn't an option?

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What do you look for in a story? Anonymous 05/31/2018 (Thu) 07:52:10 No. 2672 [Reply]
Sometimes I think about writing kink fiction, and weight gain would be my first choice. I'm wondering though what you guys find appealing in stories and things you don't like as well. There's lot of stories out there that have covered nearly every aspect of this fetish so it would be interesting to know what stands out to you.
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I may be alone in this, but as the years have gone by my patience with fetish stories has shrunk severely.
I'm like >>2673 , except maybe taken to a greater extreme. I used to be able to read long, chapter-length weight gain stories eagerly. Now I feel like I can't stand them any more. It takes too long to get to the good stuff. I mean, this is all basically wank material. If I want to spend a lot of time reading something, I'll go read real literature.

It's really gotten to the point where, instead of a story showing a girl's weight gain, I'd rather have a shorter story showing the girl already fat, and letting a scenario play out featuring her in her obesity.

And this can be surprisingly mundane. Maybe she's waddling around a Wal-Mart. Maybe she's at a doctor's office. Maybe she's visiting friends. Just give me a nice, concise, detail-packed window into the life of this obese woman as she eats and moves and goes through a world she's way too big for. That's what I like these days.
>>2774
I agree with this wholeheartedly. I lost my sense of exploration and "oh something's coming (lel)" as I hit my twenties. I think what it comes down to is that there are only so many ways to describe fatness, and these little vignette formats get boring to write after a while, at least for anyone with ambitions and/or talent.

I'm a very infrequent writer, but having written two vignettes and being in the process of working on a much more "world build-y" story, I can say that the latter is far more gratifying.

It's an interesting conundrum.
>>2776
I guess, from the perspective of a reader, I just feel like a long, drawn-out story misses the point. I don't read erotica for character development and interesting plotting, just like I don't read a novel to wank off.

So cut to the chase. Show me the fat girl. Show me her waddling around and stuffing her face and getting stuck in armchairs. I guess that makes me impatient, but sue me.
Yeah I think the biggest dilemma to me as someone trying kink writing is that I have no idea what most people consider a good balance between introductory fluff and the meat of a story, so to speak. Obviously people ain't reading this stuff for deep character and intriguing plotlines. I have no idea how much setup for the actual kink stuff people tolerate or want.

At the same time you can't just jump straight into it unless you're writing the story in a specific way which can get repetitive.
As a (sort of) writer myself, I would like to add an important point:
When writing WG, everyone is first and foremost following their own preferences. Changing one's style is not going to boost sales, right?

I know I spend too much time on world-building and ground-laying but that is because I need context in anything I read, a believable environment in which the gain is taking place. And I am writing it primarily for myself to enjoy so I'm writing it my way.

Mental/Personality changes along with Weight Gain Anonymous 01/09/2017 (Mon) 05:57:54 No. 275 [Reply]
I love weight gain stories, but I REALLY love weight gain stories where whoever gains weight also mentally changes too. Like they become more slovenly, hedonistic, and just plain start loving being fat after awhile. It could be through mind control, magic, transformation or other more forceful methods, or it could just be a more natural/positive learning to love their fat through self discovery or a friend. No matter the end result, I just love stories where there's also a mentality shift towards liking their weight gain. So I figured I'd try to make a thread dedicated to sharing stories or ideas all about stories with any kind of mental/personality shifts accompanied by getting fat.

Here's a fairly recent story I liked about the two villains from Danganronpa meeting the Ultimate Feeder who manages to change their evil ways by getting them focused solely on eating.

http://borin23.deviantart.com/art/Danganronpa-WG-Feeding-Into-Despair-1-648711207

http://borin23.deviantart.com/art/Danganronpa-WG-Feeding-Into-Despair-2-648711268
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>>2044
https://sunnydaysfoundation.deviantart.com/art/Caring-Girlfriend-639094005
Pretty much all of my work deals with corruption and weight gain to some degree. Pretty intense slob stuff, but no scat, so of you're into that you might enjoy it. *shrug*
>>2045
Good shit my dude
>>2046
Glad to be of service.
>>2045

Fucking nice job dude.
Might as well bump this thread.

I'd seen this picture by TubbyToon before. Imagine my surprise finding a story to go with it, one that seems right up this thread's alley:

https://benji-blacksky.deviantart.com/art/Birthday-Korra-Comm-Enlarged-Earth-Princess-714152852

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Weightgaming.com Anonymous 06/13/2018 (Wed) 22:35:02 No. 2737 [Reply]
Did it finally die? No longer shows up on a google search and it's been offline for a few days.
>>2737
>No longer shows up on a google search
I'm surprised it was on Googles list at all.
Better place to get info >>/bbwalt/5262

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Can't remember story Anonymous 06/11/2018 (Mon) 11:28:10 No. 2730 [Reply]
There was a story on deviantart about a girl who left the freezer open at a restraunt she worked at and was forced to eat the stock by some dude before it spoiled. Anybody remember what it was called?

