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mrcandyman007 Anonymous 09/28/2017 (Thu) 17:07:13 No. 1904 [Reply]
Does anyone know what happened to this guy? Did he make a new account somewhere and I haven't found it? I was really looking forward to the continuation of the Cream Room story, then he deleted his account. Anyways heres the pastebin of phase 2of the Cream Room.

https://pastebin.com/zJSnzzDH
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Anyone know anything or have any of his stuff saved?
Where is part 1?
>>3245
No, thats just the guy who saved "phase 2" to pastebin.

So when I do it I’m a terrible person, but if a woman does it she gets an article published
Double standards smh 😤
It’s natural for siblings to compete. They all do it, and most are open about it. Hell, if you’ve ever met siblings that weren’t competitive, you’d have to assume that something shady was happening behind closed doors.
Those were all things that Penny repeated to herself, up to several times daily, as she sabotaged her sisters’ drinks. Maggie had questioned the drinks at first, the intellectual in her wanting to know just how the supposed ‘fat-blasting’ formula did its stuff; Charlie, not wanting to be the loser of the bunch, guzzled hers down with glee. Neither of the girls needed them, as even if they were both just that smidgen overweight, they were both still drop dead gorgeous.
Penny had put up with being the bland middle child for too long. It was time for that to change, and boy had it ever.
Too caught up in the chaos of the wedding to notice, and still a way’s off from dress fittings, Maggie and Charlie had both gained more than they ever would have needed to lose to be ‘thin’ again. Maggie tended to sip at hers rather than gulp, and so she had only gained- on an estimate, of course- a measly 20 pounds. Charlie, however…Penny often found herself inspecting her sister’s growing number of chins, her dangling arm fat, her thickening calves as she spread out on the couch. Charlie was about 170 pounds to begin with, but she had to beyond 200 pounds, by now.
“This is a new one, ladies,” Penny’s voice was sing-song as she brought out the tray. “You’ll love them.”
“Ooh, gimme!” Charlie grabbed hers, already sipping from it before even asking what was in it.
Maggie studied hers, but was already taking a sip as she asked, “Is this fat free? I haven’t really been seeing results with the other drink…”
The drinks were in tall, thick drinking glasses, with a new powder from the internet that promised to back in a whopping 1,250 calories per serving. With two scoops per each of the girls’ cups, and Penny pushing the concoction onto her sisters twice- sometimes even three times daily- that was between 2500 and 3750 extra calories a day.
“Really? Huh, I’ll need to fix that broken scale then soon…” Penny trailed off, sipping her own drink with an actual weight loss shake in it. Funnily enough, she hadn’t been feeling much slimmer, either, but the scale really was broken. If she wanted to check her weight, she’d have to wait. She giggled at that.
“What’s so funny?” Charlie asked, gulping down the last of hers.
“Oh- the blender almost exploded earlier! It was the bananas, I think-“
She trailed off into a story of nothingness, smug in knowing that her sisters were blimping up like balloons.
(Sorry for the initial spacing issue) When it came time for dress fittings, Penny had initially recoiled. There was a scale in the fitting room, and before long, her sisters had noticed it while waiting for their turns to be measured. Penny felt herself sweat in her chair, as she tried to ignore them and the inevitable fury.

“Penny, you need to go try that thing!”

“Huh?”

Penny looked up at Charlie, her sister out of breath and panting. The short jog from the corner of the store, by the fitting room’s door, to the waiting room must have made her out of breath. Maggie was trailing behind, tears smudging her makeup.

“I don’t think your shakes have been working- we’re all fat!!”

“That’s impossible,” Penny spat out as she stood, huffing as she heaved herself to her feet. Her thighs rubbed together as she reached the scale, but sure enough, the scale read out…”230!?”

She turned behind her, to where the other sisters were both standing in shock, as well. Penny had kept mirrors and scales as far away from the house as she could, claiming pre-bridal jitters, only going off of intuition these past six months. The girls were all about the same height, but they all looked so much fatter than Penny looked…or, well, that she thought she looked. Penny frantically searched for a mirror, and gasped when she found one. Maggie was sobbing, and Charlie’s hands had gone to her face.

“Miss Smith?”

Penny was torn away from the image of her bloated, now-obese body by the sound of the fitting lady’s voice. Before Penny could reply, she came closer, speaking in a stage whisper,

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BBW/SSBBW Imagines Anonymous 12/26/2018 (Wed) 17:16:53 Id:1c1ce7 No. 3225 [Reply]
If you guys could help me find some more of these types of shorter things that would be awesome

Male WG Anonymous 06/30/2018 (Sat) 02:25:34 No. 2800 [Reply]
There's not enough male weight gain stories around here. Anybody who knows of any good stories, please share
>>2800

Is it ok if I make one?

Cause I will do it.
This thread inspired me to make this story:
https://bbw-chan.nl/bhm/res/793.html

It all started out on a Thursday afternoon, at an old friend's house. Let us call him, Ken. Ken used to be a ripped but skinny jock with muscular arms, tight eight pack abs, little pecs
and an athletic little ass from all those squats. He used to do all these squatts, but they would only be that big.

