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Writing.com thread Number whatever jerkajerk/ikearct 06/10/2017 (Sat) 17:39:36 No. 1407
Old thread was dying! Very sad, folks.

Here's a new one, complete with plenty of fun links to various interactives (and my dumb commentary on them)

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856959-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Growing-Girls

Absolute classic. You want girls going to a school and getting fat and stuff? IT'S LIKE MY JAPANESE ANIMES BUT WAY SEXIER WITH LOTS OF FLABBY BELLIES

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1819934-Alice-the-Fat-Cheerleader/action/recent_chapters

Hey, what's the first fatty story you ever read if you're an old fuck like me? PROBABLY ALICE THE CHEERLEADER BY THE EVER PRESENT MOLLYCODDLES

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1708920-FGAL-Deleted-Scenes-Nikkis-Sweatpants

Fat Girls ARE Life, if this chan is anything to be believed! And FGAL, if you're reading this: I miss you <3

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1910371-Your-Expanding-Sister

I wrote in this one, one time. I'm not sure why because incest ain't my thing, but there's an entire thread devoted to it, so there ya go.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1213992-Hesper

HESPER! What if you and everyone you've ever known got so ridiculously fat that it was, in a word, ridiculous? Well, that's this. I'd say it's a 70/30 Male to Female split, but still worth a read.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856570-Gluttony-and-Glory-Adventuress-WG

I'm in the middle/final stretch of writing a fantasy-based, old school inspired fatty game. This interactive and it's various spawn are part of the reason why.


http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1946278-Dragons-Crown-Female-WG

The Barbarian from this game is fucking amazing. THAT IS ALL

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1167851-Your-Fat-Family

Arguably the O.G. writing.com story that every fat aficionado has read at some point. Some of the storylines are straight up fat babies, which is… A thing. :I

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1933610-Office-fatty

IF YOU'VE EVER WORKED IN AN OFFICE YOU KNOW THE ONE LADY WHO LITERALLY EATS GARBAGE AND GAINS WEIGHT AND THEN WHINES ABOUT IT AND THIS IS WHAT THIS GAME IS OKAY

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1943345-The-Jock-and-the-Cheerleader

This interactive has one of my favorite fat descriptions ever. CAN YOU FIND IT?

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1833921-Tiffanys-World-An-SSBBW-Tale

FGAL, seriously, come back please.

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2041198-Super-Sized-the-Mel-Carlyle-Story

Basically a love-letter to FGAL's stories, and my current favorite thing to write in.



OK, I'm sure I forgot a bunch so feel free to post them <3
Anonymous 06/10/2017 (Sat) 23:30:32 No. 1409
Alice the fat cheerleader was my first as well.
Im only 24 though. Shit is that old now?
FC Punk 06/11/2017 (Sun) 00:49:29 No. 1411
>>1409
Alice has been around for such a long time it transcends time. Can you believe the first chapter came out pre-9/11?
Anonymous 06/11/2017 (Sun) 08:02:05 No. 1413
>>1411
really!?
Bobo the Hobo 06/11/2017 (Sun) 15:54:35 No. 1414
I too, have been enjoying working on Super-Sized again.

>>1409
Think about it this way; I'm 23. I've been writing for 9 years. That's nine years of people coming to/realizing that they have a weight gain/fat fetish. You've got kids who were born in 2000 & up coming in and seeing all this for the first time.

Yeah, we're kinda old. At least on the internet.

>>1413
Yup, it's practically a staple of the community.
Anonymous 06/11/2017 (Sun) 19:18:55 No. 1415
>>1414
wow
I didn't know that
what about the rest of them ?
jerkajerk/ikearct 06/12/2017 (Mon) 02:49:20 No. 1420
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>>1409

You may as well be dead in the ground, you old FUCK!

Just kidding, but seriously, you're 24 and are but a child.

>>1411

I remember watching the events of 9/11 unfold in my Home Ec. class. We weren't allowed to go home early "unless we knew relatives involved in the tragedy". Several people I knew lied to get out of class. I, however, did not stoop so low.

>>1414

>tfw Bobo is younger than you by several years and yet way better at writing

I'm glad you're having fun in Mel though :3
Lucifermorningstar 06/12/2017 (Mon) 03:06:38 No. 1421
There's currently a line of stuff being made for a pregnant/fat interactive called Gluttons(a sequel of sorts to RenaGlutton), sadly, while it's a good deal of writing, it feels kinda shit with all the sumo shit involved.
I do not like Sumo, well, in my fetish stuff I mean, it's an alright sport to watch.

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1939554-Gluttons

Seriously, the Vanilla storyline, it deals with a pregnant woman who's a sumo, the WORST job for a pregnant woman…
jerkajerk/ikearct 06/12/2017 (Mon) 03:47:04 No. 1422
>>1421

Briefly checked this story out. Seems pretty "Anime" in it's writing, which is whatever.

Naming something "Gluttons" introduces fun ideas, having it immediately involve a series that most people had a weird Waifu crush on from 99-200X is risky, and having it exclusively include a 'Mon from that show, and then have it get into… Sumo Matches… I guess????????


I dunno, seems doomed for failure. But that's just my opinion.
CSJ 06/13/2017 (Tue) 22:16:14 No. 1430
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>>1407
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2072923-Davens-Port/map/123233

first contribution to anything for millennia. God damn you jerk and your community sob stories. I can't afford this procrastination.

God damn you all to hell.
techy 06/14/2017 (Wed) 01:51:37 No. 1432
>>1421
>Fat AND pregnant

:DDDDDD

>mostly furry and sumo shit

DDDDDD:
jerkajerk/ikearct 06/15/2017 (Thu) 05:52:25 No. 1441
>>1429

Bobo, I swear you've used that exact image before.

Also these are all great! I've been meaning to get back to it, I've been getting over some weird stomach bug thing and haven't had a ton of energy to write.

My life is a constant batch of excuses just good enough to procrastinate on.

>>1430

Oh shit! Nice new chapter!

>>1432


More like:

>Fat

:D

>AND PREGNANT

:D :D :D

>AND FURRY

¯\_(ツ)_/¯

>AND SUMO

┬┴┬┴┤(･_├┬┴┬┴


Boy, I can't wait to see how badly the formatting gets fucked up on this
Mollycoddles 06/15/2017 (Thu) 20:29:06 No. 1444
>>1413

It's true. I wrote and posted the very first chapter on the evening of Sept. 10, 2001.

Alice just made Osama bin Laden THAT mad.
Techy 06/15/2017 (Thu) 20:44:06 No. 1445
>>1441
okay but how about

>FURRY

¯\_(ツ)_/¯

>CANON CHARACTERS BROUGHT INTO THE REAL WORLD FOR NO REASON SO DIVORCED FROM THEIR SOURCE MATERIAL THAT EVERY CHAPTER IS INTERCHANGEABLE

D:
nowaya 06/16/2017 (Fri) 02:01:54 No. 1447
>>1407

Thanks for introducing me to Achewood, I really like it
Anonymous 06/16/2017 (Fri) 06:54:57 No. 1448
The best wg story on writing.com imho.
Hope you can contribute, there are a few interesting arcs on this story.
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1911783-Madisons-Freshman-15
Pink-Lightning 06/16/2017 (Fri) 20:01:01 No. 1453
>>1441
>Sumo while pregnant
God fucking damnit. I just want fetish stories that treat sumo seriously, is that too much to ask?
jerkajerk/ikearct 06/17/2017 (Sat) 05:27:06 No. 1454
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>>1447
Glad to hear it. Still my favorite webcomic.

>>1444

HAHAHA that's completely awful, yet amazing.
Anonymous 06/18/2017 (Sun) 20:10:12 No. 1462
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1363002-The-Fattest-Town

Used to be my favourite, concept has a bunch of potential but oh boy, did the quality nosedive. So many people that don't get the concept of suspense and stick insta-fats everywhere.
Bobo the Hobo 06/20/2017 (Tue) 21:55:36 No. 1473
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>>1441

Every KotH image I post is special and unique.

Also, I continued your chaoter! But I also cribbed your intro chapter for Donna and made her fat

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2041198-Super-Sized-the-Mel-Carlyle-Story/map/11122122123

I hope you don't mind!
Anonymous 06/21/2017 (Wed) 03:08:12 No. 1476
Yo someone start working on leslie and devan story
jerkajerk/ikearct 06/21/2017 (Wed) 05:24:36 No. 1477
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>>1473
GUESS WHAT
I DO MIND

THAT'S IT I'M TURNING THE ENTIRE MEL CARLYLE STORY INTO A FURRY PREGNANT SUMO INTERACTIVE AND NO ONE CAN STOP ME


just kidding i'm working on a new chapter right now <3
jerkajerk/ikearct 06/22/2017 (Thu) 07:16:34 No. 1483
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>>1462

Trust me, dude. "The Fattest Town" in it's own right has had many iterations in my scrapped story album. It's a fun idea, and one I'm playing with more and more in my "GAMES" that I have grown less and less interested in- Hell, I haven't touched my latest one in almost 3 weeks.

But yeah, "The Fattest Town" had a lot of potential that was killed by people of any sort of writing merit going "Well… I'd rather write in an interactive that actually has people ACTIVE in it."

I may have to write a story about that in the future, if my own self-loathing doesn't get in the way.

>>1476

no, u.

>>1477

All jokes aside about everyone sitting on a fig (You'll wish you didn't)

What do you want to see in this particular arch?

