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Writing.com thread Number whatever jerkajerk/ikearct 06/10/2017 (Sat) 17:39:36 No. 1407 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Old thread was dying! Very sad, folks.

Here's a new one, complete with plenty of fun links to various interactives (and my dumb commentary on them)

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856959-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Growing-Girls

Absolute classic. You want girls going to a school and getting fat and stuff? IT'S LIKE MY JAPANESE ANIMES BUT WAY SEXIER WITH LOTS OF FLABBY BELLIES

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1819934-Alice-the-Fat-Cheerleader/action/recent_chapters

Hey, what's the first fatty story you ever read if you're an old fuck like me? PROBABLY ALICE THE CHEERLEADER BY THE EVER PRESENT MOLLYCODDLES

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1708920-FGAL-Deleted-Scenes-Nikkis-Sweatpants

Fat Girls ARE Life, if this chan is anything to be believed! And FGAL, if you're reading this: I miss you <3

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1910371-Your-Expanding-Sister

I wrote in this one, one time. I'm not sure why because incest ain't my thing, but there's an entire thread devoted to it, so there ya go.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1213992-Hesper

HESPER! What if you and everyone you've ever known got so ridiculously fat that it was, in a word, ridiculous? Well, that's this. I'd say it's a 70/30 Male to Female split, but still worth a read.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856570-Gluttony-and-Glory-Adventuress-WG

I'm in the middle/final stretch of writing a fantasy-based, old school inspired fatty game. This interactive and it's various spawn are part of the reason why.


http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1946278-Dragons-Crown-Female-WG

The Barbarian from this game is fucking amazing. THAT IS ALL

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1167851-Your-Fat-Family

Arguably the O.G. writing.com story that every fat aficionado has read at some point. Some of the storylines are straight up fat babies, which is… A thing. :I

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1933610-Office-fatty

IF YOU'VE EVER WORKED IN AN OFFICE YOU KNOW THE ONE LADY WHO LITERALLY EATS GARBAGE AND GAINS WEIGHT AND THEN WHINES ABOUT IT AND THIS IS WHAT THIS GAME IS OKAY

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1943345-The-Jock-and-the-Cheerleader

This interactive has one of my favorite fat descriptions ever. CAN YOU FIND IT?

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1833921-Tiffanys-World-An-SSBBW-Tale

FGAL, seriously, come back please.

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2041198-Super-Sized-the-Mel-Carlyle-Story

Basically a love-letter to FGAL's stories, and my current favorite thing to write in.



OK, I'm sure I forgot a bunch so feel free to post them <3
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>>3121
I was wondering why the story felt familiar! I think this is a good idea.
For those interested, I create an writing.com archive using wayback machine and bulk upload. It's not perfect, but I was able to archive almost all the stories current on the site.

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1No4zjBzV81O9G3lNx6Z6ib3idqIdJEH_KCAcVkO0VnE/edit#gid=1562740179
>>3142
thank you man. the BS about them not having enough bandwidth to display text has been rather irritating.

Mutual Weight Gain? Anonymous 07/05/2018 (Thu) 22:09:31 No. 2835 [Reply]
Didn't see another thread for this but looking for good mutual weight gain stories (men and women both gaining). Upto236 on DA has some good stuff:

https://www.deviantart.com/upto236/art/It-Started-Innocently-Enough-385652282
hello
Hi!
I'm looking for stories with a thin girl dating a fat man and she ends up gaining weight and becoming fatter than her man. Is there anything like that?

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Writing improvement eastsportman 01/14/2017 (Sat) 04:27:19 No. 304 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Post stories for critiques, editing, or other help.

