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Ambidextrous Kynes 04/06/2018 (Fri) 01:38:15 No. 2481
Hey! I'm writing a new Fantasy Weight gain Series over on Deviant art that I'm looking for some feedback on.

I'm four parts in and I'm thinking it's going to shape up to be at least a ten part series.

It features Magical Weight gain, Humiliation, clothes ripping, and an attempt at an engaging, overarching plot.

Here's a link to the first chapter:
http://fav.me/dc6u8e4

but the weight gain doens't actually start until chapter two:
http://fav.me/dc75aln
I just finished reading chapter four (skipped ahead because I wanted to see if something this long was going to be worth it), and I loved it!

I think what I'm most interested in was the mention of how her new size is just inherently more lewd, and I do hope there's reactions and comments from other people who see her about that. I also appreciated the shaving part and its consequences.

Looking forward to more.
>>2488

Wow! Thanks for the high praise. I know the story's a little girthy and it's liable to become more so. Knowing that you were cautious due to its size but still felt it was worth reading makes me feel a lot more confident about my writing quality.
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I'm not sure how you all might feel about a long-form story, but I just finished chapter 6 and I've still got quite a bit more planned.

Here's a breakdown of the story so far.

Chapter 1: The Tournament:
http://fav.me/dc6u8e4

Chapter 2: Truth and Consequences:
http://fav.me/dc75aln

Chapter 3: Coming to Grips
http://fav.me/dc7j8bf

Chapter 4: Mourning Routine
http://fav.me/dc803u2

Chapter 5: Passive Resistance
http://fav.me/dc8hw4l

Chapter 6: Rival Arrival
http://fav.me/dc8sovo

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