I (briefly) lived with two stoners, and I MEAN the title "stoner" in ever sense of the word. One ballooned and gained over thirty pounds in three months, and was absolutely flabbergasted at this fact.

This was because they ate Panera Bread at least twice a week because it was "healthy", despite getting a bowl of mac and cheese, an entire sandwich, chips, and a massive coffee drink to go with it.

Point being, Bobo has thrown out a healthy loaf of manna that should be happily munched upon.

I'm finishing up a chapter now, but I'm curious for input for the future <3
Bobo the Hobo 06/22/2017 (Thu) 16:11:10 No. 1490
>>1483

Stoners are fun! I've been meaning to acknowledge the fact that Mel and her friends partake in the Devil's Lettuce for a while now, I just finally buckled down and did it.

I don't INTEND on it being an all the time plot point, but I wouldn't be adverse to it being mentioned more often.

There are a couple of things I'd like to work into this arc specifically, like Mel teaming up with her friends to make Brooke fat or Donna slowly chubbing up in a way that's less "obvious" than how I tend to write stuff, but other than that, my slate's blank.

I'm with Jerkster! Any suggestions or things you guys might like to see?
Anonymous 06/23/2017 (Fri) 21:31:01 No. 1492
>>1490

Personally I'd like that little detail mentioned a bit more as well. Also quite like how the three (Donna and the others) all have somewhat differing views on being fat and whatnot. Would like to see more of that and the whole conflict.

I'd like to see other chapters fleshed out a bit more as well sometime if y'all don't mind. Sure, we got a bit of Mel and Hannah in Buttercombe, but I feel like there's much more freedom with this interactive since they're young adults and not stuck at the academy and surrounding areas.

Another arc I feel like needs a bit more is Rhonda and Sally (either them dating or already married/both aunts wise)
Anonymous 06/28/2017 (Wed) 18:19:05 No. 1510
Relevant because "writing.com", this part of this interactive is long, generally well-written, and entertaining.

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1962160-Dangan-Ronpa-Female-Weight-Gain/map/122
Anonymous 07/01/2017 (Sat) 12:16:12 No. 1528
>That most recent Cerys and Katrina gossip chapter in BC

Please… I can only handle so much Sung teasi.
Anonymous 07/11/2017 (Tue) 19:59:05 No. 1552
Anyone YFF ideas in the back-burner?
Anonymous 07/14/2017 (Fri) 20:18:36 No. 1562
I'm not a huge fan of the story, mostly because I dislike slob, but how damn someone is salty over that ancient ring interactive
Anonymous 07/23/2017 (Sun) 03:38:14 No. 1614
>>1559
Seconding this idea.
Flesh 07/23/2017 (Sun) 11:46:37 No. 1615
>>1562
yeah i heard about this.

look even though i'm the main contributor to that story it's still not ideal. all i want is a plain jane interactive related to incest and weight gain. is that so much to ask?
Anonymous 07/24/2017 (Mon) 04:24:10 No. 1618
Please add to, Chubby Hermione is bae.
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1059826-Hogwarts-worst-curse/
Anonymous 08/03/2017 (Thu) 10:05:04 No. 1662
What do you think would be different if Alice was the older sister?
Anonymous 08/03/2017 (Thu) 15:31:06 No. 1664
>>1618
>first Hermione WG chapter is multi-thousand pound garbage
Dropped.
Anonymous 08/03/2017 (Thu) 17:11:45 No. 1665
>>1664
Exactly. I hate that shit.
Anonymous 08/05/2017 (Sat) 10:36:09 No. 1670
>>1664
Nah isn't it fantastic? Right away she gains 2 million pounds! Big numbers = kinkier
Anonymous 08/07/2017 (Mon) 01:34:18 No. 1675
>New MC Alice chapters updated by Bobo… and spammer kid

Can't have a win without a slap in the nuts
Anonymous 08/07/2017 (Mon) 01:53:14 No. 1676
>>1665
Same.

The process is almost more enjoyable than the result.

That and the 'sea of flab' stuff is a bit out of my realm of enjoyment.
Anonymous 08/08/2017 (Tue) 03:52:26 No. 1683
>>1676
>>1670
>>1665
>>1664
Na, look in the other storylines.
long time lurker gamer96 08/08/2017 (Tue) 06:10:10 No. 1684
Whats going on guys, long time lurker here. I kept up with most writing interactives that have been posted since forever. Huge fan of all big names such as BOBO,Mollycoddles and so and so forth. I just wanted some feedback on my first chapter. I know its rough as heck, but none the less constructive criticism is welcome.

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1723303-Chubbeso-Academy/action/view/chapter_map/1141321212111121221212
Anonymous 08/08/2017 (Tue) 07:59:46 No. 1686
>>1684
Not bad at all, I've seen far, far worse first chapters. I'd say; watch your spelling and punctuation, but otherwise, good job!
Anonymous 08/09/2017 (Wed) 04:29:04 No. 1693
If anyone's interested there's a Gundam weight gain interactive. It's got male and female weight gain.
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2052159-Gundam-Weight-Gain/map/1
College Body Ready, Part 1: Summer curvesahead 08/14/2017 (Mon) 17:22:29 No. 1722
Hi everybody I've just submitted the first part of my very own weight gain story, would appreciate if you guys checked it out,thanks. https://curvesahead.deviantart.com/art/College-Body-Ready-Part-1-Summer-698770691?ga_submit_new=10%3A1502730972
Anonymous 08/14/2017 (Mon) 21:30:14 No. 1723
>tfw all my favorite Buttercombe storylines are ded

I'd kill for updates on the Hannah-as-Ashley-Knight's-TA storyline, as well as the storyline where Ronnie puts the screws on Alice and makes her massive.
Anonymous 08/15/2017 (Tue) 08:50:51 No. 1728
>>1723
There's a slight problem there in that a) Dugtriet left and b) it's quite a convoluted story chain, involving about 4 teachers - most ways you look at it, at least as far as I can see, each storyline needs a Maria chapter or two before Hannah goes back to Ashley

That said, I'd definitely be up for adding a bit in future
Anonymous 08/19/2017 (Sat) 16:13:51 No. 1757
Damn, the DC Comics interactive and most of Buttercombe (except for the cheerleaders line) is pretty dead.
Bobo the Hobo 08/20/2017 (Sun) 00:09:26 No. 1759
>>1723
>>1757

If you want the truth, the biggest reason for my drop off in Buttercombe is that as I'm getting older, it's harder and harder for me to write for girls who tend to gravitate around the age of 16. I created that interactive when I was 18 and fresh out of high school, so I can't help but feel a little out of sorts when I try to go back to that mindset.

THAT BEING SAID, I really want to get back into the swing of things. I'd love to get back to writing for Ronnie's Alice, and I've been gravitating towards Jen Walker lately.

At any rate, I'm always around! If you're up for a collaboration or just want to spitball ideas, you can always email me on my writing.com account!
Anonymous 08/20/2017 (Sun) 09:10:15 No. 1760
>>1759
That's totally understandable.

That said, the TA storyline is quite good for that, though as with most Dougtriet storylines it's gone a somewhat perverse path… not that there's anything wrong with that.

There's also that Mia Underwood storyline iirc
Anonymous 08/21/2017 (Mon) 05:55:00 No. 1762
>>1759
I'd love to see more added onto Mia Underwood's storyline. Just more different branching paths and maybe a conclusion or continuation on the weight war between her and Polluck.

Jen Walker could use a bit more branches as well. Personally would love seeing the one where she is promoted to Polluck's head chef added.

I feel like Adeline could use alot of fleshing out as well (pardon the pun!) She's barely gotten anything.
Anonymous 08/21/2017 (Mon) 07:37:02 No. 1763
>>1759
Good, good, now you can write more about adult women…
Anonymous 08/22/2017 (Tue) 21:04:34 No. 1767
the stories just need more fetish material anyways. it feels like its been ages since we've had anything to do with fat instead of just endless character treadmilling
Bobo the Hobo 08/26/2017 (Sat) 17:57:22 No. 1788
Soooo I wrote like, a WHOLE BUNCH of Alice the Fat Cheerleader chapters.

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1819934-Alice-the-Fat-Cheerleader/map/111111111111111112112312212

They start here.

Enjoy!
Anonymous 08/27/2017 (Sun) 23:48:24 No. 1795
>>1759
It would be kind of neat to take one of Jen's big story threads and actually finish it. Like, get it to a "The End" moment. Are there any finished story threads in Buttercombe at all?
Anonymous 08/28/2017 (Mon) 23:04:11 No. 1814
>>1795
There's one with Hannah Hammond, and there's another with Ashley Knight & Mia Underwood
Anonymous 09/10/2017 (Sun) 01:16:18 No. 1851
I will bloody pay real dollars for additions to that fat Violet Barnes storyline
Anonymous 09/14/2017 (Thu) 03:41:02 No. 1859
>>1851
I will sell my house for "Simpsons weight gain story" to come back
Anonymous 09/23/2017 (Sat) 06:10:05 No. 1884
>>1407
So when is Bobo posting the new bonus round for mix and match 3? I thought I read somewhere that it would be posted very soon, but that was about a week ago.
Anonymous 10/07/2017 (Sat) 00:13:09 No. 1926
Just wanted to say I really like regulus 11's new Buttercombe chapters. I love seeing updates to the SSS storyline and I think the new chapters were well-written.
Anonymous 10/07/2017 (Sat) 16:35:53 No. 1927
I haven't cared much for most the SSS storylines since I feel it's just a quick easy way to remove conflict in the characters lives. At least this one's well written.
Anonymous 10/07/2017 (Sat) 20:34:49 No. 1928
>>1927
it's way more interesting than just a quick way to remove conflict. It's a fun world building element, it also injects some interesting story elements into threads that didn't really have anywhere to go, and it allows the characters to get fatter without their life just becoming utter hell.