I found a video I'd like to share on the topic of better writing, a video from Brandon Sanderson, talking in one of his writing lectures.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N4ZDBOc2tX8
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So, does anyone have any examples of well-written lesbian sex? Does necessarily have to be fats right now, just want to read more examples of something actually decent and compelling to help my own writing.
I was wondering if anyone would mind telling me what they think of this piece I wrote. It should be free of any unclear passages or typos by now, but I wonder how my dialogue, descriptions, and characterization come across.

https://www.deviantart.com/nine-pins/art/Queen-for-a-Day-772402661
>>3139
Not bad. Your prose is good, and very easy to read, and your description is fine when present. I liked how nerdy most of the characters were, and there were a lot of ideas and little details throughout that I really liked.
Most of your problems, in my opinion, are on a more macro scale. Five characters - especially introduced all at once - is just excessive, especially as both Harry and Mikayla both have little impact on the plot. Mikayla's only present so we can have some karmic comeuppance in the finale, and Harry's even less important. The way you switch between character perspectives exacerbates this - if you'd stuck to only one or two character's perspectives, it would have been more easily comprehensible, but instead the narrative jumps between just about every character, asking the reader to be far more invested than they're likely to want to be for a fetish story on the Internet. It felt almost like a fanfiction piece, where the audience can be assumed to have familiarity with the characters beforehand and unnecessary characters are included because they're author or fan favourites.
You should probably also mention the whole giantess/growth thing in the content warning at the start. Nothing in the story prior to its introduction hinted at its presence, and it was irritating to get much of the way through the story only to find that it was going to go down such a fantastical route that I wasn't much interested in.
I mentioned earlier that your description is fine when present. By that I mean that where you actually describe people, it's good - there's a bit in the car I enjoyed, and a moment in the lobby - but those occasions are shamefully rare. Many of the characters go completely undescribed, and even Darcy gets barely a paragraph of description across the entire story. A little more description of her, how she moves, what she's wearing, how her fat is distributed, would go a long way towards livening up what can feel like a rather aimless, ambling plot.
Overall, I did enjoy the story, though the sudden introduction of giantess soured my enthusiasm for the second half somewhat. Your prose itself is very competent, which is, frankly, the difficult bit in learning to write; I think that with some more planning or a stronger plot, plus a healthy sprinkling of extra description, you could write a genuinely great story with relative ease.
>>3139
I don't have a lot to add since the other critique addressed most of my concerns, but I will say specifically that the first page or two is just impenetrable. I don't know what this game they're playing is and there are *so* many characters I don't know, with nothing at all to latch on to. It's Annette then Mikayla then Darcy then one of them's fat and one of them's horny and it's just too much for such a short period. It doesn't really get much better in the second section, because now there's even more interpersonal drama, and a fictional disease, and yet another sudden perspective shift.

If you want to introduce five characters in a short story, you've got to be deliberate and explicit in some way, and that's not easy. I would frankly just chop it down to 2-4 characters, maybe mention some luggage making the car cramped if you just want the MC in a car.

Also, I really feel like unexplained, unexamined fantastical fetish conditions that none of the characters are aware is an obvious fetish device are beyond overdone at this point.

Morally depraved story seed thread: with a vengeance Anonymous 12/21/2016 (Wed) 00:13:27 No. 97 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
"In this thread, let's post our most depraved weight gain story ideas, and see if anyone picks them up."

New board, new thread.

Old thread: http://bbw-chan.net/elite/res/38.html

Older thread: http://vi-test.bbw-chan.net/elite/res/6026.html
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Alien impregnation leads to morbid obesity for the impregnated girls.
I have an story idea based on this pic

Where Nanni starts stress eating and Becomes addicted to eating and Lilo Becomes her feeder after Nanni Becomes morbidly obese and immobile
I had an idea for a subplot where lilo Slowly puts on weight too
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>Potsdam Giants
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Potsdam_Giants
https://www.realmofhistory.com/2017/08/10/potsdam-giants-prussian-regiment-tall-men/

Something along these lines, except make the soldiers all women that the country's ruler is trying to fatten up into an all-BBW unit.
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Anonymous 03/27/2018 (Tue) 01:29:28 No. 2455 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Someone has stories of homeless girls, who is adopted and very fed?
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when i saw this thread i thought of this:

https://literotica.com/s/the-royal-line-pt-05
Bit of build up, slight fantasy setting (neko)

Does adoption count?

https://fantasyfeeder.com/stories/view?id=184147&rowStart=0
>>3136
love that story, especially with how caring and at times sweet and romantic the narrator is towards her growing pet
>>3136
Holy fuck I love this, and it's even furry. I'm way too into the whole pet-master thing, I adore the indulgence and laziness and perversion of it.