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Fattening Pregnancy Anonymous 06/02/2018 (Sat) 21:42:43 No. 2693 [Reply]
So, I love Mom Bod(https://fantasyfeeder.com/stories/view?id=123611)or Growing Lucy (https://escpee.deviantart.com/art/Growing-Lucy-Chapter-1-378694464) .

Anyone have anything else like this? Husband fattening up the wife/girlfriend, preferably with pregnancy…?

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Friends living together Anonymous 06/03/2018 (Sun) 12:07:48 No. 2694 [Reply]
I apologize in advance, as English isn't my first language.

Sara and Mira grew up together, shared the same interests and had a great friendship. They were both swimmers and loved to dance. But Mira moved to Europe at the age of 16, with Sara staying in the US. They kept in touch in the beginning, but over the years, they starting to loose the connection. However, now, five years later, Sara was on her way to France, and hoped to visit her old friend again.

Sara was blonde, tall, and very fit. She was 5'7" and 122lbs. Skinny, by all standards. She had the same shape she had when she was 16. Mira was about 5'5" and about 135lbs by the time she was 16. However, Mira had changed a lot over the last five years, something Sara was unaware about. Mira had enjoyed big meals and stopped with all exercising. By 19, she was at 190lbs, and now, just two years later, she was over 250lbs. She loved the food, had big meals every day, often eating two large dinners, and constantly snacking. Her belly had grown so large and heavy, it was hard just getting up for her. Still, the more she ate, the bigger she got, and the more food she needed. She was now officialy morbidly obese, but couldn't care less.

Sara found Mira's adress at a modern and large summer house, south in France. Her father was a very succesful publisher, who owned the house. Mira used it as she was studying in France. Sara looked forward to seeing her old friend, not knowing what a fat pig she had turned into. She was shocked as she was greeted by Mira, standing in a tiny bikini as she opened the door.

"So great to see you again, Sara, it's been forever"
Sara didn't know how to react, looking at her massive gut.
"Wow. You haven't starved, Mira. Jesus Christ, you've doubled in size?"
Mira was laughing, her belly jiggling as she rubbed it.
"There's so much great food here. And they use butter all the time. It's addictive!"
Sara was a little repulsed by how much her old friend has let herself go so much. She was such a cute girl, but now she was all fat, breathing heavily as she was just standing there, her belly making it almost impossible to see she was wearing a bikini bottom.

This is all I have this far… I was thinking about how Sara would embarass and make insults to Mira, and it would be fun to add a male character they are both attracted to.
If anyone have any good scenarios involving humiliation of fat women, please feel free to add anything.

Anonymous 05/29/2018 (Tue) 00:18:20 No. 2664 [Reply]
I'd like some critic of this. I'm bad at being able to write a long story, so I've decided to try my hand at writing short stories instead, this is my first attempt


Oh my God what am I going to do. Soccer has been my whole life up to now, but this is my second ACL tear. It was my 6th game back from the first one. I can tell I haven't been as fast as I was, and it's been scaring me for so long. Now I have another one? All my athleticism is gone, and I just don't have the willpower anymore. Other girls do, but I just can't go through another year of rehabbing just to realize I will never be that budding soccer star I was meant to be. I had a scholarship and everything, I was going to get through life with this, and now it's all gone. I just want to lay down and cry and never wake up again. How am I going to fill this void in my life?

I need to go on a diet. Ever since I gave up on soccer I have been constantly gaining weight. I had been so dedicated to soccer I did everything I could to be the best, and that included my diet. After quitting I discovered I had been denying myself all the sweet junk food the world had to offer and it honestly began to feel comforting to eat. With my new found love for food I gained 30 pounds by the end of summer. The college I had been planning to go to had rescinded my scholarship offer, but still let me attend the school which was nice. With no parents around to badger me about my eating habits, no soccer to keep me occupied, and plenty of weed and alcohol to fuel munchies that felt more like a primal desire, I started to get really fat. Now I'm looking at myself in the mirror, and long gone is the athletic blonde with abs who the boys lusted after, and instead a big fat gluttonous pig. My face is covered in a ring of fat, my arms jiggle when I walk, and my thighs are cellulite ridden tree-trunks. My ass is huge and chunky and my breasts are heavy with fat. But my belly is the biggest of them all, flopping over the waistband of my yoga pants and spills onto my thighs when I sit down. I just couldn't stop myself, it all tasted so good, and now I'm really paying for it. Well that's gonna end today, I'm going to begin my weight loss journey right now!