I really like those regulus chapters because they introduce a bunch of other buttercombe characters. Although I was a little dissapointed with how 3 of the 7 are trampltum's characters. I just don't care any more about cerys and arisa, there are so many other good buttercombe characters.
Anonymous 10/07/2017 (Sat) 23:28:48 No. 1929
>>1927
The mary-sueness of the characters is what's starting to bug me. Arisa's the fattest and Zahara's the greatest cook ever suddenly. It's getting annoying.
Anonymous 10/08/2017 (Sun) 16:55:16 No. 1932
honestly theres just been so many chapters with people just talking and nothing else I've forgotten what's going on

say what you will about 'mary-sue'ness, but at least the recent SSS chapters are about fat characters getting fatter, instead of two thousand sequential chapters of build up with no payoff in sight
Anonymous 10/09/2017 (Mon) 09:26:40 No. 1934
Buttercombe has turned into a pile of trash. Just keep throwing more and more new girls into the pile and needlessly having eight or more characters a scene as nothing happens.
Anonymous 10/15/2017 (Sun) 11:28:37 No. 1960
It would be great if you guys could work on the Madison's Freshman 15 story. https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1911783-Madisons-Freshman-15
I think is the best one on Writing.com and it has so many amazing story lines
Anonymous 10/17/2017 (Tue) 06:00:13 No. 1969
I'm just happy Ms. Polluck's getting more chapters. She's barely had any before and there was a huge gap in time where the older characters storylines just stopped all together. Older characters (both the teachers/staff and as in time of creation) could definitely use more stories or continuations. I'm getting sick of the new bland girls always getting chapters
Anonymous 10/20/2017 (Fri) 08:58:55 No. 1984
Anyone interested in doing anything with Rozy Rhodes? I feel her thread with Yumi is underrated.
Anonymous 11/01/2017 (Wed) 23:25:26 No. 2035
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>>1407
Anyone have some good pear-shaped/bottom-heavy weight gain chapters in interactives?
Anonymous 11/02/2017 (Thu) 00:15:05 No. 2037
>>2035
Well I'm guessing by your picture you don't mind anime, so I'd recommend the F/SN Elizabeth Branch.

>inb4 Elizabeth isn't from F/SN
I know, that's just what the interactive is called.
Anonymous 11/03/2017 (Fri) 16:21:45 No. 2050
>>2037
can you give a link? searching "F/SN Elizabeth Branch" doesn't give any useful results
Anonymous 11/03/2017 (Fri) 21:20:52 No. 2051
>>2050
Yeah, writing.com's search engine sucks major hippo nuts
Anonymous 11/03/2017 (Fri) 22:59:02 No. 2053
>>2052
Thank you kind stranger :)
Anonymous 11/04/2017 (Sat) 07:58:01 No. 2054
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>tfw someone writes a comment that uses over 2000 exclamation marks.

https://www.writing.com/main/profile/notebook/psuedophobic
Anonymous 11/04/2017 (Sat) 21:59:33 No. 2055
>>2037
That was quite entertaining. You have some good taste, fine sir.
Anonymous 11/08/2017 (Wed) 03:20:45 No. 2056
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>all these fat lesbian scenes in the Alice interactive
Anonymous 11/09/2017 (Thu) 08:23:14 No. 2058
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>Mel is now a "Product Quality Assurance Agent"
Anonymous 11/16/2017 (Thu) 06:51:18 No. 2079
Did Bobo just disappear off the face of the earth again?
Anonymous 11/17/2017 (Fri) 02:19:09 No. 2081
>>1407
What's comic from?
Anonymous 11/17/2017 (Fri) 10:21:25 No. 2082
>>2081
Achewood
Anonymous 11/20/2017 (Mon) 04:59:12 No. 2096
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>>2037
got anymore recommendations?
Pink-Lightning 11/20/2017 (Mon) 19:41:02 No. 2097
So, I know Buttercombe is kind of a steady stream of shit lately, so a lot of you have probably unfollowed it like me, but if you're interested in a wg story more about feels than about Fetish, I'm pretty proud of this.

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856959-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Growing-Girls/map/1132121212121121111

www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856959-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Growing-Girls/map/11321212121211211111
Anonymous 11/20/2017 (Mon) 23:42:46 No. 2099
>>2096
I'm glad you asked. If you're specifically looking for good bottom heavy fatties in interactives, there's this Lucky Star interactive
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1480944-Lucky-Star-Weight-Gain/map/12512112
Warning, it gets really good around the middle when Kagami hits 170 and then peters out but everything until then is pretty good.
Anonymous 11/24/2017 (Fri) 02:25:17 No. 2105
>>2079
If he did, I say good riddance. He wasn't that good anyway.
Anonymous 11/24/2017 (Fri) 11:00:17 No. 2106
>>2105
lol
Anonymous 12/10/2017 (Sun) 14:18:32 No. 2137
>>2135
Loving the new chapters with Mel, her aunt and Sally. Pls keep it up man!!
Anonymous 12/10/2017 (Sun) 14:40:43 No. 2138
Anyone up to the task of continuing this storyline? I feel like it was just starting to ramp up and has been left forgotten for a long while now

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856959-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Growing-Girls/map/151212112211222211221121221111221
Anonymous 12/10/2017 (Sun) 22:18:20 No. 2139
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856959-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Growing-Girls/map/124332311112111111212212121211221131223111111321

If anyone has some free time, could you work on this one. I was hoping the risters start fattening katrina(accidentally maybe) to even bigger proportions. Maybe even to where the SSS isn't big enough for her.
Anonymous 12/12/2017 (Tue) 01:14:25 No. 2141
I know that Alice has been a bit slow recently, but would anyone consider adding to this chapter. https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1819934-Alice-the-Fat-Cheerleader/map/111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111121111111121111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111112?add_success=true

The thought of having an obese Laurie finally having her manipulate and bitchy ways come back to hit her in the health issues associated with obesity, and some mobility issues hitting Jen is such a good idea, and while it is a bit hard, if people went morbid with it, then it would be a perfect addition to an underrepresented fetish.
Anonymous 12/14/2017 (Thu) 09:40:48 No. 2145
Yo could someone hopefully do this chapter?

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2041198-Super-Sized-the-Mel-Carlyle-Story/map/145312121



Would love to see more of fat Rhonda, and I like the implications given what this previous chapter set up: https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2041198-Super-Sized-the-Mel-Carlyle-Story/map/1453121
Anonymous 12/15/2017 (Fri) 01:46:46 No. 2148
>>2099
Eh, didnt find it that attractive, but it was pretty good.
Anonymous 12/16/2017 (Sat) 18:37:51 No. 2150
>>2148
Maybe you'll enjoy the Cecilia branch of this interactive
https://www.writing.com/main/interact.php/item_id/1824931-ISInfinite-Stratos-Girls-Weight-Gain/map/12
Anonymous 12/17/2017 (Sun) 23:26:32 No. 2151
So I just made a new chapter for a forgotten (and poorly written) story-line for Fat Family, would anyone mind giving me feed back?
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1167851-Your-Fat-Family/map/1532221
Anonymous 12/27/2017 (Wed) 22:46:38 No. 2175
>Want to sign up for Writing.com
>Registration requires a fucking postal code of all things
I don't even know my postal code and I don't think I want this website to know either.
Anonymous 12/28/2017 (Thu) 05:20:15 No. 2178
>>2175
Just make one up, it's what I did. Do you seriously not know your own postcode though?
Anonymous 12/28/2017 (Thu) 19:16:05 No. 2181
>Cheer moms getting fat
>slow believable weight loss arc for Alice
>Laurie enabling Jen so she looks better by comparison
>Last chapter sets up for Laurie to make either her mom or Jen to get huge

Bobo's fucking crushing it with these Alice the Fat Cheerleader chapters lately
Anonymous 12/29/2017 (Fri) 02:56:23 No. 2182
>>2181
Yeah I'm loving this stuff focusing on the adults, instead of high school girls.
Anonymous 12/29/2017 (Fri) 08:05:52 No. 2183
>>2182
Why would you want to focus on adults over high school girls?
Anonymous 12/29/2017 (Fri) 14:04:48 No. 2185
>>2183
Cuz Milfs are hella attractive?
Anonymous 12/30/2017 (Sat) 19:42:15 No. 2191
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>>2183
This question is a joke, right?
Anonymous 12/30/2017 (Sat) 22:02:28 No. 2192
What does the buttercombe academy vegetarian options look like? It just seems strange to think there are students eating anything resembling a "diet".
Anonymous 12/30/2017 (Sat) 22:04:37 No. 2193
>>2183
Bobo has said it himself that he's getting to the age where writing about high school girls is becoming more difficult.
Anonymous 12/31/2017 (Sun) 04:19:00 No. 2194
>>2193
Same reason why I can't get into anime as much as I did before.
Anonymous 01/02/2018 (Tue) 07:35:33 No. 2202
Would anyone be willing to keep this line of chapters rolling? Was just beginning to pick up steam then nothing.