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Captions Anonymous 03/26/2018 (Mon) 19:17:12 No. 2452 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Any nice WG captions?
They seem to be pretty rare.
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>>2521
Jessica/Duchess
>>2534
You sure? These photos on stufferdb look like a completely different person
>>2534
Uhhh no bruh. Thats not the quaeeen
>>2452
is the far left girl Taylor Alesia? It's fun imagining her gain weight...

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My stuff 3.0 FC Punk 01/24/2017 (Tue) 14:13:20 No. 374 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Another thread for a new board. Just going to dump my stuff in here, as well as posting updates on whatever project I'm working on, and you guys can critique me on my stuff.
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>>3111
Kara called in sick to work the next day, despite Snapper Carr chewing her out. Kara needed a day off, but so did Supergirl. Even after recovering at the DEO she still felt weak and lethargic, she really pushed herself to her limits with her meteor shower stunt. J’onn and Alex both told her to take it easy today, just have a day to relax and recharge. Kara of course protested, after all, what if Supergirl was needed? Alex told her to relax, just for one day let the world handle itself if she could help it.

So Kara took their advice and today was lounging around her apartment in just her pajamas eating cold pizza from the fridge while watching a game show on TV. It was a simple pleasure she never afforded herself, but being lazy just felt good right now with the way her body physically ached. Her sister was right, she should just take it easy today. In fact Kara told herself she was going to take it a step further and go the entire day without using her powers.

After the show turned to a commercial there was a knock on her door. Kara groaned at the thought of having to get up, but she went to the door anyways and opened it.

“Mon-El!”

Kara blushed profusely, the Daxamite prince was dressed rather sharply and she was still in her PJs at a quarter past noon. She hadn’t even taken a shower yet. Mon-El had a bouquet of flowers with him, handing to her he said “I’ve been told it’s an Earth custom to give flowers to people who aren’t feeling well.”

Kara blushed holding the flowers and adjusted her glasses, saying, “I wasn’t expecting you to come by, I was planning on just having a day to myself.” Mon-El dryly said “Well that’s lame. I came here to take you out and have some fun. Your one day off should be spent doing more than just staying here. Come on, go get dressed and we’ll have a good time.”

Despite how exhausted Kara felt she knew Mon-El had a point. Plus she was still blushing from the flowers. Damn him and his Daxamite charm. “Alright, just...wait a bit, it’ll be awhile before I’m ready. There’s some cold pizza by the couch and you can watch TV while I’m getting ready.” Kara made her way to the bathroom while Mon-El sat down on the couch.

As he heard the sound of the shower turn on he slouched and put his feet up on the coffee table. He took a slice of cold pepperoni pizza and took a bite, musing to himself about what they were going to do.

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Kara’s eyes flickered and she opened them. She was back at the DEO with Alex and Hank by her side.
She rubbed her head, moaning “Waking up in the DEO is so not how I wanted to spend my day off.”

Hank dryly remarked, “You’re lucky you didn’t suffocate. This alien, Gluttara, you faced off with is a force to be reckoned even by Green Martians.” Alex continued, “It’s the breath. Did you feel weaker when she breathed on you?”

Kara nodded, “It felt like Kryptonite.” Hank nodded, “It acts the same way, it even affects Green Martians the same way. I’ve...had my encounters.”

Kara nodded before suddenly realizing someone wasn’t in the room. “Where’s Mon-El? Wasn’t he rescued too?”

Alex shook her head, “No. When we got there he was already gone. According to witnesses she took him.” Kara gripped her fist and was about to slam it, but caught herself, saying “Well we're going to save him, right!” Hank calmly told her, “Of course. Gluttara can’t get away with kidnapping.”