I am so scared. My knee has been hurting so bad lately, I'm worried I mightve torn it again or done something, but that's not what I'm terrified of right now. I'm at my old doctors office, a place I haven't been to since I tore my ACL for the final time 5 years ago. My senior year of college is over and there is a huge difference between it and my high school senior year. "Ashley?" Inquired a portly nurse standing in the doorway. I stood up and she smiled at me, "Come right this way." I begun to waddle my way over, and she lead me down the hallway that I don't remember being quite so taxing before. "Alright I'm gonna need you to step on the scale." My heart sunk in my throat. I haven't weighed myself since that ill fated diet attempt after my freshman year, the one that ended after I weighed myself and found out I was 245 pounds, 3 pounds more than when I started. "So the last time you were here 5 years ago you weighed…" the nurse trailed off as she looked at the number. I looked at her, her eyes wide in shock, "135 pounds." I could tell she was trying to keep the extreme surprise out of her voice as she tried to fathom that the whale in front of her used to be thin just a few years ago. "And now you weigh 458 pounds. That is the biggest weight gain I've ever seen, have you seen any other doctor about this?" Her voice had genuine concern in it, but inwardly I wanted to cry. Partially from the fact that I sweating so much  from standing so long, and from the fact that I had no clue I was this fucking fat. "N-no," I stammered. "I'm gonna tell Dr. Arbuckle to run some blood tests, you must have something to cause a weight gain this substantial, wait in the room on the third door on the right." I then struggled my way over to the room and then tried almost in vain to get on the bed. I finally did it though and my aching legs cried out in relief to have so much weight taken off, as the metal the bed laid on creaked in agony. I knew I didn't have any disease that caused this. It was my own gluttony. After Giving up on my diet, I just ate whatever I wanted and that turned out to be a lot. Food tasted so good, and it felt so nice to eat. After losing soccer, it was something I could take solace in, a friend that was always there. No matter what, I had a mouth and a belly, and that belly was never satisfied. Now I'm worried I'm not gonna be able to fit elephantine ass through doorways soon. My belly is absolutely enormous, a two-tiered behemoth that is slowly making its way towards my knees. My arms are fatter than my thighs were when I was playing and my thighs are probably fatter than a normal girls waist. Honestly though? Thinking over it, I'm not sure I regret anything. I might be the fattest girl I know (by a long shot), I might get stared at whenever I order a big meal at a restaurant and stuff my fat face silly, but it feels so nice. If something makes me happy why not indulge in it? That's what I did with soccer and now that's what I do with food. Boys have never interested me that much, so who cares that all of them look at me in disgust? Thinking back to college, when I would smoke weed or drink and then just let that insatiable desire to eat and eat and eat take over, everything just felt right. So even though I might be enormous, even though I might be a quarter ton in the next year, I'm gonna do what makes me happy, and honestly, being really fucking fat does that. I don't care what the doctor says, when I get home, I'm going to go the freezer, break out that gallon of chocolate ice cream, and eat the whole fucking thing, because it's what makes me feel good. I never thought that tearing my ACL would've allowed me to realize what I really am. A fat girl
Felt rushed at the end but overall great job.
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>>2668
Thanks, I've written other stuff before, but I've never posted it
I just wrote another one too
https://anonisaspy.deviantart.com/art/Elena-747336798
>>2664
>>2669
Nice, though both are pretty trope-heavy, to the point where at times they can feel like an assemblage of cliché weight-gain sentences put end to end. The 'sporty girl is injured, gains weight while recovering' storyline is done to death at this point, as is the 'I think my clothes shrunk in the wash' line, eating a gallon of chocolate ice cream, the 'I was really a fat girl all along, I just never knew it' thing, et cetera, et cetera. A little originality would go a long way to improving your stories, especially as the actual prose, as well as some of the description, is rather good.

Feederism-Cuckolding Anonymous 05/19/2018 (Sat) 18:51:55 No. 2632 [Reply]
Anyone know any good stories where someone's significant other gets fed by someone else?

Pic unrelated.
Called real life
That's (sort of) a theme of Kastemel's "Eclipse" comic.
https://kastemel.deviantart.com/gallery/44774585/Eclipse
Which vid did that Plump Princess picture come from?

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