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856959-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Growing-Girls/map/15431121221111122212
Anonymous 01/02/2018 (Tue) 22:15:40 No. 2204
>>2182
I like how it's evenly split. It's not just all about their moms all the sudden. Alice Jen and Laurie still have roles to play they're just not the ones gaining.
Anonymous 01/03/2018 (Wed) 23:26:24 No. 2209
>>2193
I wish that meant he would come back and do more writing about the teachers and staff. I'd love to see more Pollock or Jen Walker stuff.
Anonymous 01/04/2018 (Thu) 21:14:07 No. 2210
>>2209
Agreed. Pollock has been getting a decent amount of chapters but nowhere near the other characters. I wish he'd work more on Pollock, Underwood, Flattery, and Espanosa.
Anonymous 01/06/2018 (Sat) 04:46:09 No. 2213
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> "At the mercy of their deceptive daughters, Lilith & Moonchild start to balloon!"
Anonymous 01/07/2018 (Sun) 23:30:04 No. 2215
>>2210
The Espanosa/Hannah chapters always go straight to my dick.
Anonymous 01/08/2018 (Mon) 00:03:25 No. 2216
What this guy said^
Anonymous 01/08/2018 (Mon) 02:21:27 No. 2217
>>2215
Hell yeah dude
Anonymous 01/18/2018 (Thu) 03:04:08 No. 2235
>>2209

Don't hold your breath. I think it's clear that Bobo's given up. His quality has tanked and it takes him forever to write anything decent.
Anonymous 01/18/2018 (Thu) 07:36:06 No. 2236
>>2235
His quality's still there, he's just never in the mood to write about his own characters. And, that's understandable to a point, but I feel like he's gotten a decent amount of time writing about other characters. He should come back now.
Bobo the Hobo 01/19/2018 (Fri) 04:49:57 No. 2237
>>2235
Normally I see stuff like this and I try to brush it off. Like, you know, try to be nice with maybe a cutesy quip and a King of the Hill gif or something…

But that's just mean, man.

Aside from a few recent commissioned chapters to help me out through the holidays, I don't do this for money. I write for fun and I write so people enjoy it. Comments like this make me regret that decision.

For what it's worth, I'm sorry you haven't been enjoying my recent work. I wish I had the time to write more too.

I'll try not to disappoint in the future, I guess.
Anonymous 01/20/2018 (Sat) 01:37:04 No. 2240
>>2235
Personally I think the mom stuff in Alice is the best yet.
Buttercombe also feels like a lost cause at this point.
Anonymous 01/20/2018 (Sat) 01:52:59 No. 2241
>>2237
Keep at it dude. I love the chapters you've been adding onto Alice with all their moms fattening up. I just wish we'd see a little more of that with the teachers of buttercombe or some of your other content.
Anonymous 01/21/2018 (Sun) 04:43:53 No. 2243
http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1910371-Your-Expanding-Sister
It feels like this one never gets updated anymore and is by far my favourite. Can we get some stuff going in the lauren BE tree pls?
Anonymous 01/22/2018 (Mon) 03:33:22 No. 2245
>>2240
IF we could only get a conclusion to Jen's story, I'd be happy. It's the first one I ever followed, and it's also one of the longest. I basically don't want anything else at this point.
Anonymous 01/22/2018 (Mon) 09:27:16 No. 2246
>>2237
I've been really liking your recent work, so screw the haters!
Anonymous 01/23/2018 (Tue) 04:29:32 No. 2247
haven't checked on writing.com in ages, is there any way to access interactives these days without paying for a membership?
Anonymous 01/23/2018 (Tue) 13:56:36 No. 2249
>>2247
You can have a basic free membership and view interactives
Anonymous 01/24/2018 (Wed) 03:37:24 No. 2250
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>>2249
Yeah, about that…
Anonymous 01/24/2018 (Wed) 08:26:28 No. 2251
>>2250
Learn patience, or pay. It sucks, but it's more than possible to read interactives with a free membership.
Anonymous 01/24/2018 (Wed) 16:59:07 No. 2252
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>>2250
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yJxCdh1Ps48

This is the kind of thing that makes me want to just give up on that site. Maybe just give up on the whole interactive aspect and do self-contained stories instead.
Anonymous 01/24/2018 (Wed) 20:24:38 No. 2254
>>2252
The sad thing is that they could free up a good deal of resources for the actual site if they just scrapped their hopelessly broken email system and re-purposed the server(s). But instead they'll just find new ways of begging to keep their heads above the water, like implementing a Monero mining applet and splitting so little with the miner that the average user would have to mine for 8 months nonstop just to buy a three-month basic membership.
Anonymous 01/31/2018 (Wed) 03:04:06 No. 2265
Oh, wow, I had no idea the "Alice needs SSS" story had been continued some. That was great.
Anonymous 01/31/2018 (Wed) 05:13:43 No. 2266
>finish chapter
>can't get into story because free account
>paranoid about getting sniped before I can add it
Anonymous 01/31/2018 (Wed) 06:48:37 No. 2268
I swear Writing.com has been getting shittier and shittier with free accounts in the past week. At first it was the occasional "oh, servers full up" and now every damn day I get like 8 "there'z server restrictions now. Pay for a membership!" Getting tired of this BS. Man, I just want my fattywank, man…
FC Punk 01/31/2018 (Wed) 12:29:00 No. 2270
Yeah, I've given up on Writing.com. I am not going to pay just to read shitty writing, and with all respect to my peers in this thread, who are all very talented, the majority of writing.com is shit and always was shit.

I know it's not so easy for the lot of you, who invested time and creative energy to these projects, but the writings on the wall. Eventually there won't be any free memberships at all, that's the logical conclusion to this.

If DA suddenly decided to charge us all, would we still stay? Hell no.
Anonymous 02/03/2018 (Sat) 00:26:24 No. 2273
>>2270

Yeah. At this point, it seems like interactives are paid-customers only.

It's timing me out for somewhere around twenty minutes every six chapters.

Considering the vast, vast majority of the writing on the site is, "How about X? Yes, or no?" or low-effort filler… there's just no way to actually read anything with the five or ten chapters you're allowed to look at in a session.

Even if the content currently on the site were worth $20 a year, locking everything behind a paywall means new or casual writers won't be adding anything.
Anonymous 02/03/2018 (Sat) 07:44:24 No. 2274
http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856570-Gluttony-and-Glory-Adventuress-WG

So many good stories here just… just… take abrupt right turns and then die. The monster girl story is also good
Anonymous 02/03/2018 (Sat) 10:14:58 No. 2275
>>2265
wait, which story are you talking about?
Anonymous 02/04/2018 (Sun) 14:35:47 No. 2279
>>2273
They're not entirely, but accessing them as a free member is still annoying.

Accessing them as a non-member is probably off the cards now
Anonymous 02/05/2018 (Mon) 20:40:32 No. 2287
>>2273
I dunno. There are a bunch of new authirs that I've seen crop up in the past few days on Buttercombe. I can't speak to their quality of writing, but they're certainly still there.
Anonymous 02/12/2018 (Mon) 09:41:51 No. 2303
I'd love to see a fatter Ruby added to this story. Let's keep this story alive!

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2101921-RWBY-Round-Waddling-Bloated-Youths/map/11111
Anonymous 02/15/2018 (Thu) 00:00:38 No. 2305
This site really needs to get its shit together. There's no reason why you have to pay to simply read shit.
Anonymous 02/16/2018 (Fri) 15:39:36 No. 2310
I'm seriously getting fucked off with the begging for paid membership. Why can't I just read a bloody fat fetish story without this crap?
Anonymous 02/17/2018 (Sat) 01:19:20 No. 2311
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>>2310
I suspect the site owner has delusions of grandeur for what the site is or could be and probably wants to drink bleach when he sees fatty wank interactives dominating the site by word count and traffic.
Anonymous 02/17/2018 (Sat) 05:12:10 No. 2312
Can't we like start a petition or bitch to Writing.com Support or something? This shit is getting to be fucking annoying, and unacceptable.
FC Punk 02/18/2018 (Sun) 17:52:14 No. 2318
>>2311
How the hell did Writing.com become a sort of hub of this stuff anyways? I've been reading stuff there since the Yahoo Group days.
Anonymous 02/18/2018 (Sun) 19:55:33 No. 2319
>>2318
At this point who knows? It was probably just the first place to offer the needed functionality and network effects kept it popular.
Anonymous 02/18/2018 (Sun) 22:26:41 No. 2320
>>2319
More importantly, surely there's another website that offers a similar service without the invasive bullshit?
FC Punk 02/19/2018 (Mon) 00:50:26 No. 2321
It couldn't possibly be that hard to start our own, could it? A website just dedicated to interactive stories. If you make it very bare bones I would guess you could keep the costs down. You don't need any fancy features for something like this. The transformation website The Changing Mirror (formerly known as Forever Changing) has interactive stories, maybe it could be modeled on that.

Or maybe we could just use that, I dunno.
Anonymous 02/19/2018 (Mon) 04:53:25 No. 2323
>>2321
Maybe, but I think a site geared towards fat fetish interactive stories is in order.
Anonymous 02/19/2018 (Mon) 05:21:30 No. 2324
>>2323
Agreed
Anonymous 02/19/2018 (Mon) 05:21:37 No. 2325
>>2323
Agreed
Anonymous 02/19/2018 (Mon) 11:00:13 No. 2326
One problem with "start our own" is that Writing.com has a lot of "legacy" stuff - admittedly, much is crap, but stuff like Your Fat Family or Alice is huge, and in many places pretty good.