Kara sat up from her recovery bed, “Then we can’t waste time, let's get going!” Alex grasped onto her shoulders, “Hold up Kara, we still need to do further tests on you, just to see if your 100%.”

“Mon-El can take care of himself, but we do need to take her in,” Hank stated matter of factly to Kara. “Give us an hour and then you can go take care of this. I’ll have Winn make something that'll protect you from her breath.”

Kara sighed in frustration, but complied, lying back down on the bed. She knew Hank was right about Mon-El, but more than anything she wanted to teach that blob a lesson.

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>>3113
Supergirl flew fast, seeing the dingy motel ahead of her. She increased her speed and burst through the door where she found Gluttara on the bed, her sides spilling over it, while Mon-El was nude between her thighs with a chain tied around his neck and in Gluttara’s grip.

“Oh my God!” Supergirl said with clear and present disgust in her voice while Gluttara just grinned.

Mon-El dryly said “it’s exactly what it looks like,” to which Supergirl exclaimed “Then why haven't you escaped!”

With his voice dripping with sarcasm Mon-El said “Because she serves great drinks. This chain is made out of lead, I can't escape it.”

“Nor can he escape my thunder thighs” Gluttara winked at Supergirl, “we’ve been having lots of fun while you were gone.”

Supergirl was about to make her way over, but Gluttara squeezed her thighs and made Mon-El scream in agony. Gluttara warned “Take one more step and I break the Prince in two!”

Supergirl scrunched her nose in thought. What could she do? With all his exposure to lead she knew Mon-El was weak and growing weaker by the second. It was not an idle threat, she had to act now or Mon-El was going to die.

“Don't hurt him!” Supergirl told her before opening her arms wide, “Take me instead. That’s what you really want, right? To have your way with me? If you let him go you can do whatever you want with me. I...consent to your will.”

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Digimon: V is for Virus
By FC Punk

When you have a direct link to the Digital World why wouldn’t you take advantage of it?

TK Takaishi and Kari Kamiya had been going to the Digital World since they were little children. They were part of the Digidestined, the chosen ones to save both the digital and the real world, something that they had done multiple times. As years passed both TK and Kari grew older, but kept going back to visit their Digimon friends Patamon and Gatomon respectively.

During one excursion they were greeted by Patamon and Gatomon, both jumping into their arms. “Did you bring the food?” Gatomon asked excitedly to Kari who grinned. “You bet!” Kari held a plastic bag full of junk food from the real world, which tasted amazing to the digimon. They walked through a forest, heading towards a creek, TK saying “A picnic is a great idea, this part of the Digital World is so beautiful.”

The four of then talked about old times, feeling nostalgic over their adventures while TK and Kari alao filled their partners in on their first few days of high school. Gatomon’s eyes lit up as Kari pulled out slices of pizza, but then became disappointed, “Kari, the pizza is cold.”

Kari laughed, “That's why I brought it. Cold pizza is just as good as hot pizza, in a lot of ways it's better actually.” Gatomon tentatively took a small bite, the white kitty quickly finding that her partner was right. TK took his slice as well before he spotted something.

“Mushrooms!”

TK got up and went over to a tree where a batch of mushrooms were growing underneath. Patamon chased after him, “Wait! You don't want to eat those, they may be poisonous!”

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Bit by the bug Anonymous 11/11/2018 (Sun) 16:07:34 Id:5bc109 No. 3130 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
I've had this story idea bouncing around in my head for a while now after seeing someone else use it in one of their stories. But that was all it was, an idea... until I got bit by the SSSS.Gridman bug. I submit this drabble to you for judgment:

https://www.deviantart.com/yuushafan/art/Eat-Rikka-Eat-772103608

fat doms Anonymous 11/08/2018 (Thu) 07:27:28 Id:2bb9a2 No. 3123 [Reply] [Last 50 Posts]
Are there any good stories with a dom feedee? Especially ones with immobility and humiliation
>>3126
This writing is gay. "Her desire blended with his in an all-consuming fire". What is this shit?

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