I decided to pay a visit to Ken's house. He was still in good shape. After working out, he came to me sweating and shirtless. He told me it was cheat day, so he asked me if I could order some food for him. So I did. I ordered a three large all meat pizzas, 10 breadsticks, 20 barbeque wings, and bought a lot of sweets and sodas from the store. He was tired from working out, so he decided to sit his small ass down on his comfy computer chair. Since he was tired, he demanded me to feed him.(Little did he know, that it would change his life forever)

I finally got the food. I started off with the pizzas. I decided to feed him a slice of pizza. He told me to give him more pizza, so I kept giving him more pizza. I had stuffed his mouth with a lot of pizza. However, he was still hungry, and told me to feed him more things. As I kept shoving wings and breadsticks down his throat, I saw his once 8 pack go away slowly, decreasing in number. The fat had devoured his packs, and as I kept feed in him, his once lean 8 pack stomach would turn into a 6 pack, then a slightly fuller 4 pack, than a two pack, till his belly exploded into a beach ball sized belly. His once big pecs had also become covered with fat. I had fun feeding Ken, so I asked him if he wanted more, he said no. Despite this I kept feeding him sweets and sodas. As I stuffed his mouth cookies, I could see his fat covered pecs form into small A cup sized Moobs. He kept grunting for me to stop, but watching him grow was so enjoyable, I decided to stuff him until all the food I got for him was gone. He went from being a typical jock, to an exjock with a big bloated belly, rounded moobs, and a grown ass. Despite eating all this junk food, his ass grew, going from a little muscular ass to a round little bubble ass.

The next visit, he became even fatter. This time, he had grown big round moobs and a big flabby belly. "Hey there man!" Ken greeted me. "Ken, what happened?" I asked. "Yeah, I don't work out anymore. It is boring, I am just indulging in all the foods I missed out on." He was wearing his typical work out clothes, however, his workout shirt had made his moobs very noticable. It had also made his belly very prominent. In addition to noticable moobs and belly, I noticed something was up with his butt. He once had a little athletic ass that was flat. After the visit, it became a little bit more shapely, but not by much. Today however, his once squat filled ass had stored a lot of fat, and his ass turned bubbly. His once loose sweatpaints had hugged his current thick thighs and big ass, similar to yoga paints hugging a curvy girl. This had gave me such a hard on that I tried my best not to stare at ass, but I had only talked to him when he was looking so I could check out his great ass. Ken soon found out. I begged him, and told him that it is not what it looks like. He knew that I was lying through my teeth and allowed me to smash. He had bent over in front of me, and I did the honor of taking off his tight sweat pants. I saw his big round ass, and it shaked at me. This had got me so horny, I pulled down my pants, and I decided to put my dick in his ass. After putting my dick in his ass, it started to bounce. While it was bouncing I grabbed his ass cheeks and could feel the bounties of it. I had pumped his ass with my cum, to the point his asshole could not take it anymore and was dripping with my cum. "That was the best experience of my life!"Ken exclaimed. "I really like you, I was wondering if we can be more than friends."My eyes twinkled in happyness. "YES!" I exclaimed.

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Story I cant remember the name of Anonymous 12/05/2018 (Wed) 03:39:58 Id:14d106 No. 3209 [Reply]
Im looking for a story where a girl secretly wishes to gain weight and some magic guy comes and grants it for her and makes her hungry all the time. i dont remember much about it but theres a scene where shes at a restaraunt trying to gain weight and she sees another girl with her family who wished for the same thing, and she sees the girl run to the bathroom and her pants rip. Any help finding it would be much appreciated!

i write stories for money devilchild/caveman 07/20/2018 (Fri) 01:05:07 No. 2875 [Reply]
i need money for bills and could use the extra income so i am opening commissions again. if you would like a commission please message me with full details on what you would like. must be left in a note. the prices are set at 5$/page starting. i will negotiate prices for longer commissions. what i wont write about is scat, water sports, nothing other then basic/most common type of furry, gore, sex, and m/m stuff. if theres not something listed here and your unsure about just ask first and i'll get back to asap. i'm currently working a full time gig so my free time is limited but you'll get what you asked for if accepted. pm me.

my links
https://aryion.com/g4/user/caveman
https://www.deviantart.com/devilchild19128
so im opening up commissions up until the the end of December. job is a little slow so hours are lacking a bit. need money for christmas gifts and other such things as i got bills covered. please pm my about ideas.

things i will do

-all types of vore i.e oral, unbirth, anal, breast, soul
-bbw/ssbbw (any range really)
-pregnancy (any range really)
-weight gain
-expansion of any kind
-inflation of any kind
-bdsm though im not as versed in this
-hucows
-possession
-absorption
-slime girls
-bimbofication

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>>3179
Poor spelling, punctuation and grammar on your advert for commissions is probably going to turn of potential customers. Just saying.