Speaking of YFF, I've had some chapters on an immensely slow back-burner, but I swear the story is barely ever updated - does anyone else have any interest in it any more?
I'd even take requests/ideas for storylines you'd like to see get some love if I thought other writers would add as well.
FC Punk 02/19/2018 (Mon) 16:26:25 No. 2327
>>2326
That may be, but in cases like this you have to deal with the hand your given, and the hand we've been currently delt is the good stuff and our archives are behind a paywall.

Maybe some brave soul would sacrifice the money and time to archive the entirety of Your Fat Family, but that would be a waste of time, considering how much crap is also in an otherwise great Interactive.

No, we'd just have to restart the story. Rewrite it. And the thing about writing, the rewrite is always better than the first draft. We could create better chapters now, and not be bogged down by continuity either, we'd be start from scratch.

I don't have any technical website building know how, so I can't do it, but I think it's a valid idea and one worth pursuing once everyone else's resolve breaks and we collectively say fuck Writing.com
FC Punk 02/19/2018 (Mon) 16:54:51 No. 2328
Sorry to double post, but I want to make a further point that "legacy" doesn't matter because at any given moment stories like Alice or YFF could be deleted.

The fact of life on the internet is that content comes and goes, sites go under and in some cases a decades worth of content is wiped out just like that.
Anonymous 02/19/2018 (Mon) 20:18:33 No. 2329
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>>2326
I'm thinking I might just turn what's there of my interactive into self-contained stories at this point. The collaborative thing worked out really well originally, but in recent years it just hasn't been ideal. Now with Writing.com becoming more shit everyday seems like everyone will just lose interest anyways. That all assumes I can find the time to actually start writing again.
Anonymous 02/19/2018 (Mon) 20:23:45 No. 2330
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>>2329
Holy shit, I just realized I already said this same EXACT bullcrap like a month ago. Fuck, time to stop thinking about it and start getting it done.
Anonymous 02/19/2018 (Mon) 22:13:23 No. 2333
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That's it. I'm completely done.
Anonymous 02/21/2018 (Wed) 18:56:06 No. 2336
>>2327 >>2328

Exactly why I've recently been saving a few of my favorite storylines from a few interactives as pdfs
Anonymous 02/27/2018 (Tue) 07:56:30 No. 2345
Can Buttercombe get some more focus on the staff, please? Seems like there's thousands of chapters for students but the staff chapter lines never seem to go past the 20s…
Caker19 02/27/2018 (Tue) 20:02:40 No. 2347
So, just a thought, but why dont we pool together the $20 for a yearly membership between us for one account? It would at least allow people to view the stuff, and if they wanted to add on their own, then they could get their own, as it is now.

Just my thoughts
Anonymous 02/28/2018 (Wed) 01:09:52 No. 2348
>>2347
Totally willing to put this together. Does anyone know if accounts can be logged in at the same time in different places?
Anonymous 02/28/2018 (Wed) 01:26:37 No. 2349
>>2347
for $20 you could run your own dang website hosting interactive text

this is 100% a grift and giving in is giving in
FC Punk 02/28/2018 (Wed) 15:18:09 No. 2351
>>2347
It's a good idea on paper, but all it takes is some asshole to change the email and change the password and it's stolen from the rest of us.

>>2349 is right, and running our own thing is a valid option because then we would be the ones in control. The powers that be at Writing.com consider us pests and parasites.
Caker19 02/28/2018 (Wed) 19:14:49 No. 2353
>>2351
I'm agreed that running our own thing would be better for everyone here, however, judging by the thread so far, there seems to be a lack of relevant skills/willingness to do the project
Anonymous 03/01/2018 (Thu) 00:17:31 No. 2354
>>2353
I could handle the server admin, DNS, etc. side of things if someone else did the webdev side and gave me something to deploy in the first place. I've got multiple terabytes a month of bandwidth I can use so it's hardly an issue of capacity.
FC Punk 03/01/2018 (Thu) 00:31:48 No. 2355
>>2354
Well hey, at least that's a start in the right direction. Maybe you should give some contact info in case some anon has the skills and wants to volunteer.
Pink-Lighting 03/03/2018 (Sat) 15:48:34 No. 2359
>>2348
They cannot. I have to log in every timeI use a different device even in my own home.
Anonymous 03/03/2018 (Sat) 23:37:12 No. 2360
I found a interactive that I think everyone might have missed. https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2110993 it's really good quality so far
Anonymous 03/04/2018 (Sun) 04:17:41 No. 2362
>>2360
Well shit, this just buries my interactive.
Anonymous 03/11/2018 (Sun) 02:46:40 No. 2385
>>2360

Similarly this one (https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2143736-LGBT-Male--Female-Weight-GainExpansion) also deserves more love
Anonymous 03/13/2018 (Tue) 17:19:37 No. 2397
>>2385
that E rating is going to kill it
Anonymous 03/13/2018 (Tue) 20:54:21 No. 2398
>>2385
>E rating is going to kill it
>not the being tied to the LGBT
They should have just made it a gay expansion interactive; people can enjoy yuri and yaoi but not even gays likes the LGBTs bullshit.
Anonymous 03/15/2018 (Thu) 07:06:39 No. 2406
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>>2398
>not even gays like the LGBTs bullshit
Anonymous 03/16/2018 (Fri) 00:13:47 No. 2408
>>2398
I want you to say that again to yourself, slowly.
Anonymous 03/16/2018 (Fri) 12:16:24 No. 2412
Its come up recently in Buttercombe but it applies everywhere. It is y'all not ya'll. Y'all is a contraction of "you all," ya'll would mean "ya will? More importantly y'all is not used in functionally any singular cases. The exception is an informal way while speaking with a representative of an organization. Like asking a solo cashier "Do y'all have pickles?" Technically it is to a single person however the question is referencing the store as a collective entity as well. Outside of that, when y'all is used it means you AND at least another.

So when trampledude writes "“Well if ya’ll don’ believe me, let’s get ya to a mirror!” Ellie Rae replied, taking Xo…" there is a typo and at least one to infinite more fattened up girls being led to the mirror.

Thanks.
Anonymous 03/20/2018 (Tue) 15:38:21 No. 2434
>>2412

My condolences, i'm so awfully sorry about your condition. It must be hard living with extreme autism, how do you cope?
Anonymous 03/21/2018 (Wed) 02:29:53 No. 2439
Are interactives ever actually available to free members anymore? The last few times I've visited it's said they're currently restricted due to high traffic.
Anonymous 03/22/2018 (Thu) 07:52:12 No. 2442
>>2439
can access them and I have a free account. It just requires patience.
Anonymous 03/23/2018 (Fri) 00:01:22 No. 2444
>>2442
patience and having the luck of being on the site at a low-traffic time
Anonymous 03/24/2018 (Sat) 19:16:53 No. 2446
I'm an enormous fan of Hesper as written by Spaghetti Westerner and Adipose Rex, but it seems to have petered out. I don't know if they come here, but is it possible there might be more chapters in future? I know AR has his own dA page, but I'd love to read more of what SW writes, if there is anything.
Anonymous 03/26/2018 (Mon) 19:56:41 No. 2454
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2141026-Packing-on-Pounds-the-Piper-Black-Story/map/14513

And I thought Pink Lightning couldn't get any more dreadful. Some of his chapters have been at best alright, and by that I mean alright as in "meh, I've read worse". But here is one of those that is just plain awful. Poor narration, generic dialogue with no real emotion, and trademark shoehorning romance with no proper build up all while clearly shifting the story to suit his vision of what good is, in which the bar must be pretty low on that. Read any chapter by Pink, and expect characters to start hooking up for no reason besides obvious degrading appeal. If you're gonna pair characters together, at least make the effort not to rush it. These things need actual development.

Who the hell is Max? Piper's pot dealer, apparently, and oh right Sam's girlfriend. So Max exists just so Piper can be the single one in the group. To say nothing that the chapter route said it's just Sam, Jay, and Madi. Shoving in one dimensional characters that exist only to establish characters in a relationship.

And yet that doesn't compare to the atrociously cobbled mess that is his route on Piper and Mel being roommates. Apparently, a bodacious blonde has to be Mel Carlyle, so there goes any potential fresh start with a new character. And surprise surprise, on his most recent chapter on that, they banged. There's no real writing appeal here. Just stereotypical badly written fanfiction.

Also that tap space with every new paragraph. Yeah we get it Pink, you fancy yourself a professional writer. The written work is still low quality, so I don't see the appeal.
Bobo the Hobo 03/27/2018 (Tue) 04:41:40 No. 2456
>>2454
Hey fun police, I liked them.

I've been down really lately, and Pink's a good friend who wanted to bump my chapters up. In fact, I asked if it'd be cool to do that Piper and Mel story. Who do you think wrote the chapter choices? They're two of my favorite characters, and Pink was being a good sport and cheering me up.

Point is, these are free chapters that people post. Don't be a douche.
Anonymous 03/27/2018 (Tue) 08:30:18 No. 2457
>>2456
doesn't bother me Bobo, I like when your stories have character crossovers, or romantic parings of fan-favorite characters
Anonymous 03/28/2018 (Wed) 03:22:48 No. 2463
>>2456
Hope ya get back on your feet soon man
Anonymous 03/28/2018 (Wed) 03:30:19 No. 2464
>>2454
Wait, are you seriously complaining about paragraph indents?
Anonymous 04/02/2018 (Mon) 19:16:00 No. 2473
>>2456
Fuck you if you think something can't be criticized just because it's free.
Anonymous 04/05/2018 (Thu) 11:15:50 No. 2480
>>2473
Y'know, there's a little thing called *constructive criticism*, in which you not only point out what's wrong but how to fix it. Try it sometime while trying not to sound like a complete ass about it.
Anonymous 04/25/2018 (Wed) 06:15:54 No. 2531
Bobo, please continue your work on Alice the Fat Cheerleader. The world needs more chubby cheer milfs
Anonymous 04/25/2018 (Wed) 07:09:27 No. 2532
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>>2531
>tfw bobo wanted to collab with you but you haven't heard back from him
Anonymous 04/25/2018 (Wed) 20:54:01 No. 2536
Does anyone know if mollycoddles likes this storyline? It'd be really cool if he let the moms get in on the gain for real
Anonymous 04/30/2018 (Mon) 14:34:15 No. 2544
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>>2536
Well I guess that answers that question…
Anonymous 04/30/2018 (Mon) 14:56:08 No. 2545
>>2544
Bobo isn't Mollycoddles, though…?
Anonymous 04/30/2018 (Mon) 16:12:46 No. 2546
>>2545
Bobo starts and stops projects all the time but he never announces it. I think Molly didn't like it so he decided to stop writing
Bobo the Hobo 05/01/2018 (Tue) 02:25:23 No. 2547
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>>2544
>>2546
I think you're looking WAY too into this one, dude.

Honestly, the reason that I'm stopping is that I haven't heard back from Molly. I've asked her a couple times about notes on the characters that I'm working with, as well as the direction that I'd like to take the story, and she just hasn't responded to any of my notes. So without any feedback on these characters, I'm kind've at a loss as to where to go.

I'll admit that it's a dumb reason. It's pretty disheartening if you want the truth! I really like what I've done here, but I respect Molly's authority and input on her characters.

TL;DR, I do what I want.
Vader7476 05/02/2018 (Wed) 13:54:47 No. 2551
>>2547

Yo buddy, hope you've been well.

You can reply here or send me an email on writing.com. What did you want to know about characters and other things? Next time I talk to her I can ask her a few things, she's a very busy person and I have no doubt she probably read your questions and forgot about them, haha. You're the man, and I loved writing with you!
Anonymous 05/02/2018 (Wed) 21:29:19 No. 2554
considering all the cow stuff in Buttercombe, I'm surprised there hasn't been some spill-over into Alice where someone convinces Laurie that her boobs would get bigger if she took lactation pills.
Bobo the Hobo 05/02/2018 (Wed) 22:16:19 No. 2555
>>2551
That's very kind of you, I'll hit you up onsite.
Anonymous 05/03/2018 (Thu) 05:33:27 No. 2557
>>2555
Quick couple questions, and I probably already know the answer to this but:

When do you ever really feel like adding onto your own interactives, either of your own volition or from the few write nights you post asking for suggestions? Seems once in a blue moon (though I understand getting burnt out on the same content and wanting something fresh)

And, have you ever thought of stockpiling the suggestions from those write nights so that you might have some stuff as backup when you want to write but don't know what about?
Bobo the Hobo 05/03/2018 (Thu) 20:49:28 No. 2567
>>2557
>Okay, this actually turned out WAY longer than I intended. Sorry!
I'm not going to lie when I say that it's definitely me getting burnt out. But it's also a weird mix of my own crappy luck and my demanding job-college-girlfriend schedule. I just don't have the time to write like I used to!

I've been writing for Buttercombe Academy for more than six years now, and in the meantime I've also been doing stuff for Mel, Daven's Port, and various other stories. Since Writing.com's policies have changed, a lot of the people that I've worked with over the years have turned away from the site (though thankfully not their support!) and part of the fun is bouncing off of everyone.

I believe I said it earlier in this thread (or was that oldbbw-chan?) a few months back that I find it harder to write for teenaged characters these days. The restrictions in storytelling that I put on some of these stories are a bit hard to get around sometimes when I'm just not feeling it. Not so much Super-Sized, because I have a lot more freedom to do what I want, at the cost of a "constant" cast of characters to play around with.

H O W E V E R, I do my best to stay up to date with everything, and I'm actually working on something of a Capstone story about Buttercome Academy. I still try to write original stories about characters where there isn't quite so much lore like my Life of Haley series on DeviantArt.

So I guess the reason that I like writing for other stories lately is that I feel that I don't have to prop everything up. It's just sort've there and I can jump right in.
Bobo the Hobo 05/03/2018 (Thu) 20:53:06 No. 2568
>>2557
Sorry, forgot about the other half of that.

Anyway, I do store most of the suggestions on a word doc that I look at when I get dry. I look at it every time I sit down to write on something other than my serious work. A lot of it is stuff that I really want to get to, I'm just lacking motivation and/or creativity to do it.

But it's all there and saved!
Anonymous 05/04/2018 (Fri) 22:11:29 No. 2580
This one's interesting and fairly young.

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2143736-LGBT-Male--Female-Weight-GainExpansion
Anonymous 05/16/2018 (Wed) 05:30:58 No. 2624
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So, anybody else run into this little feature yet?

I'm hoping that it's just some kind of glitch on my end or something so I figured I'd ask, but it seems like whenever I copy/paste a chapter from writing.com into a word document now, it turns it into some kind of read only file that I can't even save to my computer.

I like to save backup copies of the original chapters when I quality edit my interactive, so this is making it a pain in the ass. This is also going to make anyone's plans to move their interactives to another site a hell of a lot more difficult than it already is.

Please tell me I'm just an idiot and fucking something up or there's a workaround. I really hope I'm just overreacting.
Anonymous 05/16/2018 (Wed) 10:59:14 No. 2625
>>2624
I think its an error with the this specific word doc.
Go to properties and then permissions on the document to see if theres something up with it.
Anonymous 05/17/2018 (Thu) 00:37:25 No. 2629
>>2625
Yeah, looks like it was some kind of technical fuck up! Well thank god I'm just being a dumbass. No idea how I did it yesterday, but not having this problem anymore.
Anonymous 05/22/2018 (Tue) 16:00:54 No. 2640
Loving the new Hannah chapters in Buttercombe!
Anonymous 05/28/2018 (Mon) 14:08:18 No. 2661
Can we give some love to this fantastic story? https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1911783-Madisons-Freshman-15
Anonymous 06/12/2018 (Tue) 00:34:22 No. 2731
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Huh, I had absolutely no idea that Bobo had managed to preserve St. Consumpta's within the Buttercombe universe. Not to mention Caroline Dobbins.
Anonymous 06/12/2018 (Tue) 12:16:41 No. 2733
Latest chapter mentions Rachel Elvers needing to be hauled out with a crane at graduation? Sign me the fuck up for that
Anonymous 06/24/2018 (Sun) 07:07:45 No. 2769
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>Bobo returns to Alice Moms story
Anonymous 06/27/2018 (Wed) 05:48:49 No. 2782
>>2769
>by immediately dropping the mom plot to focus on fucking Jen

Wow yeah, totally mom stuff going on.
Anonymous 06/27/2018 (Wed) 18:07:18 No. 2785
>>2782
Hasn't Jen been gaining weight through out the story though? His newest chapters make it seem like she's just going to be a side story to the moms
Anonymous 06/27/2018 (Wed) 23:21:10 No. 2786
>>2785
Well that’s really weird considering >>2547
Anonymous 06/28/2018 (Thu) 03:54:33 No. 2787
Going back through old Buttercombe storylines, I notice that Maria Espanosa has never gotten her own route. She's so enjoyable in some of the other storylines that it's a shame she's never had one of her own.

On that note, what are all the storylines where she appears? I know she's got a cameo in Jen's story and had a big role in that abortive Hannah storyline where she TA'd for Ashley Knight.
Anonymous 07/01/2018 (Sun) 04:04:03 No. 2810
>Turning her mom into a bottomless pit is having adverse effects on Laurie…

I know the focus is supposed to be on the moms but I would really like some gaining action focused on just Laurie and moonchild
Vader7476 07/03/2018 (Tue) 14:49:14 No. 2819
>>2810

Was thinking of adding something, what might you like to see?
Anonymous 07/03/2018 (Tue) 16:00:14 No. 2821
>>2819
Laurie getting really fat in her attempts at making her mom gain weight so they both wind up the biggest in their social circles
Vader7476 07/03/2018 (Tue) 16:32:03 No. 2822
>>2821

Anything specific other than that?
Anonymous 07/03/2018 (Tue) 23:23:38 No. 2825
>>2822
Not really. Those are just my two favorite characters
Anonymous 07/04/2018 (Wed) 16:13:34 No. 2828
>>2825
Man, talk about vague…
>>2822
If you`re taking suggestions, I would love to see more Abida fattening the Belmontes. I just like enablers. I think she apeared in one of the latest chapters

Some clothes exploding are always nice.
Anonymous 07/06/2018 (Fri) 23:38:10 No. 2841
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1819934-Alice-the-Fat-Cheerleader/map/111111111111111112112312212111112121