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Captions Anonymous 03/26/2018 (Mon) 19:17:12 No. 2452 [Reply]
Any nice WG captions?
They seem to be pretty rare.
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>>2494
>yea, she was suffering from depression and her meds made it super hard for her to gain weight (which i really don't believe since she really ballooned in like no time at all)

Depends on the med, but it's typical for people who go on some forms of Bipolar meds. A guy friend of mine did the same thing as her- started out bigger, but got BUILT when his drug combo stabilized him. SSRIs also mess with hunger and feelings of satiety.

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Writing improvement eastsportman 01/14/2017 (Sat) 04:27:19 No. 304 [Reply]
Post stories for critiques, editing, or other help.

I found a video I'd like to share on the topic of better writing, a video from Brandon Sanderson, talking in one of his writing lectures.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N4ZDBOc2tX8
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So, does anyone have any examples of well-written lesbian sex? Does necessarily have to be fats right now, just want to read more examples of something actually decent and compelling to help my own writing.
I was wondering if anyone would mind telling me what they think of this piece I wrote. It should be free of any unclear passages or typos by now, but I wonder how my dialogue, descriptions, and characterization come across.

https://www.deviantart.com/nine-pins/art/Queen-for-a-Day-772402661
>>3139
Not bad. Your prose is good, and very easy to read, and your description is fine when present. I liked how nerdy most of the characters were, and there were a lot of ideas and little details throughout that I really liked.
Most of your problems, in my opinion, are on a more macro scale. Five characters - especially introduced all at once - is just excessive, especially as both Harry and Mikayla both have little impact on the plot. Mikayla's only present so we can have some karmic comeuppance in the finale, and Harry's even less important. The way you switch between character perspectives exacerbates this - if you'd stuck to only one or two character's perspectives, it would have been more easily comprehensible, but instead the narrative jumps between just about every character, asking the reader to be far more invested than they're likely to want to be for a fetish story on the Internet. It felt almost like a fanfiction piece, where the audience can be assumed to have familiarity with the characters beforehand and unnecessary characters are included because they're author or fan favourites.
You should probably also mention the whole giantess/growth thing in the content warning at the start. Nothing in the story prior to its introduction hinted at its presence, and it was irritating to get much of the way through the story only to find that it was going to go down such a fantastical route that I wasn't much interested in.
I mentioned earlier that your description is fine when present. By that I mean that where you actually describe people, it's good - there's a bit in the car I enjoyed, and a moment in the lobby - but those occasions are shamefully rare. Many of the characters go completely undescribed, and even Darcy gets barely a paragraph of description across the entire story. A little more description of her, how she moves, what she's wearing, how her fat is distributed, would go a long way towards livening up what can feel like a rather aimless, ambling plot.
Overall, I did enjoy the story, though the sudden introduction of giantess soured my enthusiasm for the second half somewhat. Your prose itself is very competent, which is, frankly, the difficult bit in learning to write; I think that with some more planning or a stronger plot, plus a healthy sprinkling of extra description, you could write a genuinely great story with relative ease.
>>3139
I don't have a lot to add since the other critique addressed most of my concerns, but I will say specifically that the first page or two is just impenetrable. I don't know what this game they're playing is and there are *so* many characters I don't know, with nothing at all to latch on to. It's Annette then Mikayla then Darcy then one of them's fat and one of them's horny and it's just too much for such a short period. It doesn't really get much better in the second section, because now there's even more interpersonal drama, and a fictional disease, and yet another sudden perspective shift.

If you want to introduce five characters in a short story, you've got to be deliberate and explicit in some way, and that's not easy. I would frankly just chop it down to 2-4 characters, maybe mention some luggage making the car cramped if you just want the MC in a car.

Also, I really feel like unexplained, unexamined fantastical fetish conditions that none of the characters are aware is an obvious fetish device are beyond overdone at this point.

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Anonymous 03/27/2018 (Tue) 01:29:28 No. 2455 [Reply]
Someone has stories of homeless girls, who is adopted and very fed?
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when i saw this thread i thought of this:

https://literotica.com/s/the-royal-line-pt-05
Bit of build up, slight fantasy setting (neko)

Does adoption count?

https://fantasyfeeder.com/stories/view?id=184147&rowStart=0
>>3136
love that story, especially with how caring and at times sweet and romantic the narrator is towards her growing pet
>>3136
Holy fuck I love this, and it's even furry. I'm way too into the whole pet-master thing, I adore the indulgence and laziness and perversion of it.

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Bit by the bug Anonymous 11/11/2018 (Sun) 16:07:34 Id:5bc109 No. 3130 [Reply]
I've had this story idea bouncing around in my head for a while now after seeing someone else use it in one of their stories. But that was all it was, an idea... until I got bit by the SSSS.Gridman bug. I submit this drabble to you for judgment:

https://www.deviantart.com/yuushafan/art/Eat-Rikka-Eat-772103608

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