I feel like Bobo has really mastered the art of having literally nothing happen but still being able to make my dick as hard as diamonds
Anonymous 07/20/2018 (Fri) 19:04:11 No. 2878
Whoever wrote those Susan and Rebecca updates on Your Fat Family needs to keep that story line going. That was some of the best writing for Susan I've read since the Onion days.
Anonymous 07/23/2018 (Mon) 04:19:52 No. 2883
>>2878
link?
Anonymous 08/03/2018 (Fri) 18:18:18 No. 2900
>>2828
>Abida
Yeah, she's a really fun character
MrTattersTheClown 08/11/2018 (Sat) 21:45:59 Id:9d5f69 No. 2912
I just wish this site let free members view more than three chapters of a story. There's not much point to getting anything less than a basic paid membership if free members can't read anything.
Anonymous 08/12/2018 (Sun) 01:51:57 Id:88ba63 No. 2913
>>2912
Apparently the site owner was retarded enough to think he could make a living running the site and has been super salty about ad blocking. I give it six months before he shuts the site down entirely at this rate.
Anonymous 08/19/2018 (Sun) 23:51:11 Id:ca9041 No. 2932
I do wish that someone would finish that one long Jenny Walker thread in Buttercombe. I suppose this is a selfish wish: that thread, where Sara shows up and Jen gets enormous while also falling deeply into denial, was the first thing I ever read from Buttercombe. It would be fun to see someone finish it off.
FC Punk 08/20/2018 (Mon) 00:12:04 Id:f52b64 No. 2933
Vader if your lurking here I just wanna say, great work on your recent Alice chapters.
Vader7476 08/25/2018 (Sat) 11:55:23 Id:66f5b7 No. 2945
>>2933

Thank you! Are there things you like more than others? Any ideas about where a branch might lead or just general things you might like to see?
FC Punk 08/25/2018 (Sat) 17:19:39 Id:50b4a9 No. 2948
>>2945
Your thing you have going with Laurie and Alice's mom is amazing, the teasing and humiliation is very hot. That's what I like most, if you continue doing that, I'll be a happy reader.
Anonymous 08/30/2018 (Thu) 12:11:33 Id:b30331 No. 2975
Can anyone suggest any interactives involving characters getting fat through magic or science? Preferrably ones where they're whining about how fat they've gotten and where they struggle with their newfound weights.
Anonymous 09/03/2018 (Mon) 01:11:53 Id:d8348d No. 2979
>>1407
>Buttercombe II

The absolute madman! He's gone and done it!
Anonymous 09/21/2018 (Fri) 21:39:36 Id:ca9041 No. 3024
I know that Buttercombe makes mention of St. Consumpta's, and of Carolyn Dobbins. Do either of them actually make an appearance in the interactive anywhere? I'm feeling nostalgic.
Anonymous 09/22/2018 (Sat) 20:46:03 Id:dce7b0 No. 3029
I don't suppose anyone remembers a interactive story. Where the main character has a device that connects to his stomach and the other end to someone else. Transferring the fat or boobs, I remember his aunt asking for him to hold her weight while she goes on a date.

Anyone know of a interactive like this?
Anonymous 09/29/2018 (Sat) 15:31:38 Id:f5378a No. 3050
>>2979
You better cite that source. Don't you play with my emotions.
Anonymous 10/03/2018 (Wed) 01:26:22 Id:d8348d No. 3053
>>3050
https://www.writing.com/main/profile/notebook/psuedophobic

Posted about it early September.
Saving Anonymous 10/04/2018 (Thu) 01:49:44 Id:d386e6 No. 3059
Is there a easy way to save a interactive story without having to go chapter by chapter?
Anonymous 10/08/2018 (Mon) 18:45:04 Id:c2586d No. 3071
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1933610-Office-fatty/map/13111221221112122112221111122112121111111121121111121121112112

I'm really happy to see this particular branch of Office Fatty continue to get attention. Mostly because it keeps alive my dream of Christina eventually becoming the fattest of the girls.
Anonymous 10/10/2018 (Wed) 03:17:49 Id:f5378a No. 3073
Please for the love of god somebody continue that thread on Alice where the moms get fat.

Not nearly enough milf stuff in general but that shit was done surprisingly well while it lasted.
Buttercombe and Height Dr. Faustus 10/12/2018 (Fri) 12:47:31 Id:b884b0 No. 3074
Buttercombe II is here!

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2171199-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Growing-Girls-II/

And I have a tangential question for readers from the US:
as I was getting ready to post my character Carolina, I wanted to give her a little above average height, settling on 5'10.

Luckily I checked other students before and found out she'd be towering over them.

Why is this? I consider anything below 5'6 to be small, 5'9 is average and tall starts beyond 6 feet. What are your benchmarks?

Thanks for your replies.
Anonymous 10/13/2018 (Sat) 09:48:09 Id:b985dc No. 3076
>>3074
The average woman is around 5'4. Your categories are way off real life.
Dr. Faustus 10/14/2018 (Sun) 14:58:50 Id:b884b0 No. 3077
I suppose I should have stressed it more - I am not American, this is why I am asking.

So what do you perceive to be correct?
Anonymous 10/14/2018 (Sun) 17:28:58 Id:50103d No. 3078
>>3077
Not him, and also not american, but you're probably looking at a 3 inch window either side for "average", with 5'5" being the centre - any woman above 5'8" is pretty tall, below 5'2" is short.

5'9" is near average male height (depending on where you live)
Anonymous 10/14/2018 (Sun) 22:52:36 Id:50103d No. 3079
>>3074
>>3053
Looks interesting, to be sure!

I also really like the idea Bobo posits about Ms Polluck
Shannon Polluck
Puppet Headmistress
No real power or authority
Has been babied and spoiled by Yeng
No larger ambitions than her stomach

> Has been babied and spoiled by Yeng
May have to write something for this

• Dr. Fukuda Hinamizawa
“Vice-Principal”
All the power and authority
Guides Buttercombe to be a better fit for Yeng ideals
Handles pretty much everything.
Anonymous 10/26/2018 (Fri) 23:10:14 Id:f608c5 No. 3094
This site is pretty cancerous, I doubt there is, but any way around the "temporarily unavailable"?
drano 10/28/2018 (Sun) 05:53:31 Id:fdf9a4 No. 3098
is there a location where the longest or best story lines have been compiled?
between the resource limitations and dead end chapters, it's annoying the crap out of me.
Anonymous 11/03/2018 (Sat) 08:54:36 Id:50103d No. 3110
>>3079
>See there's a Polluck storyline just beginning
>The writer can barely into English
>There's 3 options, so they're a Writing member as well
Dammit
Anonymous 11/03/2018 (Sat) 18:28:48 Id:ad01b7 No. 3115
god this Baynotch345 guy in Buttercombe 2 is fucking garbage
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2171199-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Growing-Girls-II/map/1123221211212
Anonymous 11/04/2018 (Sun) 12:35:47 Id:50103d No. 3116
>>3110
>>3115
Does the owner of BC II have QC editing powers?
- Anonymous 11/04/2018 (Sun) 15:26:13 Id:14d5d9 No. 3117
This Baynotch dude is at it again. Keeps on dropping hot trash
Anonymous 11/11/2018 (Sun) 01:29:39 Id:d8348d No. 3129
>>3121
I was wondering why the story felt familiar! I think this is a good idea.
Anonymous 11/14/2018 (Wed) 07:43:56 Id:966daa No. 3142
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For those interested, I create an writing.com archive using wayback machine and bulk upload. It's not perfect, but I was able to archive almost all the stories current on the site.

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1No4zjBzV81O9G3lNx6Z6ib3idqIdJEH_KCAcVkO0VnE/edit#gid=1562740179
Anonymous 11/16/2018 (Fri) 05:01:09 Id:455551 No. 3147
>>3142
thank you man. the BS about them not having enough bandwidth to display text has been rather irritating.
Anonymous 11/19/2018 (Mon) 15:36:41 Id:49df08 No. 3149
Getting the writing bug, anything anyone wants to see continued in Buttercombe, Office Fatty, or Alice the Fat Cheerleader?
Anonymous 11/19/2018 (Mon) 22:37:08 Id:c231ec No. 3152
>>3149
A continuation of this storyline would be nice:

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1933610-Office-fatty/map/131112212211121221122211111221121211111111211211111211211121121111

It's always been my hope that, eventually, Christina would wind up as the very fattest woman in the office, and it seems like things in this branch are trending that direction. I'd like to see that continue.
Wowee 11/22/2018 (Thu) 00:34:09 Id:6f8867 No. 3160
Hey BBW-Chan let's get really interactive! Maybe we can turn into a weekly thing? No promises though; Going of this chapter what should happen next?

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2171199-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Growing-Girls-II/map/121233

https://www.strawpoll.me/16892750

Ill check in tomorrow night and try to write a chapter based on the most popular answer. No telling how quickly I'll have it up though because I've actually gotten slower as a writer. :(
Anonymous 11/23/2018 (Fri) 19:50:56 Id:2d54f3 No. 3161
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2041198-Super-Sized-the-Mel-Carlyle-Story/map/1431132311123212132212211212221331123213131111213

Can we get some more Mel chapters going? Always been interested in this path if Sally really did string Rhonda along for several months/years while feeding Mel behind her back
Anonymous 12/01/2018 (Sat) 15:28:57 Id:2d54f3 No. 3205
>>3202
What did they do now?
Anonymous 12/01/2018 (Sat) 18:50:26 Id:027b96 No. 3206
>>3205
my guess is the "resource limitations temporary prevent access to interactives for free-members" which is more like the admin is forcing you to get a paid membership by blocking access to interactive chapters until you do
Anomynous 12/06/2018 (Thu) 19:25:03 Id:5849ef No. 3211
>>3206
You are correct. The delay used to be bad, but now it's absurd. There's also a shitload of links to buying premium memberships on that page now too.
Anonymous 01/01/2019 (Tue) 17:46:45 Id:baeb64 No. 3235
So does anyone read Dr. Faustus' Daven's Port chapters? I did, but after a while I really lost interest in them. There's barely any weight gain or fat-related content, and instead is a political drama. There's nothing wrong about having some political drama in your fat fetish stuff, but it feels more like a political drama with some fat themes, rather than the other way around. Does anybody else have any thoughts?
Anonymous 01/02/2019 (Wed) 01:57:51 Id:f8660a No. 3237
>>3235
I definitely agree. It seems like a lot of storylines in the more popular interactives end up that way. They're well-written, but there's barely anything kinky in them.
Anonymous 01/02/2019 (Wed) 19:03:06 Id:5a0154 No. 3241
This storyline looks promising
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1167851-Your-Fat-Family/map/1243122
Anonymous 01/03/2019 (Thu) 12:18:59 Id:494f2c No. 3244
>>3235
The first time he did it I was a little more forgiving because it actually had some weight gain content and it made a bit more sense for the political drama (dakota was running or helping dina run for mayor or something) but yeah his political drama storylines are a bit stale with hardly any kinky. He writes well, but I feel he focuses too much on the drama aspect
Dr. Faustus 01/09/2019 (Wed) 13:04:21 Id:b884b0 No. 3257
Interesting. After finishing the Alternate Worlds branch I actually had two complaints it had two much WG and too little plot.

As to the current storyline:
1) I want plot; a rich, believable setting, when I read. And I write what I like to read.
2) It is overgrown and needs pruning, but that is the peril of a serialised novel and I am a writer, not an editor.
3) A lot of what you call drama is actually just another kink, greed for power. There are more things in the world than weight gain
:-)
Anonymous 01/19/2019 (Sat) 16:23:13 Id:11f0a1 No. 3311
Relevant bump: Bobo updated the DC Comics interactive for the first time in forever.

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1569620-DC-Comics-Weight-Gain/map/15533111111112111221211211222211111111211121221222121211222112112212111111211221212113
Anonymous 02/25/2019 (Mon) 18:37:13 Id:89fa34 No. 3451
So hey, long time lurker here, I decided to bite the bullet and do a bit for one of my favorite interactives on the site.

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1213992-Hesper/map/155211221221121112222222121

It's a bit light on the kinky stuff because it's more of a test run for a first time go, but otherwise if you can wrestle enough with the site to see it I hope you like it. :)
Anonymous 02/28/2019 (Thu) 07:49:41 Id:89fa34 No. 3463
Well, someone liked it enough that they gifted me membership. Whoever you are, thank you. ^_^
Anonymous 03/01/2019 (Fri) 18:56:56 Id:89fa34 No. 3479
Aaaaand I goofed up the chapter title. I think Spaghetti Western is the only one who can make edits, if possible could you change the title of the Chapter "Celeste breaks five hundred...but some of us ar..." to "Must have cookies!" ?
Anonymous 03/06/2019 (Wed) 23:35:25 Id:11dcf5 No. 3513
Not sure if he'll see this, but Bobo, keep up the good work with the Mix n Matches, loving all of the rounds so far. Good luck with completing commissions and such too man, hope those are gonna be posted somewhere
Anonymous 03/07/2019 (Thu) 04:14:58 Id:89fa34 No. 3514
Agreed, Bobo's mix and matches are always a lot of fun.
Anonymous 03/07/2019 (Thu) 23:19:51 Id:c2586d No. 3518
Anyone else really intrigued by the Rachel Conrad storyline in Buttercombe II? Seems like there's a potential for a Stepford Wives scenario there, where Rachel really becomes the thing she's pretending to be.
MightyHalberd 03/10/2019 (Sun) 08:09:12 Id:89fa34 No. 3527
So I'm probably being way too ambitious with what I'm doing in Daven's Port, so by all means if you think I'm overshooting let me know. Feels kinda silly putting that much thought into this. >.>
Anonymous 03/11/2019 (Mon) 18:11:54 Id:5d5f57 No. 3529
>>3527

Personally, I'm digging it. Not enough Superhero WG stuff
MightyHalberd 03/14/2019 (Thu) 03:30:25 Id:89fa34 No. 3534
>>3532
Very cool, I've been looking at it myself. Can't wait to see where you take things.
Anonymous 03/21/2019 (Thu) 01:11:11 Id:d8348d No. 3547
Just wanted to say that Almacia's new chapters are really good!
Anonymous 03/23/2019 (Sat) 00:43:27 Id:0093ba No. 3554
>>3532
Really enjoying your work! That piece has always been one of my favorites on writing so always happy to see people add to it.
Bobo the Hobo 03/23/2019 (Sat) 04:49:09 Id:4639be No. 3556
>>3532
I'm also enjoying it very much. If you're ever down for a collaboration, let me know!
Anonymous 03/24/2019 (Sun) 08:40:16 Id:54bdbf No. 3559
>New Violet chapter
>It's going down the SSS route
Thank you based Bobo.
Anonymous 03/26/2019 (Tue) 03:28:37 Id:2185b0 No. 3560
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2185965-Marvels-Spider-Man-Female-WG/map/121

Damnit I love when Bobo does comic book shit. Been playing a lot of Spiderman recently and this interactive came at just the right time
Greylite 04/08/2019 (Mon) 22:12:15 Id:d386e6 No. 3597
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1213992-Hesper/map/151331121112212212112
Recently tried to write a chapter, looking for some critic. Thank you for reading in advance. Sorry if it's bad in advance,
Batman76 04/10/2019 (Wed) 02:12:40 Id:327e3f No. 3603
Updated my heroines getting fat in the DC thread. It's also on curvage if you want a site that doesn't need 5000 reloads.
Anonymous 04/11/2019 (Thu) 04:07:24 Id:4cf027 No. 3604
>>3603
I really love what you`ve done so far, stellar job. I can`t belive "superheroine fattening others out of a kink" took so long to appear, sound obvious in hindsight.

Just one thing bothered me; the "choosing between ass and belly" thing. specially since there was no "fat all around" choice. I want an obese Wonder Woman, with a body overflowing with corpulence wherever it can fit; A huge belly and tits with thin legs and a flat ass sound way too weird, more like inflation than weight gain.

It`s my only complain, since the rest of the stuff is, once again, crazy good. specially the mental process of WW`s slow downfall into decadence. Keep up the amazing work.
Anonymous 04/11/2019 (Thu) 05:37:04 Id:491ba4 No. 3606
I'm trying to read buttercombe again, so I need some guidance. In which storylines do the girls (specially the students) gain the most weight? I remember reading a whole bunch of chapters centering around Arisa. How big do the other girls get compared to her?
Batman76 04/11/2019 (Thu) 21:06:32 Id:327e3f No. 3608
I'd love to put up more options but no way in hell am I giving money to writing.com for it.

But don't worry, Tits/stomach/arms/face will take the brunt, but the legs/ass/hips won't exactly shrink.
Anonymous 04/12/2019 (Fri) 03:42:25 Id:0093ba No. 3611
>>3603
Love this tale, also thanks for providing an alt source since writing.com can be aids at night when web traffic is high T.T. Shame evil Karen didn't win out but I guess good habits die hard huh =P
MightyHalberd 04/12/2019 (Fri) 04:58:18 Id:9825df No. 3612
>>3597
I'm relatively new myself so take my words with a grain of salt, but I think you did pretty well on this. There's an issue with grammar making it a bit hard to read in some places but overall you tell a good story, and your visual descriptions of course are pretty good too. Keep at it and continue improving your grammar, I'm interested in seeing more. c:
Batman76 04/12/2019 (Fri) 12:06:13 Id:327e3f No. 3615
>>3611

She ain't that good...

Or good, bad, she's the one with the fetish.
MightyHalberd 04/14/2019 (Sun) 08:11:23 Id:9825df No. 3620
Doin a bit more with the Daven's Port superhero stuff, and getting cute with my references, hope y'all like it. :P
Anonymous 04/25/2019 (Thu) 15:46:46 Id:e74bc1 No. 3634
debating on adding some chapters to the usually suspects (buttercombe, alice, etc)

would anyone be interested in some slob themes?
Anonymous 04/26/2019 (Fri) 09:28:13 Id:503b64 No. 3635
>>3634
As long as it's not just rammed in there yeah, slob can be great fun.
MightyHalberd 04/27/2019 (Sat) 06:00:01 Id:9825df No. 3638
>>3620
Not quite my thing outside of belches but I'm interested in seeing what you come up with. :)
Anonymous 04/29/2019 (Mon) 02:50:37 Id:c2586d No. 3640
>>3634
I like slob quite a bit, go for it. What specific storylines did you have in mind?
Method of choice Anonymous 05/07/2019 (Tue) 16:03:59 Id:d386e6 No. 3650
I was wondering, what's your guys method of writing? I just sit down and imagine where I want the chapter to finish then I look for some key points and write them down. Then I just kinda write and just put whatever comes to mind. Usually leading to a big mess of words lol. But what's your guys method of writing such good chapters?
MightyHalberd 05/10/2019 (Fri) 03:25:43 Id:bb4848 No. 3653
>>3650
That's not too different from how I write, pretty much starting with an idea and going from there mixed with throwing things at the wall to see if they stick. I'm fairly new myself so I don't really know if my method works either but going by some of the comments I've gotten no one's disappointed, at least.
Anonymous 05/28/2019 (Tue) 00:23:34 Id:a241ea No. 3709
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2021745-Gothams-Weighty-Women/map/1211112212113321

So apparently Bobo has his own DC interactive? He's put up a few chapters recently that are pretty good
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